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书面表达讲练系列

篇1：书面表达讲练系列（1）

(一)书信

概述

书信是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交际的工具，也是高考书面表达中常见的考试文体。由于民族语言和习惯上的差异，英语信件在书写格式及表达方式上与汉语不大一样，有些地方迥然不同。本章将向大家介绍一般格式及各种常见信件，如家信、祝贺信、道歉信及自荐信等。

一般格式

英文书信的构成可分为8个部分：

信头(Heading), 日期(Date), 收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address), 称呼(Salutation), 信文(Body of the letter), 结束语(Complimentary close), 署名(Signature), 附言(P. S.)

(1)信头(Heading)

信头是指发信人的单位名称或地址。一般情况下发信人只需把自己的地址写(打字，手写均可)在信的右上角，离开信纸的顶头约1英寸，占二三行或四行均可，格式如下：①齐头式 ②缩进式

注意：写地址的次序与中文不同，应先写门牌号码街道，然后城市和国名。写地址时采用齐头或缩进式，以及每行后要不要加标点符号，都没有固定的规定。如写给经常往来的亲友，这项地址也可以省略。

(2)日期(Date): 写日期注意下列各点：①年份应写全，例如不能用“99”来代替“”；②月份应写英文名称，除May, July外，可用缩写，如：Sep., Oct.。但不要用数字来代替，如7／4／99 或7， 4， 99，因为在英国此日期代表 7th April，1999，而美国则代表4th July，1999。 ③日期可用1，2，3，4…11，12…21，22…31等，也可用lst，2nd，3rd，4th…11th，21th…22nd…31st等。

日期的几种写法：a．July 7， b．1st October, 1998 c．30 Nov., d．Sep. 3rd, 1999

④特别注意英文书信日期应紧接着写信人地址下一行，不能像写中文书信那样写在书信签名之后，这是很多学生的常见错误。

(3)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)

写信人的地址和日期写好以后，接着就要写收信人的姓名和地址，一般的事务信件或给较生疏的朋友的信件要写，而在给极熟的朋友的信中则可省去。这一项写在日期下一行的左上角。收信人姓名写一行，收信人地址可分两行或三行写，和写信人的地址一样，上下可取齐，也可以向右缩进。在姓名前一般要加上称号，称号因人而异。

①对普通男子用Mr；②对未婚女子用Miss；③对已婚女子用Mrs，对婚姻状况不明确的通常用Ms(后跟本人姓)；

④对男子用Master；⑤对教授或博士(医生)用Prof．或Dr．

(4)称呼(Salutation)

称呼指的是信文开头的那种称呼，如Dear , Mr, Uncle，各种称呼因人而异。在称呼后面一般是用逗号，但也有用冒号的。现归纳如下：①对父母、兄弟、姐妹等；a．Father, b．My dear Mother, c. Dear Sister, d. Dear Tom,

②对亲戚：a．My dear Auntie, b．Dear Cousin, c．My dear Cousin,

③对朋友、同学a．My dear friend, b．Dear Mr Jackson, c．My dear Mr Jackson, d．Dear Sir,

④对未婚女子：a．Dear Miss Luce, b．My dear Miss Luce,

⑤对一般女子，不论是否结婚：a．Madame, b．Dear Madame,

⑥对已婚女子：a．Dear Mrs Helen Jackson, b．My dear Mrs Helen Jackson,

⑦对公司、工厂、学校等：a．Dear Sirs, b．Sirs, c．Gentlemen,

(5)信文(Body of the letter)

信文是信件的主体部分，也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼下两行开始。信的开头第一个字母通常和称呼开头第一个词平齐。也有往后退四个或八个字母的。下面介绍一些开头语和结尾语。

开头语

①相当于中文的“敬君者”。

a．I beg to inform you that…

b．I beg to take this opportunity to inform you that …

c．I have the honor to address you that…

d． I write in a hurry to inform you that…

e．I have the pleasure to tell you that…

f. I'm very much delighted to inform you that…

②相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信，一切知悉”。

a．I thank you very much for your letter of May 20th …

b．Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks.

c．It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind of May 20th.

d．In answer to your kind letter of May 20th, I deeply regret that …

e．I have received your kind letter of May 20th.

f．Words can't express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning.

g．Your letter dated May 20th has been received.

结尾语

采用三种方法：

①采用分词短语：句末用逗号，不用句号。例如：

a．Waiting for your good news,

b．Looking forward to your early reply,

c．Hoping to hear from you soon,

d．Hoping you are enjoying good health,

e．Regretting that I can't give you a more favorite reply,

f．Regretting the trouble I'm causing you,

g．Wishing you every success,

h．Wishing you a pleasant journey,

i．Wishing you a happy New Year,

②采用介词短语，例如：

a．With best regards,

b．With kind regards to your family,

c．With best wishes to you and yours,

d．With best wishes for your success and happiness,

e．With best wishes for your success in your new field of work,

f．With best regards and wishing you all success,

g．With warmest regards,

h．With best regards to you and your family,

i．With the season's greetings,

③采用完整句子：

a．We are waiting for your good news.

b．I hope to receive your early reply.

c．We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

d．I thank you very much for your services, and wish your continued success.

(6)结束语(Complimentary Close)

结束语的一般写法如下：

① 业务书信常用：Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours truly, Truly yours, Sincerely yours,

② 公函常用：Yours respectfully, Respectfully yours, Yours sincerely,

③私人书信常用：Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately, Yours ever,

④给亲戚朋友的信常用：Love, All my love, Your(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin , etc.

Your affectionate nephew, lovingly, Lovingly yours,

(7)署名(Signature)

下面是署名的例子：

① 个人署名：truly, W. J. Watson ,Yours faithfully,

②公司署名：Legend Computer Company, Wang Lin ,Sales Manager

(8)附言(Postscript)

发信人有时在写完信后又想起一件比较重要的事没有说，可以在信末署名下面几行写上， P. S. (Postscript

的缩写)，然后将要补充的话写上。不过要注意写信时最好将事情一次讲清楚，尽量少用或不用P.S.。

以上英文书信结构8个部分在信内的位置如下：

精选范文

①

101 Hankou Road

Shanghai, China

12th Feb., 1982

The Registrar

Oxford University

England

Dear Sir,

I wish enter an Oxford College to study for an Arts degree in English Literature. I enclose a list of my qualifications, and you will see what I have been studying at…University for the last three years. I have, of course, No English examination qualifications. Could you kindly suggest which of the various colleges would be most likely to receive my application so that I can apply to them individually? Looking forward to an early reply, I remain,

Yours truly,

Denis Green

P. S. Kindly send me a syllabus.

②生日贺信

Dear Bob,

Tomorrow is your birthday. I imagine your family is planning a celebration for you. I write this letter to offer you my heartiest congratulations and best wishes for merry returns of the day. With my sincere wishes for your success.

Yours truly,

Tom

③圣诞节及新年贺信

Dear Mary and Helen,

A merry Christmas and a Happy Year to you! Allow me to offer you Season Greetings. May the New Year will bring you a bright and prosperous(繁荣) future. My family who are well and happy, join me in my good wishes.

Yours very sincerely,

Barbara

④感谢信

Dear Sir,

With feelings of deep gratitude I address you to give my thanks for your noble and generous efforts by which my son was saved from the lake. Surely, if it had not been for your help, my son would not be alive now. I shall be most happy to have a chance of serving you in return. I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Bing

⑤

Dear Harry,

I expect to leave Shanghai for Nanjing next Monday and intend to stay there for a month or so. You told me you had been there for a long time and knew a lot of people. I, therefore, shall thank you if you will kindly let me have one or two letters of introduction to them as I am an entire stranger in that place.

Yours,

John

⑥申请信(申请作为研究助理)

Dear Sir,

I'm a graduate student in the Physics Department of Qinghua University. Recently I read that you are hiring an assistant to do research on solar physics. As you can see from my re' sume' (简历).I have had experience in this field. I'm very interested in your project and hope to work with you. My telephone number is 83745102. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Wang Ling

练习

①假定你的名字是李桦，你给World Youth杂志寄去了你的姓名住址，征求笔友。下面是你收到的一封信，请给此信写一封约100字的回信。(1999)

16 South Street

Epping T33 B54 UK

6th Jan.,1999

Dear Li Hua,

I got your name and address from “World Youth”and I would like to be your penfriend. I am a boy of 14. I live with my parents in Epping, a town near London. I go to the Epping School. I'm in form 2. This term we have maths, physics, biology, history, English and physical education. For my foreign language I take French. I would like to take Chinese only they don't teach it here. After school I like playing football and I am on the school team. I also like collecting stamps. Can you send me some Chinese stamps? Please write and tell me about yourself and your school.

Your new friend,

Alex Baker

②英语杂志 BBC ENGLISH有一专栏“Can I help you?”专门解答读者提出的英语问题。专栏编者叫Jill Welfare(女)。该杂志社地址是：BBC English Magazine, P. O. Box76, Bush House, London WC2B 4PH, U. K. 假定你叫李红，是北京第一中学高三学生。现由你写一封信到该杂志社请教以下两个问题：

a．你的老师认为应该说：“He is taller than I.”但你听到有人说：“He is taller than me.”你想知道哪个对及为什么？

b．你想知道further和farther在意义上、用法上是完全一样，还是有什么不同？

注意：a．只要把该问题的问题问清楚，不要翻译试题说明。(字数：80～120)

b．不要在信中使用自己的真实姓名和地址。

参考词语: have…to ask mean the same thing

③假定你的名字是魏勇，住在北京东长安街233号。

今年6月份，美国青年学生Jack Gooper随青年访华团访问北京。最后一天在青年宫举行告别会(farewell party)。你参加了，坐在Jack Cooper旁边，散会时你和他互相拿错了对方的笔记本(notebook)。事后你翻看笔记本，发现他的名字地址，才知道拿错了。现在你把笔记本寄回去给他，写一封简单的信说明，同时请他把你的笔记本按你所给的地址寄来给你。(字数：80～140)

参考词语: take…by mistake look into by post at the address

④假定你叫李霞，是天津市第二中学高三年级学生，你在阅读英文中遇到一些问题，4月25日你写信给复旦大学的王教授，请他抽出一个小时的时间来为你解答学习英语中的一些问题，请王教授安排时间和地点。(字数：80～100)

参考词语: senior grade three appreciate spare

⑤下面是某中外合资企业刊登在China Daily上的一则招聘广告。

Office secretary, with experience in book-keeping, Type-writing

Public relations, operating PC= (personal computer)

Address, age, health and education

A950 Tomas Office

请根据广告中所提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况，用80个左右单词写一封自我介绍信，联系地址A950 Tomas Office。假定你的名字是王华，通信处是威海市45信箱(P.O. Box 45)时间为7月8日，注意书信格式。参考词语be fit for ,in good health ,teach oneself,

⑥假定你叫林华，是学生会干事，你于8月9日写信给在京的美国朋友Charlie。你和Charlie自春节以来没有见面，他刚刚从南京旅行回来，向他问好。为了庆祝五四青年节，学生会计划举行各种活动，将召开晚会，举行座谈会，请历史老师讲中国青年运动史，并拟请Charlie介绍现在美国青年的生活、学习及工作情况。

注意：信件包括上述全部内容，可适当增加细节，使全文连贯。

参考词语青年节：The Youth Day 春节：The Spring Festival 学生会：The Student Union

⑦假设你是环宇丝绸贸易公司(Huanyu Silk Trade Company)人事部主任Maty Walter，请用英语给一位名叫Li

Gang的求职者写一封100词左右的回信，通知他公司经理将与他面谈。写信日期为2月8日。信的内容要点如下：面谈地点：经理办公室。面谈时间：3月18日，上午9点半。面谈内容：求职动机、特长及录用后的打算。

体检时间：面谈一周之后。录用与否：4月初告知。

参考词语: have a talk medical examination

⑧某进出口公司在报上登了一则广告，想招聘一名秘书，其条件如下：

年龄不超过28周岁，未婚；男性身高1.72米以上，女性身高1.60米以上；身体健康；大学毕业，会两门外国语者优先(但必须懂英文)；能进行计算机操作。假如你是李卫，想应聘，请根据上述要点写一封100字左右的求职信。

参考词语 ask for the job operate a computer

⑨假如你叫Mary, 你的朋友Jane生病了，主要是因为工作太辛苦，又缺乏锻炼。请你写一封信给她，劝她每天至少要运动一个小时，并告诉她；你明天休息，将去看望她。

注意写信格式。(字数：80～100)

⑩假定你的名字叫王红，你的朋友孙刚邀请你参加他的生日晚会，你不能去。请你给孙刚写封信，表示歉意，并说明理由：因要参加高考，没有办法答应。最后要表示祝贺并送上生日贺卡一张，你住在上海市长沙路192号，写信日期197月1日。

注意书信格式。(字数：80～100)

(11)假定你是英国学生(John)，在上海二中学习，于6月1日给Babara写信，谈谈伦敦与上海的不同，100～120字，内容如下：

伦敦上海

汽车靠左行汽车靠右行

很多人乘汽车上班多数人骑自行车上班

阴天多晴天多

一星期工作五天一星期工作五天

懂汉语人少懂英语的人多

学生较放松学生较勤奋

参考词语

气候：climate

(一)书信

① ××Middle School

Guangzhou, China

March 17, 1999

Dear Alex,

I've just received your postcard and I am very pleased with it.The city where I live is called Guangzhou. It is a big city in the south of China.The climate here is good. It is not so hot in summer and quite mild in winter, though it rains a lot in spring. There are flowers everywhere almost throughout the year. So we call Guangzhou“the Gity of Flowers”.Guangzhou is a famous and important city. Its industry is rather developed, and many meetings are held here.

Guangzhou has many places for sightseeing. For example,the Baiyun Mountain,the Yuexiu Park and the Cultural Park. If you come I'll show you around.I am looking forward to your coming.

Your friend,

Li Hua

Beijing

People's Republic of China

July, 1999

Ms/Miss Jill Welfare,

“Can I help you?”

BBC ENGLISH Magazine

P. O. Box 76, Bush House

London WC2B 4PH

U.K.

Dear MS/Miss Welfare,

I have two questions to ask you.1．I have heard some people say“He is taller than me.”instead of “He is taller

than I.” Which is correct? Can you please explain why?2．Do “further” and“farther” mean the same thing? If not, what is the difference? When do we use the one and when do we use the other? Will you please answer these questions for me? Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Hong

233 Dong Changan Street

Beijing

People's Republic of China

July 17, 1999

Dear Jack,

In June when you were visiting Beijing on the last day of your trip a farewell party was given at the Youth Palace. At the party I sat next to you. Then at the end when we went away we took each other's notebook by mistake. I discovered

this only afterwards when I looked into the notebook and found your name and address inside. I am now sending your notebook by post to you. Will you please send my notebook to me at the address which is given above? Thank you very much.I hope you will visit Beijing again soon.

Your Chinese friend,

Wei Yong

(4) No.2 Middle School

Tianjin

April 25, 1999

Dear Professor Wang,

I'm a senior Grade Three student. I study in Tianjin No.2 Middle School. I have some questions on my English reading. I'd like you to help me with them. I’ll appreciate it very much if you would kindly spare me an hour or so. And I'll be

very glad to receive your letter telling me when and where we shall get together.Hoping this won't trouble your too much.

Yours,

Li Xia

(5)P.O.Box45

Weihai City

July 8th, 1999

A950

Tomas Office

Dear Sir,

I've read your ad. in yesterday's China Daily. I feed I am fit for the job needed in your company. I'm 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school. I taught myself English for two years. I studied book-keeping, typewriting and public relations. I'm good at both operating personal computer and English in listening and speaking. I'm

interested in the position of a secretary.I want very much to be accepted by your company, I'll work hard if I can be a

member in your company.

Wanghua

(6) Aug 9th

Dear Charlie,

We haven't seen each other since the Spring Festival. I was told that you had just come back from Nanjing, and how about your trip? May 4 is The Youth Day in China. In order to celebrate it many activities will be held by the Student Union in our school. We plan to have a party and a talk. A history teacher will talk about the history of the Chinese Youth Movement. Since students are interested in how the young people in the United States are living, studying and working, I hope that you will come and tell us something abut it. We would appreciate it If you could come.I hope that we will meet soon.

With best wishes,

Yours truly,

Lin Hua

⑦

Huanyu Silk Trade Company

Feb. 8th,

Dear Li Gang,

Glad to have received your letter. I'd like to tell you that our manager is going to have a talk with you in his office at 9∶30 on the morning of March 18. Here are some questions you are expected to answer：Why do you want to work in our company? What are you good at? How many foreign languages do you know?What do you plan to do if you are employed?There will be a medical examination a week later. We'll let you know whether you will be employed or not at the beginning of April.Wish you good luck,

Yours sincerely,

Maty Walter

⑧

Oct 8， 1999

Dear sir,

After reading your advertisement for a secretary in today's newspaper. I want to ask for the job.I am Li Wei, 25 years old, male, and unmarried. I am 1.75 metres tall and I am healthy and strong. I graduated from Qinghua University three years ago. I have been an English teacher in No. 1 High School in Anyang, Henan Province since then. I'm good at English and my students like listening to me. I can also speak and write in French, and operate a computer and type very well.

I would like to be a secretary very much.I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Wei

⑨

April 30

My dear Jane,

I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you've got better now. You have been working so hard and have so little exercises This is very harmful to your health. I suggest you take at least one hour's exercises every

day.It will do you good. If you keep on doing exercises every day, you will certainly feel better. Tomorrow is a holiday. I'll come to see you.

With best wishes,

Truly yours,

Mary

(10) 192 Changsha Road Shanghai,

July 1st 1999

Dear Sun Gang,

Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party, but I'm afraid I can't come. I have so much homework to do. You know, I will have the college entrance examination next week. And it is so important to me. However, I'll be thinking of you alone. I am writing this letter and send you this birthday card to express my best wishes to you. I wish your party success and also wish you many happy returns.

Yours Truly,

Wang Hong

(11)The No.2 Middle School

Shanghai China

July 1st

Dear Babara,

It is Children's Day and I have a day off.I'm going to tell you something about China.In our country cars are driven on the left side of the road, but here on the right side. Many people of London go to work by car while most people in Shanghai go to work by bike. The climate of Shanghai is better than ours, which is fine for long But London has so many cloudy days. Workers in Shanghai work five days a week just as in London. Students here work hard at their lessons and a lot of people can speak English. It's a pity that students in our country don't make full use of time and few know Chinese.That's all for today. Please write to me.

Yours Lovely,

John

篇2：高考书面表达专练（第一节）

第一节

描写某个地方（Describing a place）

美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）

Santa Fe, the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A., is in the central part of the state, on the Santa Fe River, which flows into the Rio Grande 35 kilometers west of the city. More than two thousand meters above sea level, it lies in the Sangre de Cristo Mountains with the Ortiz Mountains to the southeast. Santa Fe was founded in 1609 by the Spanish on an old Indian village. In 1680 the Indians seized the place but only held it for twelve years before the Spanish retook it. the city remained under Spanish rule until Mexico won its independence in 1821. From then on it was a Mexican city until 1846 when it was taken over by U.S.A. troops.

With a population of 48,953,Santa Fe is now the second largest city in the state. Because of its sunny weather, rich history and surrounding mountains, it is a good place for holiday makers. Besides hunting and skating in the mountains people enjoy shopping in the Indian and Spanish shops, which brings a large income to the city every year. In summer there is an international opera season when operas are shown in a partly- roofed, openair theatre daily for people from all over the world. (Adapted from MET1993)

本篇文段选自1993年高考阅读理解部分。全文仅用205个单词就向读者清晰地描画了Santa Fe这个地方的地理位置、人口状况、资源特色，特别是用较大篇幅叙述了此处的历史变迁等地方特征。全文有详有略，重点突出。

文中追溯历史的片段（划线部分）尤其值得借鉴；学习时请注意其中表示时间的连词、介词，几个动词的用法以及主动、被动时态交互应用的特色。

另外，同位语the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A.,介词结构With a population of, Because of, besides等的使用亦使文段显得紧凑、连贯。

推荐背诵文段

常用表达法(Useful expressions)

1.所处位置（Location）

Our school lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of…/between/among…

The temple stands at the foot of/on the top of…

Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.

There stands an old temple near the river.

2.周边环境（Surroundings）

The beautiful town is located/situated on the west of the lake/to the west of the mountain/in the west of the province.

West of the city stands a tall building.

Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.

3.人口（Population）

Japan has a small population of …China is a developing country ,with a population of 130 million.

The population here is increasing year by year.

Eighty percent of the population here are farmers.

4.面积（Area）

Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers an area of …

Tiananmen Square, covering an area of…,is the largest square in the world.

This square is meters long and 1500 meters wide.

Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.

5.历史（History）

China has a history of over 5000 years.

Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.

Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.

6.名胜（Places of interest）

In Sydney, there are many places of interest , such as the Opera House.

The Opera House in Sydney is one of the most well-known places of interest in the world.

Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.

7.特色(Something Special)

Development,

best season

写作练习

根据以下内容写一篇100词左右的说明文，标题为“Australia”。

1)、澳大利亚位于太平洋的西侧，是大洋洲（Oceania）最大的国家，面积760万平方公里。

2)、人口稀少，只有1，000多万，多数集中在东部沿海地区。

3)、首都堪培拉（Canberra）风景秀丽。

4)、悉尼（Sydney）是澳大利亚最大城市。有许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（Opera House）闻名于世。奥运会就是在悉尼举行的。

习作点评

Australia, to the west of the Pacific Ocean, is the largest country in Oceania, which is about 7,600,000 square kilometers.

Although Australia is so large a country, it has a sparse population, which is only more than 10 million. And most of the people live together in the East Part by the sea.

Australia is an attractive place. Canberra is the capital, and it has very charming scenery. But it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrest. Especially the Opera House is so famous that almost everybody living in the world knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how important the Sydney is.

In a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia is a right place. 应加上标题Australia

此句后应加上in size

together为赘词

此处But及下文In fact过渡自然巧妙

interest拼写错误

准确

简洁

was held应为were held

专有名词Sydney前不应加the

结尾自然

参考范文

Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a small population of over 10 million. Most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Opera House is well known all over the world. The 2000 Olympic Games were held in Sydney.

篇3：书面表达最后(网友来稿)

第一，写好句子

1) 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，考生平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。

2)一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。

3)句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。

第二．组句成文

一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。

1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如：

并列关系：and, as well as, also…

递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end…

时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as …

比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand…

总结 in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all,

generally speaking…

进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as …

因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore…

2) 明确表达文章主题，内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。

3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。

4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查：

a, 要点有无遗漏； b. 句法、词法有没有问题；

c. 单词拼写有无错误； d. 大小写、标点符号有无问题；

e. 字数是否在题目要求范围之内。

二、高考英语写作高分秘诀

1．句式要有变化

① 复杂句、并列句

② 倒装句

（1）虚拟语气中if省略；（2）only+状语置于句首

（3）否定词置于句首（4）地点副词置于句首

③ 强调句型

It is ……that (who)…

④ 非谓语动词。

⑤ 虚拟语气

⑥ 固定句型结构

too…to… so…that… such a…that… not only…but also… neither…nor… such as… not …until… so that… either…or…

⑦直接引语与间接引语

多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构

2．要使用高等级词汇及短语

① 使用高等级词汇 ② 使用短语 ③ 使用谚语

④ 使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, only, not…at all; on the earth; the very; on earth等

⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻，暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等

as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat.

3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。

1）用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

above before me here on the left

across below in the distance on the right

beyond nearby opposite to over

also further next to on top of

up down close to beneath

under around near to along

2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early,

this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon ,

in the morning/afternoon/evening

3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

first, second, etc. now for this purpose

but as a result furthermore

finally at last moreover

also therefore likewise

another for example next

yet for instance on the contrary

once in addition in summary

such in this case on the other hand

then otherwise in conclusion

thus in closing

4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

another moreover in addition (to)

equally important too, also at the same time

besides then in the same way

in fact like, similarly

5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despite in spite of

yet, but unlike nevertheless

not only…but also here…there this…that

years ago…today the former…the latter then…now the first…whereas the second

some…others one…the other once…now

on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面…另一方面)

6)逻辑关系

递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)

转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(毕竟)

总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)，

in conclusion(最后)。强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)。对比: in the same way(同样地)，

just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand

三、书面表达常用句型及短语

1、学校生活及学习成绩

I’m getting on well with one’s study

take several courses at school

have English (Chinese, Physics…) every (other )day work hard at …

put one’s heart into…

be interested in …

like chemistry best be tired of … be good at …;

be poor at …; do well in …; be weak in …

make progress in …; improve oneself in …; fail in …

pass the examination; give sb. a passing grade;

He has the best record in school. 他的成绩最棒。

get a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位

(English is) more interesting to sb.

learn about; succeed in…; be active in class (work);

take an active part in …; learn… by heart;

work out a (maths) problem;

get 90 marks for (English); get an “A” in the exam;

have a good command of…

lay a good foundation in (language study)

won the first prize/ got the first place in the competition

the first/top three winners(前三名)

2、师生关系

get on well with sb; like to be with students;

be gentle with us; be kind to sb;

be a strict teacher; be strict with one’s pupils;

be strict in work be satisfied with …

We think of him (her) as …; help sb with sth;

praise sb for sth …; blame sb for sth..

give advice on …; question sb on …

correct the students’ homework carefully and prepare for the next day;

give sb a lot of work; try to teach sb good study habits;

make one’s lessons lively and interesting;

teach sb. sth.; teach sb to do sth.

devote all one’s time to work;

admire (sb.for) his devotion to the cause of education

佩服他对于教育事业的献身精神。

3、课余活动及周末生活

spend one’s time in many different ways;

enjoy doing things by oneself; go swimming;

go for an outing/ a picnic; have an outing at (the seashore);

see the sights of Beijing; play the piano (violin);

play chess (basketball); have a swim;

have dances on weekends; have a picnic over the weekend;

go to the cinema; have a party; hold a sports meeting;

do some reading; help sb do sth; enjoy a family trip;

get everything ready for;

ride one’s bike with sb.to(the park);

There are a lot of activities at (the beach).

We enjoy a change from our busy life in the city.

She would like to bring sth. to the picnic.

It was a very relaxing Sunday.

There are good programmes on TV on weekends.

Enjoy myself/ourselves; have a wonderful time

4、彼此沟通信息

take a message for sb; send a message to sb;

hear from sb; talk about/of sth;

tell/ask sb to do sth; get information about…;

express one’s idea (feelings) in English;

Write sb a letter saying…; apologize to sb for …;

make a speech t at the meeting; thank you for …;

explain sth to s; look upon sb as …;

think sb to be …; take sb’s side

5、事件中人的态度

would like to do; allow sb to do;

force sb to do; call on sb to do;

fee like doing; insist on doing;

drive sb. off; speak highly of sb;

speak ill of sb; think highly of sb;

be afraid to do (be afraid of …)； offer to do;

refuse to do; agree to do;

prefer to do A rather than do B; had better do/ not do ;

regret doing; would rather (not) do.

keep sb from doing prevent/stop sb. (from) doing);

6、事情过程

have the habit of doing…; have no trouble doing;

make up one’s mind to do; prepare sb/oneself for …;

give up doing…; do sth as usual; sb is prepared for/to do

do what he wants us to do; set about doing;/set out to do

try/do one’s best to do…=go all out to do;

get into trouble; help sb out;

do one’s bit for the country ; do some good deeds to people;

wait for sb to do; find a way to do;

make friends with sb;

show (tell) sb. how to do…; take (send) sb to …;

pass the time doing; feel a little excited about doing…;

can’t help doing…; be prepared for more hard work;

Some are (doing sth.A), others are (doing sth.B), and still others are doing (sth C)

7、感观活动与思维活动

look around for …; look up (down) at …; catch sight of …;

take a look at …; hear sb do (doing); take notice of …;

take view of …; have a good understanding of …;

consider sb (sth) to be …; come to know…;

realize that …; know that +从句

welcome/welcomed sb at/in front of the gate

Everyone is welcome to attend the lecture/activity

8、情感与欲望

be pleased with …; be delighted in doing…;

take a pleasure in doing; be worried about;

feel surprised at … be sorry for …;

be angry with sb for sth; be angry about …(为某事生气)；

look forward to doing…; wish to do;

expect to do; long for (long to do);

be sick for one’s home; have a strong desire to do …;

9、健康状况及治疗

be in good shape; be in good (poor )health;

feel weak (well, terrible, sick); have got a high (slight ) fever;

have a slight (bad) cold; take one’s temperature;

have got a pain in …; be good (bad) for one’s health(eyes);

It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until…;

save one’s life

10、其它

It (take)sb. some time to do…; It is said that …;

be fit for; be short of; be well dressed;

miss the lecture (train); change…into…;

waste/ spend time doing; be busy doing;

have no choice but to do; I can’t help it.

be in need of…; be mistaken about …;

fall behind…; catch up with;

take sth by mistake (错拿) have trouble (in) doing sth.

on behalf of; instead of; be welcome to do…;

Running, biking and swimming are popular in summer.

Skiing and skating are my favorite winter sports.

Say goodbye to sb. See sb off

11、信件常用语

You letter came to me this morning.

I (have received)/ am glad to receive your letter of July the 20th.

I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.

I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.

How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last.

Thank you for your letter.

In reply to your letter about (the exhibition this year)…;

Let me tell you that…

Best wishes,

Look forward to( your coming)/ receiving your letter

12、问路和应答

Go down this street

Turn night/left at the first crossroads

It’s about…metres from here

You can’t miss it

In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)

Pass two blocks

四、句子练习

改写下列各句，把短语变为并列句、复合句或带有分词短语、介词短语或其他短语的句子：

1. Xu comes from a working-class family.

He enrolled in college last fall.

2. The dean issued a bulletin.

It said the library would remain open at weekends.

3. We have made some progress.

We still have a long way to go.

4. The sky was cloudless.

The sun was shining brightly.

5.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane.

About one third of them were foreigners.

6. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.

Her mother was a famous pianist.

7. Napoleon was born in 1769.

At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France.

8.She appeared on the stage.

A stormy applause broke forth.

9. He heard that his father was ill.

He was anxious to go home to see him.

He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.

五：高考书面表达预测题

(1)电视的发展

某英文报纸发起了关于电视的发展的征文活动。电视的发展日新月异，有它的优点，但是也有缺点。请根据下表有关电视的两张表格，写一篇英文应征。

十年前现在

价格昂贵便宜

家庭拥有量 40% 98%

节目节目和内容少，新闻，文艺，教育体育，趣味性低涌现大量电视台，节目多，大多数很精彩。卫星电视全天播放。

收视率 15%左右 40%左右

优缺点画面声音质量差。导致很多人成为近视眼。由于技术进步，画面声音的质量大大提高。保护视力。看电视成为一种享受。

人们之间交流多。业余的时间主要被用于读书和学习。大量的时间都被浪费再看电视上，交流越来越少，没有时间读书。

要求：1、不要逐字翻译2、字迹工整 3、字数80~120

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（2）西部开发

假设你是某报社记者，请根据下表提供的信息写一篇英文稿，简要地报道中国开发中西部的有关情况。

主要概况范围：9个省、自治区（autonomous regions），1个直辖市（municipality）；

面积：540万平方公里；

人口：2.85亿；

实施要点交通建设：修建多条公路、铁路；

环境保护：退耕还林；防治污染；

资源利用：开发利用其丰富的天然资源（resource）；

人才引进：广纳各类专家、技术人员。

短文的开头与结尾已经给出；

New Development for Central and Western China

The Chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western China.

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We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success. As a result of the great project , central and western regions of China will surely achieve better and faster development in the new century. The people will have a better life and China will surely be richer and stronger.

参考答案：This part of China includes 8 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering an area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million.

The government will pay special attention to its transportation. Some highways and railways will be built. To protect the nature, farmers will return farmland to forest. Also, measures should be taken to prevent pollution. Western China is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. To meet the need of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

（3）交通状况

青山村的变化：人口500，坐落在大山脚下。

过去现在

作物主要种植玉米，各种适合山区气候的经济作物。

环境治理大量的树木被砍伐，经常发生山洪，造成极大损失植树造林，水土不再流失，没有山洪，生命财产得到保护。

交通只有一条小路通向山外，出行困难。修建了一条宽阔的马路，交通旅行多很方便，经济得到促进。

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（4）商业发展：假如你组在一个小镇里，近几年小镇里的商店发生了巨大变化，试根据下表写一篇短文，介绍情况。

过去现在

数量只有大小5家商店大小15家商店

商店种类一个大商场商场、超市、便利店大中小各种商店

便利商店离家远，购物不方便住的旁边就有一家超市，购物非常方便

商品种类商品种类不多，应有尽有，

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（5）环境状况：人们的卫生意识不断增强，下表是莫请谋市近年来的环境改变情况，请你写一篇短文。

过去现在

人们习惯人们随地吐痰没有人随地吐痰

街道上灰尘很多，很脏街道上总是打扫得很干净。

街道街道两边树木稀少。街道上绿树成荫，所有的空地上都有绿草覆盖

污染工厂随意排放大量烟雾、废水，空气和水受到严重污染。工厂严禁排放有毒废气、废水，环境得到改善。

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（6）通信业今昔对比

过去现在

通信方式人们主要通过书信，电报、电话联系。人们通过电子邮件、电话、传真（fax）联系。

通信质量联系不方便。通过电子邮件、手机（mobile phone），方便快捷。

购买价格电脑、手机太贵，用不起现在电脑、手机价格便宜，手机成为人们必备的通信工具。

使用收费电报、电话费昂贵。打电话、上网收费大幅下降

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篇4：英语书面表达

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building (主搂) .It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes ( 祝愿).

Don’t forget: 7:30 Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.

Dear Peter,

We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s park. You know where that is, don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill. Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake. We’ll have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us.Do come.

Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around.

How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minutes’ break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑话) or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.

Today is the 16th Teacher’s Day. This morning, the headmaster praised the teachers who did well in their teaching work and gave some teachers medals for their having completed thirty years of teaching. Our English teacher was among them. This afternoon some of my classmates and I went to visit him in his office and we were warmly received by him. We had a talk with him for some time.He encouraged us to study hard and be good students. By talking with him we were deeply inspired.

Dear manager,

I learn from the newspaper that a secretary of the English language is wanted in your company.I beg to apply for the post.

My name is Li Hua, a girl of twenty-six. I graduated from the English Department of a university four years ago.I’ve been working as a guide of English for four years.And I take more pleasure in the job as a secretary.I can speak good English as well as Chinese.

I want very much to be accepted by your company.Please give me an answer if these satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Ladies and gentlemen,

How time flies! Two years have passed since Mrs Brown came to our school to teach English in September,.Now she’s completed her work successfully and will leave for home tomorrow.

Mrs Brown is very strict with us.She’s very patient and never tired of helping us in our studies.Her teaching is so lively and interesting that we can easily remember what she teaches us.We all like to attend her lectures.

Now I will,on behalf of all the students,express our gratitude to Mrs Brown for her remarkable work.We wish her a pleasant journey and good health.

The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came to the crossroads(十字路口) a young man and a girl came up and stopped “We’ve found you at long last,”they said, “but we didn’t know them.Pointing to a policeman not far away,the young man explained. “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the offender.So come on,stand here.Hope you don’t have to wait as long as we did.Good luck.

My hometown

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are

hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

My Beloved Teacher

Mr Li is one of my beloved teachers.He taught us physics when we were in Senior 1.He was old,but he taught very well.He could make his classes lively and interesting.Mr Li made good preparations for his lessons and was strict with us,too.Whenever we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct and do it again.I used to be poor in physics.Mr Li often helped me with my lessons very patiently.Thanks to his help and hard work,I have made good progress and caught up with the class.As a retired teacher,he’s still working hard for our educational cause(教育事业).

Dear friends,

Though you stay at our school for only a short time,everything you’ve seen,I think,has made a deep impression on you.

You’ve been told the introduction about our school,knowing the great changes and achievements.When you were shown around our school,you were interested in what you had seen.And also you attended our classes and chatted with our teachers and students.I’m sure you have known more.

Now you are leaving.I hope that the friendship between you and us will last forever.

Wish you a pleasant journey.

篇5：初中英语书面表达探讨

初中英语书面表达探讨

英语书面表达是学生笔头交际的一个重要方式。但是我通过对新课程改革后的115名级学生的跟踪调查与分析，得出了目前初中生英语写作能力较差，总体上呈现下滑趋势的结论。那么如何提高学生的写作水平呢？我认为需从以下两方面入手。

一、了解学生英语书面表达存在的问题

老师要帮助学生提高英语书面表达的水平，就要先看看学生在英语书面表达上主要存在哪些问题，这样才能确定教学的方向和目标，以下列出了扬州市这几年中考英语书面表达学生失分的情况：

（一）内容要点的完整性。

内容要点齐全，这是中考书面表达的首要要求。评卷时，阅卷老师先根据考生的内容要点初步确定作文的档次。若缺少一个要点，往往要降低一个档次，也就是要减少2分。

（二）语言表达的准确性。

准确性是指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，但是不少考生受汉语思维习惯的影响，在写作时不自觉产生不规范的表达，比方：“有很多学生正在操场上玩耍。”学生会这样译：“There are many students are playing on the playground.”要做到准确、地道地表达文章，首先必须牢记掌握一些常用的句型或习惯表达，避免中文式英语，在实践中不断总结中英表达差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。

（三）语篇结合的连贯性。

连贯性是指根据整篇文章意思的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。关联词就是常用的连接手段之一。这些表示逻辑关系的关联词语，使文章前后连贯，结合紧凑，过渡自然，如表示顺序的first，then，finally；表示时间的in the past，now at present in the future；表示转折的but，however等。

（四）文章的层次感要强。

不少学生从上向下一气呵成，没有开头的提出话题，主体的细节描述，文章结尾的归纳总结。其中还含有很多次重点的构建，这是对学生思维能力的挑战。

（五）篇幅在允许的词数范围之内。

文章词数的多少直接影响对文章的评分。这是一个很容易让考生忽视的问题，所以考生在写作时要确保文章词数在题目要求的范围之内。

二、加强书面表达能力的培养

（一）夯实基础，培养能力。

1.过好词汇关，踏实词汇与短语。英国语言学家D.wilkins说：“我们不能接受语法比词汇更重要的说法，没有语法，人们表达的事物寥寥无几，而没有词汇，人们则无法表达任何东西。”一定的词汇量是学生发展语言能力的必要基础，而听写是促使学生掌握单词和短语拼写的有效方式。江苏省丰县第二中学周兴东提出的“3.8”效果很不错，每节课进行8分钟的听写，他主张听写内容有三：单词与词组、单句、段落；听写难度有三：基础、中档、高档各占30%，以及听写形式、听写作业的布置批改等。听写的内容尽量以学生们的兴趣、爱好或熟知为出发点。

2.加强语法训练。熟悉语法规则是英语写作得以顺利进行的条件。学习语法可帮助学生更准确地理解语言现象并表达思想感情，使学生在写作时少走弯路，少出错误，提高正确运用语言的自觉性，降低盲目性。

3.日常教学细思量，写作意识长培养。培养写作能力不是一蹴而就的事情，日积月累才有质的飞跃。牛津初中英语教材每个单元分有八个板块，在每单元Main Task板块要求学生习作。自初一起，我就加强对十级学生书面表达能力的培养。初一学生笔头作文刚起步，于是我总是让学生仿写。随着知识积累的增加，到初二时，就逐渐地和学生分析研究话题文章的结构，总体上有三部分：Introduction，Main body，Conclusion，并在平时的教学中不断为学生创设新的情境，让他们拓展想象的空间，发散思维，学生的综合运用能力在老师的一次次点拨中就无形地提高了。比方：我市多家中小学响应市政府的倡议“家在扬州・文明餐桌行动”，展开相关“光盘行动”的活动。请以“Against Food Waste”为题，用英语写一篇短文。我和同学们就此话题进行讨论，列举同学们展开光盘行动的一些实际做法。

（二）掌握技巧，训练提高。

虽然英语书面表达形式灵活多变，但万变不离其宗，把握完成书面表达的基本方法和技巧是关键。

1.审题。根据题目所提供的信息，分析、判断出题意图，明确文章体裁与时态。不同的题材对应不同的时态。现将几种常用时态及所用体裁总结如下：

2.谋篇。围绕题目给出的信息，编排文章的体系：开头如何交代所发生的事情，主体部分如何对话题进行阐述补充，结尾如何对文章总结归纳。并要考虑好句与句之间的.过渡衔接，拓展性的地方的合理发挥，简洁扼要的结尾归纳。比方说：4月20日雅安发生重大地震，人员伤亡很大，针对该话题我和同学们展开小组讨论。经过热烈的讨论，大家达成这样的共识：在第一段介绍这次地震的时间、地点及后果。在第二段阐述地震后各地人们及政府都积极采取行动。第三段提出对雅安人民的祝福。

3.认真誊写，卷面美化。“见文如见人”，“文如其人”，所以誊写过程要求整洁美观，字体要端正清晰。

（三）当场展示，明白得失。

对学生的写作要做到有问题必究，以及让学生欣赏优美文章是如何写的，这就需要老师做作文后的诊断，收集问题作文进行归类探究，挑选高质量的优秀作文学习。在不断的探讨中，学生的作文会有很大的改变。下面是一篇学生的习作：

There was an earthquake happened in Ya’an at about 8 o’clock on 4 20，.Many houses fell down.192 people were died and more than10，000 people hurt. The doctors，nurses，firemen and volunteers from all over the country hurried to the scene and tried to cure the survivors.Some businesses raised many things such as clothes，food，water and medicine to the local people.Some pop stars organized charity shows to raise money.The local government took action actively to search more lost people and helped them.

I hope the rest people stand up.More people can help them.

教师对这篇习作进行了评点，这是一篇描写地震的文章，作者基本介绍了地震的总体情况和地震后各方人们的支援，并做了总结。但是有部分汉语式的语句，第一、二段缺少连贯词，文章结尾过于简单缺少感染力。于是学生针对这些问题进行了改写，请注意修改的地方：

An earthquake happened in Ya’an at about 8 o’clock on April 20，2013.Many houses fell down.192 people were killed and more than10，000 people were hurt.

After the earthquake，the doctors，nurses，firemen and volunteers from all over the country hurried to the scene and tried to cure the survivors.Some businesses donated many things such as clothes，food，water and medicine to the local people.Some pop stars organized charity shows to raise money.The local government took action actively to search for more lost people and helped them out of sadness.

In a word，I hope more people can give more help and love to them.I hope the people there can cheer up，go out of sadness and rebuild their homes as soon as possible.

改写后的文章在单词短语句型上有了很大的变化，更可贵的是还运用了连接词after the earthquake和in a word，使得文章流畅、自然，大大增强了文章的可读性。

总之，由于英语写作是一个学习过程、思维过程、发现过程和循序渐进的过程，因此英语书面表达的训练就需要一个较长的过程。只要英语教师潜心钻研，勤于耕耘，引导学生多留心、多积累，不断提高用英语进行思维的能力，坚持英语写作训练，就一定能写出非常好的英语文章。

参考文献：

[1]周兴东.听写“3.8”效果特佳.中小学外语教学与研究，（6）.

篇6：书面表达是什么意思

英语书面表达怎么写

首先，审题，条理清楚

保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。

写主题句

主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的'方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。

问题阐述

适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。一句话用不同的句式来表达。

保证作文符合字数要求

作文120-150个字，考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多

篇7：书面表达解题技巧

一、考点聚焦

书面表达题旨在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年高考试卷来看，书面表达是指导性写作，即按照题目所给的目的、时间、对象、地点、内容、长度等条件去完成写作。它不同于命题作文，可以随意发挥；也不是简单的句子翻译。必须做到行文切题，紧扣中心思想，不漏要点，并且意思连贯，文理通顺，语言准确、得当。

二、应试技巧点拨

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使用要点条理化，序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

三、精典范例

例1 （NMET ）

假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）

白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆，学习电脑、绘画等

晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报

就寝时间：11:30 就寝时间：10:30

注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头已为你写好。

生词：reduce learning load减轻学习负担

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

解析

NMET 2001 年高考书面表达试题要求考生根据以表格的形式提供的情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的书信，给澳大利亚朋友Dicl介绍减负给自己学习和生活带来的变化。写作过程中所需要的生词已给出，短文的开头也已经为考生写好。

写作过程：

1.认真审题，明确要求。

①由汉语提示可知，应用第一人称完成短文；

②在写作过程中，要突出减负给学习生活带来的便利；

③在写作过程中，要根据表格中的中文提示，写成一篇行文连贯、条理清楚的文章而不宜将表格中的中文直译成英语。

2.审视表格，列出要点。

①过去忙于上课、做作业；

②现在有时间看新闻、参观博物馆等；

③现在有时间看新闻、读报纸；

④不必再熬夜。

3.依据要点，编拟提纲。

① I used to have to do endless homework and attend classes even

at weekends.

②Now I have more free time to read books, visit museums even

and so on.

③In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers.④I can go to bed earlier.

4.按照文体，组织语篇。

One possible version:

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to known what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time, I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

篇8：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第四节）

描述物体（Describing Things）

美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）

General Sherman

You are looking at the biggest tree in the world. Its name is “General Sherman”. General Sherman is growing on the slopes of the Rocky Mountains in the United States. General Sherman is about 11 metres across and about 35 metres round. During playtime join hands with 25 of your friends and make a circle. This will give you an idea of General Sherman’s size. General Sherman is also very tall. It is over 80 metres high. It began as a tiny seed many years ago. Imagine! It has been growing since about B.C. It has been growing for almost 4000 years and it is still growing! General Sherman is as old as the Pyramids. It may live for another 2000 years. What will the world be like in 4000 A.D.? General Sherman will know!

General Sherman是谁？读完本文后，你会发现：General Sherman原来是一棵树，一棵巨大无比、年代久远的树！

本文文笔清新，用词简洁；特别是时态的变换生动地描述了一棵树的过去、现在与未来。文中采用拟人化的写作手法，又给这棵树赋予了生命的色彩。另外，还应注意学习描述物体的一些具体表达方法。

读至文末两句，不由感慨：世间千般事，谁堪评说？唯我树大将军！

推荐背诵文段

常用表达法

1.形状（Shape）

-What shape is it?

-What does it look like?

-It’s square/round/oval/triangular /rectangular…2.大小（Size）

-How big is it?

-What size is it?

-What’s it like?

–It’s 32 centimeters wide and 2 meters long.

–It’s 5 inches by 5 inches (by 5 inches).

–It’s 45 centimetres in diameter.

3.颜色（Colour）

-What colo(u)r is it ?

-It’s red/blue/green/gray//black/purple/pink/

yellow/orange/brown…(in colour).-It’s dark grey/light blue/bright green…4.材料（Material）

-What is it made of?

-It’s made of leather/cotton/nylon/denim;

-It’s made of metal/wood/plastic/glass;

-It’s made of brick/stone/bamboo…5.特点（Something Special）

-Can you describe it in detail ?

-Is there anything special about it?

–It’s a long black leather coat with a belt.

–There is a zip at the front and a pocket beside.

–It’s an old brown Italian leather shoe with a hole in it.

–I like these old black Chinese wooden tables.

特注：多个形容词的排列顺序：

当两个以上形容词修饰一个名词时，形容词该如何排列呢？一般情况下，我们可以借助opshacom这个词来帮助我们：

①op代表opinion，指表示人们观点的形容词，如beautiful, horrible, lovely, nice等;

②sh代表shape,指表示形状的形容词，如long, short, narrow, round等；

③a代表age,指表示年龄、时代的形容词，如old, new, young等；

④c代表color,指表示颜色的形容词，如red, black, orange等；

⑤o代表origin, 指表示国籍、地区等的形容词，如British, Canadian, German等；

⑥m代表material, 指表示材料的形容词，如plastic, metal, wooden等。

⑦冠词、物主代词、指示代词等应放在最前面。

请看下面几例：

①a nice long new black British plastic pen

②She wears her beautiful brown leather jacket today.

（她今天穿着她那件漂亮的褐色夹克。）

③It was a lovely old French song.

（那是一首有趣的法国老歌。）

④I have seen this fantastic new British film.

(我已看过这部新的英国幻想片了。)

写作练习

习作点评

本文第二段衔接过渡自然，马上将文章引向了具体的描述对象。对两面旗子描述清晰，给人以比较生动的“图像”。值得一提的是：习作作者较为恰当地应用了所给词汇，这一点常常为部分学习者所忽略。

修改建议：

1.第三段最后一句，应改为：for every national flag has ,at least ,the colour of one of the five circles.

2.最后一段首句，应改为：Second, the flag of the U.N., the back- ground of which is blue.

篇9：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第三节）

人物介绍（Introducing Somebody）

美文欣赏

Although Princeton, New Jersey, has a world-famous university, it is still a small quiet town. It is not a place where anyone would expect to see strange characters on the street. That is why one woman will never forget the day in 1940 when, as a child, she suddenly saw a funny-looking man coming towards her. “I remember,” she tells her children now, “how wild his white hair looked---as if it had been electrified. He was short. His clothes seemed to be just pulled on to keep him covered, like a blanket to keep one warm. He had a big nose, a short, thick moustache, and deep-set eyes. He was staring, thinking. He almost knocked me down before he saw me. He gave me a friendly smile, then he walked on and went on thinking. I noticed he had on bedroom slippers. He had forgotten to put on his shoes. He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales and had passed me like a spirit. That night at dinner when I told my family about the strange, funny man I had seen, my father put down his knife and fork, looked at me and said,‘My child, remember this. Today you saw the greatest man in the world!’”

That man was Elbert Einstein. How and why he had come to Princeton, New Jersey is a story of struggle, success, and sadness.

曾经诵记过不少老高中教材的英文片段，这是留下非常深刻记忆的其中一段。想想看，应该有两个原因：一是当时的教材中的确缺少这样描写人物的材料，二是这一段的确写得很精彩，以至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这段描写，而背读起这段文字时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。这或许就是我们常常说到的“形象生动”、“栩栩如生”吧。

文段边忆边叙，为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象，而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦，也难怪He was staring, thinking。

推荐背诵文段

常用表达法

1. 性别与婚姻（Sex & Marriage）

I’m a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.

She got married in 1980 and now she has been married for more than 20 years.

I’ m 35 ,male and unmarried.

I got married five years ago but now I’m single.

2.年龄（Age）

He was born in 1995 and is eight years old now.

Born in 1985,he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.

He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.

In his fifties, he began to feel his age .

By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own.3.外貌特征（Appearance）

She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.

He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.

He is a good-looking/funny-looking man, with a thick moustache but no hair left.

He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair. deep-set eyes ,big bright eyes, long straight nose,

brown curling hair, broad shoulders,4.身高（Height）He is 1.76 meters tall.

He is 176 centimeters tall.

He is 176 centimeters in height.

The boy is not tall enough to reach the apple overhead.

He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.

My height is 1.76 metres .(不合英语习惯)

I’m 1.76 meters high.（身高不宜用high）5.健康状况（Health）Well looked after, the children look healthy.

I’m not so strong, but (I’m) in good health.

Having been in hospital for six months, now she looks very weak.6.教育状况（Education）I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.

I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).

We learned many courses, including…I’ve been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1 High School, Fudan University) for more than two years and will graduate next semester.

I got my bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in mathematics in April 1998...7.特长爱好（Specialty & Hobbies）

I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers.

I won the first prize in the English speech contest at school last year.

He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.

My favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.

In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling. 8. 详细特色（Something in detail）

举例法（Giving examples）:

–He was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes when…–He was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and ...

–He had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. I still remember my first day as a chemistry student.

写作练习

李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教师，是因为他教化学课已经有20年了。说他年轻，因为他今年还不过38岁。他长得较瘦。头上头发不多，灰白了。他戴着深度眼镜，牙齿又缺了2颗。所以他看上去比他实际年龄要大。他说，在公共汽车上常常有人给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的化学课--那课又生动又有趣，你就会发现他真正的年龄。

习作点评

Li Tao is a young but “old” teacher in our school. He is often regarded as an old teacher because he has taught chemistry for over 20 years. He is a thin man with thick glasses. The little grey hair and lacking of two teeth make him look older than his real age.

He often says that there are many people giving their seats to him in buses. But in fact, I saw him giving his seat to the woman who takes her baby in her arms more than once. If you have his lively and interesting chemistry lessons, you will find that he is no more than 38 years old

本文叙议结合，对原材料调控有度，取舍得当，是一篇很好的习作。

修改建议：

1.第二段第一句有chinglish之嫌，可改为:…says that many people give their seats to him.

2.who takes改为 who took。

3.最后一句应改为If you have ever had…

参考范文

A teacher

Li Tao is a young and old teacher in our school. He is regarded as being old for he has been teaching here for 20 years. He is seen, at the same time, as being young as he is now but 38 years old. He doesn’t have much hair on the head. And it is nearly all white. Missing two teeth and wearing thick glasses, he looks older than he really is. He says people often offer their seats to him for his old looks. On the contrary, I myself saw him give up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms. At least twice he did so. When you attend his interesting and lively classes, you will be sure of his real age ---still young.