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篇1：一年级30字日记
9月8日星期五晴
今天，我和妈妈去公园玩，玩了很多很有趣的游戏，还有许多花儿在我们身边，我很开心，今天我过得很满足。
9月8日星期五晴
今天，我从老家带来了一盆仙掌。它浑身墨绿，满身小刺，活像一只可爱的小刺猬。在它身上最引人入胜的部分就是它头顶的那朵鲜艳的花朵，十分美丽，十分耀眼。我爱它!
9月8日星期五晴
池塘里的荷花美丽极了。黄的，白的，紫的，淡粉的，一朵朵，一片片，我太喜欢荷花了。
9月8日星期五晴
星期天早晨，爸爸妈妈带我去看梅花。公园的梅花火艳艳的，好看极了。一朵朵，一丛从，一片片，正迎着冬天的风雪怒放着。人们踏着积雪，边走边看，舍不得离去。
9月8日星期五晴
一早起来，妈妈告诉我，下雪了。开始，我还不相信，因为妈妈总是这样叫我起床。等我起来的时候，雪已经小了，但屋顶上，草地上，还有山上，全都有一层薄薄的雪覆盖在上面。真漂亮啊!
10月13日星期六五晴
今天早上，外公外婆去买菜，妈妈带我去阿三街买东西。阿三街上人很多，还有来来往往的自行车、摩托车，妈妈给我买了小皇冠，发卡，皮筋，还有黏黏纸。我觉得很开心。
10月13日星期六晴
今天早上，天气很晴朗，太阳光照着我们，感觉暖洋洋的。外公外婆带我和小米去定海公园玩。
10月13日星期六晴
今天我和妈妈出去逛街了，妈妈给我买了我喜欢的玩具，我很高兴。
10月13日星期六晴
今天放学，没人来接我，原来爸爸妈妈吵架了。妈妈去了外婆家，好伤心!
10月13日星期六晴
今天，我和爸爸妈妈来到天津动物园。我们租了一辆电瓶观光车，有我和爸爸驾驶着出发了，妈妈坐在一旁可开心了。
10月13日星期六晴
今天，我和不爸爸去给爷爷上坟，自从爷爷去世，每年的今天我都要去给爷爷上坟，我很想念我的爷爷，我知道爸爸也很想念爷爷。
10月13日星期六晴
今天我和外婆、阿姨、妈妈一起去安山，阿姨和外婆去买对联，我和妈妈去买学习用品，街上很热闹，买东西的人也很多，我和妈妈还买了芒果吃，味道很好。
10月17日星期日晴
我和大家一起包饺子，我包的饺子有的是月亮形状的，有的是长方体的，我想了很久想出了一个有创意的包子形状的饺子，一下子包了5个这种形状的，大家看见了，都哈哈大笑了!
篇2：一年级30字日记
10月20日星期一晴
真是可恶，又被哭声弄醒了，没办法睡懒觉了!昨天夜里他还哭了呢，可是奶奶一点都不怪他，还照顾她，我觉得奶奶都忘记我的存在了，除了每天三餐叫我吃饭。
10月20日星期一晴
哎，又是重复的一天，奶奶还是那样对我很冷漠，弟弟还是总哭闹，我终于忍不住了，大吼一声，哭什么哭奶奶严厉的说不许对弟弟这样，他不会说会当然饿了尿了就要哭，你以前也这样的!我很委屈。
10月20日星期一晴
昨天我把奶奶的话想了想觉得很有道理，所以今天我决定加入照顾弟弟的行列，奶奶也很高兴，说我懂事了，还给妈妈打电话说了这件事，奶奶说妈妈夸奖我呢。
10月20日星期一晴
今天我小姨和小姨夫来我家做客，他们给我带来了礼物，我很高兴。
10月20日星期一晴
今天放学姥爷带我回家时，我肚子饿了。回到家，姥姥给我做包子。我吃饱了。姥姥给我做的包子好好吃啊，我谢谢姥姥。
篇3：一年级30字日记
10月17日星期日晴
我和妈妈去买烟花了，那天晚上我们村人人都烧烟花，烟花有红色的、蓝色的......烟花的声音好大呀!
10月17日星期日晴
今天，我更加熟练地知道怎么照顾弟弟了，他哭得大声就是饿了，我会哄他，然后让奶奶去弄奶粉，哭得小声，就是尿了，我会帮奶奶拿尿不湿，然后看看怎么换
10月17日星期日晴
今日，我的心情也是如此的，因为今天姐姐要带我去公园玩我最喜欢姐姐了，每次去公园玩都会跟我买好多好吃的也不会阻止我玩游戏在旋转木马上我快乐的像只飞翔的小鸟。
10月17日星期日晴
今日，微风，妈妈去上班了想每天一样，我也开始写我的日记，我喜欢这项作业，我很快乐，因为我发现写日记时间很有趣的事情妈妈也是夸奖我写得好。
10月17日星期日晴
糟糕，今天把妈妈的化妆品弄撒了，我本来只是好奇的没想到犯了大错误，那可是妈妈最心爱的了。怎么办呢?果然妈妈回来，大发雷霆，还打了我一巴掌。
10月20日星期一晴
今天妈妈上班前把我叫醒了要知道妈妈从来都不会这么早叫醒我的难道还要打我吗我怕极了。没想到，妈妈说对不起，昨天是妈妈不好，其实我没有怪妈妈妈妈还是好妈妈!
10月20日星期一晴
今天，是特别的日子，是妈妈的生日，所以爸爸亲自下厨，其实爸爸的厨艺要比妈妈好呢，只是爸爸比较忙没有时间，今天可以好好地大餐一顿了，我送了妈妈一件礼物，是我给妈妈画的肖像妈妈可喜欢了还亲了我。
10月20日星期一晴
妈妈说我自己在家没人照顾，要把我送到奶奶家，我不喜欢去奶奶家，因为奶奶要照看弟弟，他总是哭的，他那么小，也不能跟我一起玩，可是就算不情愿，还是去了。
篇4：一年级寒假日记30字
今天晚上，我自己做了一朵鸡蛋花，先把鸡蛋敲开，鸡蛋壳裂开；然后把鸡蛋壳和蛋清打碎轻轻倒入碗里，然后用一双筷子把鸡蛋搅拌均匀；然后在锅里放一碗水，等水煮开；最后慢慢地把鸡蛋倒进锅里，用勺子轻轻地把鸡蛋推到锅里，煮沸后，关掉火。让鸡蛋炖在锅里。这时，我想放调料，有味精，酱油，盐和猪油。
鸡蛋和背着自己做了，我吃得津津有味！
篇5：一年级寒假日记30字
今年的寒假有酸，有甜，有苦，又辣，有咸。其中最有趣的是—————放鞭炮。
今天，爸爸和我去上街买鞭炮，我们买了各式各样的鞭炮。
到了晚上，我和爸爸放起了鞭炮，那鞭炮太飘亮了。有红的，有黄的，有蓝的，还有紫的。
真难忘。
【一年级寒假日记30字（十篇）】
篇6：一年级开学日记30字
“光阴似箭，日月如梭”愉快的暑假过去了，今天是九月一号，开学啦!
新学期又开始了，在这学期里，我一定要有出色的表现。
篇7：这就是我一年级作文30字
大家好，我叫顾澄婕，今年10岁了。
我是一个活泼又可爱的女孩，我最喜欢穿粉红色的衣服了。我的兴趣爱好是画画和弹古筝，我最喜欢的课是语文课和英语课。
于是，我站了起来，擦干了眼泪。
这就是我，你听了我的介绍，了解我了吗?
篇8：这就是我一年级作文30字
我是一个在家内向的女孩，可一到了学校我就特别喜欢讲话，所以我是一个“两面人”。在学校里，同学们都喊我“话唠”。我的成绩时高时低，也比较粗心，但也是同学们的好榜样，可体育跑步速度快赶上“蜗牛”了。
看，这就是我!
篇9：这就是我一年级作文30字
大家好，我的名字叫张晗，今年10岁了。我性格开朗、乖巧、聪明。现在在班中担任中队为的职务，是学习委员。我的特长是唱歌、跳舞、读书等。我喜欢帮助有困难的人，如果谁遇到了困难，我就会热心的帮助他。我的口号是：全班努力，永远第一!
这就是我——张晗。
篇10：30字自我介绍
我是一名普通的本科应届毕业生，资料管理下载，我一直追求着自己的成就。我在校担任学生干部期间获得校级优秀学生干部的称号，有比较好的组织协调能力，在暑假期间多次勤工俭学，可以吃苦耐劳，参加资料管理下载省电子设计大赛获省二等奖，有很强的动手能力和学习能力，我可以能够在不同文化和工作人员的背景下出色地工作。
篇11：30字好句精选
希望源于失望，奋起始于忧患，正如一位诗人所说：有饥饿感受的人一定消化好，有紧迫感受的人一定效率高，有危机感受的人一定进步快。
别在树下徘徊，别在雨中沉思，别在黑暗中落泪。向前看，不要回头，只要你勇于面对抬起头来，就会发现，分数的阴霾不过是短暂的雨季。
柔和的阳光斜挂在苍松翠柏不凋的枝叶上，显得那么安静肃穆，绿色的草坪和白色的水泥道貌岸然上，脚步是那么轻起轻落，大家的心中却是那么的激动与思绪波涌。
生活的海洋并不像碧波涟漪的西子湖，随着时间的流动，它时而平静如镜，时而浪花飞溅，时而巨浪冲天。人在经受大风大浪的考验之后，往往会变得更加坚强。
倘若希望在金色的秋天收获果实，那么在寒意侵人的早春，就该卷起裤腿，去不懈地拓荒、播种、耕耘，直到收获的那一天。
爱心是冬日的一片阳光，使用饥寒交迫的人感受到人间的温暖;爱心是沙漠中的一泓清泉，使用权濒临绝境的人重新看到生活的希望。
日子总是像从指尖渡过的细纱，在不经意间悄然滑落。那些往日的忧愁和误用伤，在似水流年的荡涤下随波轻轻地逝去，而留下的欢乐和笑靥就在记忆深处历久弥新。
当枯黄的秋叶随风摇曳时，深秋飘然而立校外，月光下，父亲的影子拉得很长，硕大的风衣将瘦骨嶙峋的父亲裹了进去，我心头一阵酸楚。
船的命运在于漂泊;帆的命运在于追风逐浪;人生的命运在于把握，把握信人生，方能青春无愧。
月光清幽。淅沥的雨滴打在茅屋上，昏黄的灯光下，母亲密密地缝着游子的夹衣，忽然，一阵冷风挤进茅屋的窗隙，母亲似乎着凉，带着浓浓的倦意咳嗽了几声。我梦中惊醒，怔怔地看着灯下年迈的母亲。
青春一首歌，她拨动着我们年轻的心弦;青春是一团火，她点燃了我们沸腾的热血;青春是一面旗帜，她召唤着我们勇敢前行;青春是一本教科书，她启迪着我们的智慧和心灵。
潇洒是一道恪守在每个人心灵中的美丽的风景，潇洒的内涵包罗万象。“采菊东篱下”是一种清静的潇洒，“胜似闲庭信步”是一种喜悦的潇洒，“一览众山小”是一种成功的潇洒。
热爱是什么?热爱是风，热爱是雨，因为热爱，我们甘于淡泊宁静的日子;也因为热爱，我们敢于金戈去，马革裹尸还。
兴趣是什么?兴趣是雷，兴趣是电，因为兴趣，我们乐于牺牲看电视，玩扑克的时间;也因为兴趣，我们勇于搏击激流，攀登险峰。
如果你是一棵大树，就洒下一片绿阴;如果你是一株小草，就增添一份春色;如果你是一只蜜蜂，就酿造一份甜蜜;如果你是雄鹰，就搏击万里长空;让我们共同创造辉煌。
清清的溪流变得浊臭污秽，绿绿的山峦变得陆离斑驳，如面对一张张污迹遍布的白纸，我不忍心去看。
篇12：30字好句精选
1、小溪的冰已经裂开了，没等冰完全融化，溪水便唱起了愉快的歌儿。
2、森林里，我细雨绵绵，为她梳妆打扮;空气里，我叹吁呼吸，使她清香四溢。
3、我是人们烈日炎炎口中的一滴水;我是水桶里的一注清泉;我是大海里的一阵水花。
4、我顺着声音望去，原来树上有不计其数的鸟窝，鸟窝里又有不计其数的鸟儿。
5、湖水清澈如镜，整个湖水就象一条绿色的绸带，覆盖在蜿蜒的山谷中。
6、花园两旁有两棵枝繁叶茂的樟树，好像花园的守卫。
7、经历了雪白的冬季，万紫千红的春季，骄阳似火的夏季，我们的脚步又踏进了金黄的秋季。
8、一片金灿灿的树叶落下来，仿佛飞来了许许多多翩翩起舞的黄蝴蝶。
9、近处的花园里像隔着一层薄薄的白纱，模模糊糊的，给人一种 不识庐山真面目 的神秘感。
10、蒙蒙的春雨润醒了小草，润醒了花儿，润醒了树木，当然也告诉我们春天来了。
11、湖水冲到红石桥上便象珍珠一样的撒下，空气中弥漫着清凉的水气，深吸一下，沁人心脾。
12、湖水中间有一座红石桥，在阳光的照耀下显的格外光亮。
13、从远处看，大树像一把把撑开的巨伞，近看，像威严的士兵。
14、春姑娘穿着绿色的连衣群，静悄悄的来到了这世界。
15、有人喜欢茫茫的大雪，有人喜欢如丝的细雨，可是我喜欢那迷人的雾。
16、小鸟叽叽喳喳的叫着，仿佛用歌声为小野花赞美，不知名的小草也跟着花儿沾光呢!
17、迎面吹来的春风让人心旷神怡，让树木不断招手，让小草高兴得点头哈腰、翩翩起舞。
18、花坛里充满了同学们的嬉戏声和一片金黄色，显的格外的美。
19、看，它们开得多么热闹，多么自由，红的如霞，粉的高雅，黄的清淡使人百看不厌。
水，夏天把我流淌，秋天让我停止。
21、清晨，我与细雨携手宣布光明的到来;黄昏，我与百兽一起向她告别。
22、花坛里的花和着挺拔的大树，成了一幅迷人的风景画。
23、像夜晚的明珠那样耀眼;像黑夜的星星那样闪烁;像高空的彩虹那样绚烂!
篇13：30字好句精选
1、小河一路奔跑着，看着路边的风景，从自己的身边倒退，感到大自然的神奇与美丽。
2、当春天来临时，积雪融化，春暖花开，万物苏醒，嫩绿的小草也偷偷地钻出了地面。
3、树上的梨花像青春的少女，生怕别人看不到自己的美丽一样争先恐后的纷纷开放了。
4、小河流淌着，唱响叮咚的旋律，鱼儿在她的怀抱里欢快地游着，跳起了美丽的舞蹈。
5、一株株枫树挺拔直立，秋风一吹，叶子发出哗啦啦的响声，就像鼓掌在欢迎我们哩!
6、泰山拔地而起，直冲云霄，恰如一个巨人，矗立在万山之中，正深情地俯视着大地。
7、大姐姐们的舞姿美极了，你看，个个杨柳细腰，舞步轻盈，笑眯眯的神态格外动人。
8、蝙蝠仿佛厌恶这个呆了很久的黑暗的世界，展开翼飞快地从洞里冲出来，寻找自由。
9、春风给高山穿上了青色的裙摆，小雨的欢笑声把鲜花逗笑了，开出了五彩缤纷的花。
10、各色鲜艳的花争奇斗艳，在温暖的春日的阳光中，绽开了笑脸，恍若神妃仙子一般。
11、夕阳像是涨红了脸的太阳公公，他临下班前把余晖留给了西天，呈现了漫天的晚霞。
12、牡丹，以她那淡雅的气质，主宰着春天的神韵，她灵动迷人，犹如一位飘逸的仙子。
13、她摇醒了小树，小树立刻抽出新的枝条，长出嫩绿的叶子，像是披上了翠绿的春装。
14、在草原上，白羊一家在他们绿色的餐桌上享受着丰盛的午餐，兄弟姐妹都吃得很香。
15、钢笔穿着一件黑西装，戴着一顶黑白相间的帽子，还系着一条银白色的领带和腰带。
16、这老树干，如拧着的捆捆钢筋，身躯挺拔，直冲云霄，仿佛一位神人立于天地之间。
17、那顽皮的叶子终于脱了束缚，快乐的扑向风的怀抱，去追寻那想许久的短暂的自由。
18、夏天，小河和小鱼小虾们一起唱歌，一起做游戏，一起数星星，同小朋友玩捉迷藏。
19、人世间的真情就像一张大网，时刻温暖着人的心扉，就如妈妈的爱一样，永无止境。
20、一群活泼可爱的百灵鸟在森林里举办一场盛大的音乐会，到处都洋溢着欢乐的歌声。
21、月亮像一个新娶来的媳妇，刚刚从东天边上来，就又羞答答地钻进树叶子里藏起来。
22、秋天，硕大的华果挂满了枝头，压弯了树枝，像捉迷藏的孩子露出了一个个的笑脸。
23、可爱的小鸟在枝头唱着那美妙、动听的歌声，好像想向观众们展示它那好听的歌喉。
24、那群刚出壳的小鸭子，像一个个嫩黄的小绒球，那稚嫩的叫声在焦急地呼唤着妈妈。
25、夏天，白杨树像一个魔术师，满树的叶子都变成了碧绿的，发出了万丈碧绿的光芒。
26、春天来了，太阳公公露出了笑脸，耀眼的光芒照在身上，我感到暖洋洋的舒服极了。
27、牵牛花撑开了如紫色水晶一般美丽的裙子，在空气中转了个圈，开出了紫色的小花。
28、温暖的春风吹绿了鲜嫩的树芽，吹开了美丽的小花，吹醒了正在沉睡中的大地万物。
29、一阵风吹来，小草们在风中摆动着，好似正在翩翩起舞，庆祝它们快要结束的一生。
30、海水满盈盈的，照在夕阳之下，浪涛像顽皮的小孩似的跳跃不定，水面上一片金光。
31、柳树的枝条在江里垂下来梳洗，柔软的柳枝在水的倒映中荡漾，如少女挥动的衣裙。
32、桃林里那千万棵桃树排得整整齐齐，像一个个灰姑娘在做操，手上还托着一朵红云。
33、小兔一身雪白的外套，一双水晶似的眼睛，花瓣似的嘴，凑成了活泼可爱的小白兔。
34、这山似乎又多了几层巍峨的峭壁，每一层都在呼唤着久违的尊严和它们应有的面貌。
35、湖边杨柳依依，像是春姑娘从天上撒下一只只花团锦簇的蝴蝶花，在湖上翩翩起舞。
36、夏日的雨，仿佛游子归乡般急不可耐的从高空奔涌而下，抚摸着想念中的大地山川。
37、岸边的杨柳在风中轻轻的摇摆着那轻盈婀娜的身姿，远看就像一位少女在风中起舞。
38、这雨水真是善解人意，知道日间太阳过于猛烈，专门在晚间下个不停来滋润了大地。
篇14：30字日记
30字日记大全（一）
今天，我和妈妈去公园玩，玩了很多很有趣的游戏，还有许多花儿在我们身边，我很开心，今天我过得很满足。
30字日记大全（二）
今天，我从老家带来了一盆仙掌。它浑身墨绿，满身小刺，活像一只可爱的小刺猬。在它身上最引人入胜的部分就是它头顶的那朵鲜艳的花朵，十分美丽，十分耀眼。我爱它！
30字日记大全（三）
池塘里的荷花美丽极了。黄的，白的，紫的，淡粉的，一朵朵，一片片，我太喜欢荷花了。
30字日记大全（四）
星期天早晨，爸爸妈妈带我去看梅花。公园的梅花火艳艳的，好看极了。一朵朵，一丛从，一片片，正迎着冬天的风雪怒放着。人们踏着积雪，边走边看，舍不得离去。
30字日记大全（五）
一早起来，妈妈告诉我，下雪了。开始，我还不相信，因为妈妈总是这样叫我起床。等我起来的时候，雪已经小了，但屋顶上，草地上，还有山上，全都有一层薄薄的雪覆盖在上面。真漂亮啊！
30字日记大全（六）
今天早上，外公外婆去买菜，妈妈带我去阿三街买东西。阿三街上人很多，还有来来往往的自行车、摩托车，妈妈给我买了小皇冠，发卡，皮筋，还有黏黏纸。我觉得很开心。
30字日记大全（七）
今天早上，天气很晴朗，太阳光照着我们，感觉暖洋洋的。外公外婆带我和小米去定海公园玩。
篇15：母亲节作文30字
今天，我起了个大早。因为是母亲节，我准备自己动手做份礼物送给妈妈。
首先，我准备了要用的'笔和纸，然后动手做起来。我先用铅笔画了一幅画，再用彩笔涂上美丽的颜色，送给妈妈，妈妈看到后特别高兴，夸我的手很灵巧，我听到后心里也很开心。
篇16：母亲节作文30字
母亲节快乐!如果说父爱是船,载着我从少年走向成熟,那么母爱就是一片海,给了我一个幸福的港湾。
感谢母亲,祝您母亲节快乐!
妈妈,节日快乐,身体健康,万事如意,工作顺利,长命百岁。将来当个老寿星。
篇17：母亲节作文30字
在昨天，也就是5月10日，是我们伟大的母亲的节日，你们是怎样给母亲过的呢?是送了一朵粉红色的康乃馨，还是给妈妈沏了一杯热腾腾的茶呢！
相信你们都为妈妈做了一间令妈妈高兴的事吧!
篇18：小学生作文评语30字
1. 这篇文章选择了一个全新的角度，让你的思想可以在这里自由的驰骋，这是你最大的成功之处。老师要提醒你的是透过纷纭的世事，总有一些准则可供我们处世时把握，让你的思想更深刻些，你将会时时收到“滴水看世界”的效果。
2. 如许娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗?
3. 文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样朴实、豁达。你的作文功底很好，这也是你长期磨练的结晶。希望你在未来的学习过程中，用心感受和体味生活，写出更加感人的好文章。
4. 文能言声，我想文章正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执着地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。
5. 文能怡情。不能把写作文当成自己的一项负担，而应该以积极的心态、细腻的笔触记录下自己的心路历程。
6. 可以说你的文章充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。
7. 真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。
8. 看了你的文章，仿佛眼前流过一条小溪，清纯，可爱。希望你能保持住这样的文风，用纯净的语言表达出丰富的内涵。
9. 作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。
10. 这篇文章以具体的事例,生动优美的语言,新颖别致的写法,表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞.
11、文章开头简而得当,通过环境描写来衬托人物心情,十分艺术化。
12、开头简明扼要
13、文章开头新颖,具有先声夺人之效。使读者一见面就能对人物产生…的印象。
14、文章开头引人入胜,吸引读者。…点面结合,使文章生动,具体,详略得当。
15、文章语言生动丰富,可读性强。
16、开头出手不凡,吸引读者
17、开头打动人心,具有真情实感。
18、文章开头交待得十分清楚,起到总领全文的作用。
19、文章选材新颖,激起读者读下去的欲望
20. 文章以…为结尾,言简意赅,其味无穷.
21. 全文叙事集中,不枝不蔓,语言朴实流畅,感情真挚感人.
22. 通过丰富人物的语言和动作,衬托出人物的.思想品质.文章想象合情合理,叙述自然生动,结构紧凑,衔接自然连贯,中心突出.
23. 语言朴素,中心明确,构思合理,行文层次清楚.
24. 能把人物内心活动写得十分生动,的确难能可贵,给人留下了深刻的印象. 文章头尾照应,中心明确,结构完整.
25. 文章有理有据,说服力强,突出人物个性,上下文过渡自然,条理清晰,首尾照应,结尾点题,突出中心思想.
26. 作者对…观察仔细,描写细腻,语言生动活泼,表现手法富有新意. 全文语言朴实,结构自然.…文章结构严谨,首尾呼应.
27. 语言诙谐有趣,情节安排曲折生动,开头与结尾的呼应巧妙.本文篇幅虽短,但内容生动具体,段落明确,语言朴实,通俗易懂.
28. 文中一系列表现人物动作的动词运用得准确,衬托手法运用得好.
29. 本文采用了第一人称的写法,使得…具有很大的优势,对于塑造人物,表现中心起到了良好的作用,读起来亲切自然可信.思路清晰,节奏明快.
30. 本文事情过程写得具体,明晰,条理清楚.作者在叙事的同时加入了恰当的心理描写,充分表达了…
31、以饱满的激情,描写了……
32、重点突出,详略得当,内容具体。
33、比喻贴切,用词生动。
34、文章语言通俗易懂,贴近生活实际,读来令人倍感亲切。
35、…以轻松愉快的语气,向我们娓娓道来,令人回味无穷。
36、叙述自然生动、结构紧凑,衔接自然连贯,中心突出。
37、对于景色的描写,语言简练而准确,联想则为触景生情,情景自然融合。
38、通过丰富人物的语言和动作,衬托出人物的思想品质。
39、文章边叙事边抒情。
40、充分运用动静结合的写法,并辅以比喻、拟人等手法
41、小作者观察仔细,叙述时井然有序
42、一些精妙词语的使用,无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。
43、文章清逸婉丽、流畅连贯,尤其人物语言幽默风趣
44、文章想象合情合理,
45、通过生动、形象的语言的描绘,使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般。
46、文章线索明朗,主题突出,紧紧围绕…进行。
47、细节描写颇具匠心。极富功底。
48、对人物的语言、神态、动作等,进行精心细腻的描绘,这是本文的一大特色。
49、描写细腻,生活气息浓厚,遣词造句准确传神。
50、,语言准确,鲜明、生动,内容极其丰富具体,
51、事例叙述得生动具体,人物的言行符合各自身份特点。
52、文章来源于生活,因此语言虽然不怎样优美,但却真实有趣,写得入情入理
53、文章将…写得细致入微
54、语言活泼明快,富有情趣。
55、大量采用生活中的口语,使文章更显自然亲切。
56. 在你的笔下，秋天是多么美啊!老师从你的作文中看到了那高远而深蓝的天空，看到了金黄的稻田、南飞的北雁和那飘零的黄叶，这一切，无不让我感受到秋天的美丽与神奇。我多么想对秋天说：秋天啊!化腐朽为神奇的秋天，你使学生的作文多么优美啊!
57. 当老师打开你的作文本时，总能听到一阵哭泣，原来是标点符号，因为你太不重视他们了。你想想，当老师也像你轻视标点符号那样而轻视你的作文时，你不是也会哭吗?
58. 你的作文能对秋天的田野进行细致的描写，说明你是一个善于观察的孩子。可是秋天是多么美的季节啊，秋天是收获的季节，秋天是多彩的季节，老师真希望在你的文章中能感受到那一个美丽而充满诗情的秋天!
59. 作者运用心理描写和动作描写手法，把自己当时紧张、害怕的心理真切而又细致地表现了出来。
60. 剪裁得体。笔墨集中，详略有致。语言简洁，概括性强。主题积极、开头简洁、结尾有力之外，善用悬念，使情节曲折引人。材料典型。
篇19：中秋节作文结尾30字
更好笑的在最后，在赏月时我抓起一把花瓣扔向大姐，哗啦一下，大姐变成了，花瓣人，我和妈妈都哈哈大笑。
的中秋节就是这样过的，大家呢?说来听听吧，正好分享节日的快乐。
篇20：中秋节作文结尾30字
我独自一人欣赏着圆月，孤独地过着中秋佳节。
思念在一点点浮现，随着些许略带伤感的微风，飘向远方。
那里，有美丽的家乡;那里，有我温暖的三口之家;那里，有我最牵挂的母亲。
篇21：中秋节作文结尾30字
今夜月光照亮世界，也照在人心里，照在每一条路上，每一个迷途的地方，跟着月光走吧你会成功的。
我爱今夜的中秋节月亮，我也爱下一个中秋节的月亮，我爱每一个中秋节的月亮，光明会更多的。
中秋诗歌【4】
夜沉天星稀，
明月垂碧帘。
仰头久思量，
合家聚首难。
篇22：感恩节作文英语30字
This morning because of bad cough mom wouldn't let me go to school. I started punctually at 8 o'clock at home, and set the timer for 45 minutes. I did three pages of math, and I reviewed Chinese and English. Mother loves me very much and gives me a lot of rest.
It's Thanksgiving Day. It's a holiday in North America where people have a holiday on this day, and we have to prepare a Thanksgiving dinner, Turkey and pumpkin pie. Mom and dad ran two or three supermarkets without buying a turkey leg, and finally bought a roast duck. My mother also asked me to call grandma and grandpa, because they were the ones who hurt me most from childhood. They were also the ones I should thank most for this day.
In the evening, my good friend Fiya came to see me, and I was happy. She played with me and accompanied me to practice the piano.
My mother agreed that I could go back to school to carry a new schoolbag tomorrow. I was so happy. But my mother asked me to learn from the new school bag, especially not to waste time, to write homework, to grasp the time, and to take the initiative to play the piano, and I must try to do it.
篇23：感恩节作文英语30字
Today is Thanksgiving Day. Just a few days ago, I wanted to do something for my mother, or to buy a gift. Finally, I decided to wash my feet for my mother. Because the feet can go to fatigue.
In the evening, I finished my homework and said to my mother who was watching TV: “Mom, you come to the bathroom!” My mother puzzled and asked, “what's the matter? Why do I have to go to the bathroom?” I pointed to the stool and said, “please take a seat.” Mother sat down in a doubting face. I poured some hot water in my bowl and then squatted down and said, “lift your feet, please!” I took off my shoes and socks for my mother, and then my mother realized what kind of medicine I sold in the gourd.
“Son, what day is it today? Why do you think you washed my feet?” Mother was happy to touch my head. “Today is Thanksgiving. In order to thank you for your parenting, I wash your feet every day from today.” Mother is silent. I looked up and saw my mother's eyes hanging like stars. I knew it was a happy, happy tear. “My good son, mother can wash herself, your filial piety mother knows!” You go and read a little book! “ Mother bent down and patted me on the shoulder and said. But I am like a ”stone“, squatting at the foot of the basin, not to wash her feet. My mother could not resist me, so I had to ”obey my duty“.
When my father came back, my mother couldn't help being happy. He said to his father, ”Lao Liu, my son has grown up. I know the pain of parents! “ Then she told him about what happened today. Dad held my hand and said, ”son, it's Thanksgiving Day. I forgot, I'm not as good as you. I didn't go to see your grandparents and grandma. I have to learn from you!“ I smiled awkwardly, and my father and mother laughed.
篇24：感恩节作文英语30字
”Thankful heart, thank you for your fate, with my life...“ Every time I hear this song, I'm always excited by my introverts (maybe because my mother is too deep in my love), and I can't help saying, ”Mom was the love I gave for three years, just like the number of stars in the sky.“ That love is higher than the mountain is deeper than the sea, I can not help shouting ”Mom, I love you.“ Today is Saturday, tomorrow is Thanksgiving. What kind of presents are you going to prepare? To say ”I love you“ is too old-fashioned. I want to think of something new. I finally thought of it, that is, uh huh, keep it confidential.
On Thanksgiving Day, I woke up early, and my God came into my mother's room unconsciously and kissed it on her cheek, and then I crept up the instant noodles and put it on the head of his bed. I gently closed the door and gently swept the floor, just as the window was open, and I swept together and suddenly fell together, and a sudden burst of sudden burst of time The wind swept away the rubbish. I had to close the window and sweep it again. I knew the hard work of my mother in the process of sweeping the floor.
I saw yesterday's bowl did not wash, I quietly washed the bowl, when I found a figure behind me, I looked, my mother, my mother's face moist and moist, I immediately understand, gratitude will keep the bridge between our parents and our parents forever and not, gratitude is really my life must pass through The turning point, gratitude will make us understand friendship. Now I want to say, ”spring is pure, but pure mother's love; flowers are beautiful, but beauty is but mom's heart!“
篇25：感恩节作文英语30字
Thanksgiving is coming, and the annual Thanksgiving Day is about to begin. I don't know about Thanksgiving every year. I want to give my parents a Thanksgiving this year. I thank my parents for giving me so much.
In the evening, our family had dinner. After dinner, my grandmother, as usual, was busy tidying up the food on the table and preparing to wash the peas. I went up to my grandmother and said, ”grandma, let me wash the dishes.“ But Grandma answered me, ”no, you can play with yours.“ I came to my mother again, my mother was washing my gloves, and I was secretly excited: ha ha, this opportunity came, my own business! I said to my mother, ”mother's gloves are washed by herself!“ But mom didn't agree: ”no, you need to read.“ I had to go back to my room.
I felt a little depressed, but I was not discouraged. I continued to search four times. Why, how does the clothes put on the sofa are messy? I got them all on the bed and began to fold them up. This is my first time to fold clothes, so I seem to be in a bit of a hurry. I was walking to the sofa, picking out the best piece of clothing in my neat clothes and getting it to my bed. I first spread the clothes and fold them up, and then I will take out a piece of clothes that are not folded. But it was stacked up untidy, and I unfolded it again. After tireless efforts, I finally made my clothes neat. Then, I was in the front of the stack. The clothes that were untidy were stacked up neatly and put back on the sofa.
Mother came to the room and folded his clothes, but when he saw the neat clothes on the sofa, he first opened his mouth and looked back at me with a smile. She fully understood, and she said, ”lily, you grew up.“ Although this is just a very small thing, but I still see mother's eyes moving.
On this touching Thanksgiving Day, I hope that mom and dad can have a happy heart, because their daughter has grown up and is sensible.
篇26：感恩节作文英语30字
Thanksgiving Day is coming, teachers teach students to learn to be grateful, so this weekend home to help their elders do something. I didn't know what to do after I had thought about it. Then I decided to help grandma buy vegetables.
I did it early, and I got up early. After breakfast, I let my grandmother play in the chess and card room. So I hurried home to get the money and rushed to the vegetable market immediately. The vegetable market has two floors, the first floor is the monopoly of meat, the two floor is the exclusive vegetable, our family does not like to eat meat, so I hesitate to run to the two floor. WOW! All kinds of dishes come into my eyes. I really didn't know what to buy. I didn't know how to go to my favorite peas. I thought grandma was waiting for me in the chess room, so I stepped up. It was so big. But I was very entangled. After that, I finally made up my mind to buy beans, potatoes, tomatoes, cauliflower and Chinese cabbage. I think it should be done.
On the road, I experienced the hardships of my grandmother. These dishes were very heavy. I kept on carrying them and arrived home unwittingly. Ah! It's 10:30. I wanted to buy the vegetables and put them away. Now I have another idea to cook the vegetables. Isn't grandma happier? So I burned it with the memory of my grandma cooking every day. After half an hour, I only cooked two dishes, soya beans and potatoes. Then I will burn the scallion and cauliflower together, and the taste will be better. The Chinese cabbage is the same, so good! The last dish - the tomato and egg soup, I lay eggs and eggs for more than half an hour, five dishes were all finished. I found it was so tired to burn a dish, but Grandma insisted on burning it to me every day. I was a little ashamed.
I am glad to run all the way to the chess and card room. I asked grandma to come back and let her close her eyes in front of the door. ”Open it!“ I said excitedly, when grandma saw a dish, she said to me in tears, ”who let you burn?“ What if it hurts? ” After that, my grandmother and I both laughed happily and happily, and I ate my meals.
This special Thanksgiving will be my most beautiful memory, next year's Thanksgiving I have to do more for grandma, so that grandma can open heart in the festival!
篇27：感恩节作文英语30字
We often say: “our life journey into the love of every wave, every set of melodies, every sentence, every laugh, every eye, every step of the print...” However, the first love in the world is not just care, but more importantly, education is the transmission of the torch of wisdom.
Families, school interactive education, build a bridge between parents and students. Parents talk to the platform, talk about their students' learning methods, talk about their work experience, talk about how they get along with strangers, talk about their expectations and faith in our future, and talk about their understanding of us... They bestowed the priceless treasure on us, sending us the torch of blinding glory to us. We accept all this with a grateful heart. Listening to their words is far better than reading ten years. We feel everything with a delicate heart and feel selfless and unreservedly. Our parents are full of wisdom, and their image is so great in our hearts. At the same time, we are pleasantly surprised to find that they are eager to understand us and are eager to be understood by us.
In fact, you can be a confidant. In this activity, we have a deeper understanding of family ties. Love is an oasis in a deserted desert. When you are lonely and disconsolate, you are weak and thirsty. He will step forward, with only a drop of water, and the rolling ocean of life will spread across the heart. Love is the star of the night. We once pursued the goal and ignored its existence until one day we didn't recognize the direction, and looked up slightly. A soft light led us to take firm steps. Love is a harbor in the course of the voyage. When we go on the rocks again and again, we are slowly entering. There is no wind and waves. We can stop here, repair the wounds, prepare the supply, and raise the sails again. Because family is great, so we are grateful for family ties. At the same time, we are grateful to the teacher's diligently cultivation, “sunshine project” set up a stage for us to display many aspects of our talents.
They inspired us to write a letter to the parents during the Mid Autumn Festival, offering a greeting to their parents and saying thanks. It is their careful preparation of the parents and children communication activities, they not only inculcate us, but also often with us to the heart and heart of communication, this is the blend of kindness and friendship. So we are grateful not only for our family but also for teachers and students.
篇28：感恩节作文英语30字
There are clouds in the ancients: the water is dripping, and when the spring is reported. In this world, there are many people who have mercy on us, such as parents, relatives and friends, classmates, colleagues, leaders, subordinates, government, society and so on.
Our lives, our health, our property, and the air, sunshine and water we enjoy every day should be our gratitude. So, although the suffering can not be forgotten, sin must be punished, but we should always be thankful and work hard to repay the organizations and people that give us kindness. So, I'd like to have a Thanksgiving Day.
On the day of Thanksgiving Day, I can bring the full marks test paper, exquisite gifts and awards in all aspects to the teachers. Return the alma mater's grace, because it is the teachers who nurture me to grow up. On the day of the Thanksgiving Day, I could hold a flag and come to the government building in return for the government's grace, because it was the government that provided me with a peaceful order and made us free from chaos. On the day of the Thanksgiving Day, I could also take money to give money to the society in return for the grace of the society, because it was a society that provided me with such a wonderful time and a free life. The heart of gratitude makes us repent and accept due punishment for our own faults or crimes; the heart of gratitude is enough to dilute the grievances and bitterness of our heart, and the heart of gratitude can help us through the greatest pain and disaster, with the heart of gratitude, and we will gradually forgive those who have had with you. Grudges even touch the people of your heart. With gratitude, we can live in a grateful world. Please invite everyone to take this kind of gratitude into action and repay everyone who has mercy on you.
I hope that there will be a Thanksgiving festival on the calendar card, so that everyone can be grateful and act in the November 24th Thanksgiving festival. Make the whole world full of love.
篇29：感恩节作文英语30字
The ancients said: “the dripping water, the Yongquan report” is grateful to our nation's fine tradition, but also a person's minimum moral character. There is an old saying in China that “filial piety and filial piety first” means that filial piety is the first of all kinds of morality.
When the flowers lifted their heads and spread sweet smiles, they said they were grateful for their nourishment. When white clouds float in the sky, a picture of gratitude is outlined, which is the gratitude of the white clouds for feeding the blue sky. An inscription
We live in a warm world. Perhaps we have never experienced the love that burst out of life in the moving story. But the love of our parents is like a trickle flowing into our hearts. Our parents not only gave us life, but also made painstaking efforts and sweat for our growth. I am a lucky dog. I have the love of my parents, sweet as sweet as sweet, and broad as the sea.
The love of a parent is like a fig that does not bloom or show off. There is no magnificent language, only simple action. The maternal love is great, the father is selfless, we grow up in the parents' infancy. It is not only “the drip of the water”, but also the flood of spring. What's more, what is the birth of our parents? Thanksgiving needs no earthshaking, just a greeting, a call, some emotion. A grateful heart is magnanimous and broad-minded.
“How thankful” is a simple and powerful word. He is easy to understand. He lives with people all his life. Let's thank our parents from now on. Actually, Thanksgiving is very simple. Parents have no demand for their children, parents are the greatest, but the easiest to satisfy is never too much, as long as a small action can make them feel warm. Let us be grateful to our parents, give our parents a little more tolerance and understanding, and give them some comfort and encouragement. When they entered the door, they handed them a cup of hot tea to make them feel warm from us. Let us act. Thanksgiving is the parent now.
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