雅思9分英文自我介绍

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篇1：雅思阅读9分攻略

雅思阅读9分攻略

在这里ZZ要插一句话，其实阅读上了7.5之后，你的分数到底是多少，就有一些运气成分了

因为能拿到7.5的小伙伴要么就是基础特别好，真的看得懂

要么就是技巧特别好，做的特别顺

所以..小伙伴们一定要先拼一个7或者7.5，然后可以奔着更高的分去努力

我这次阅读准备过程主要就是跟着ZZ的打卡群刷剑10和11，自己也做了点题(很少 最多就十多篇)：用的是9分达人和其他的一些资料。

阅读比较基本的(每天要做的)东西就是单词和538，我比较懒了…538过了几遍，但是完全没记全…然后我有一张生词纸(对，很惭愧。。。不是本，是一张A4纸)把每篇阅读碰到的答案句和题干生词摘出来，然后我发现有很多词雅思超级爱考，这些词不一定是答案词或者替换词，但影响我理解的词，永远在这一张纸上。我想多写点都写不出来了，就那些词，我错永远是因为他们。从这个角度来说，我觉得雅思阅读是真的很善良，不用像托福和GMAT那样疯狂背词，你只要找到自己的问题根源提分是很快的。我觉得对大多数想上6.5的考生来说，原文中生词肯定是很多很多的，把所有生词找出来很耗时间，对短时间提分也不太有效，所以只找答案句和题干以及影响阅读的生词就好了，比较省时间，而且见效快。

有基础打底之后，练习也要跟上。每个人的瓶颈都不太一样，到底是哪里出了问题怎么去治，我觉得这个还是要靠自己去“诊断”。速度慢就练打包做题和自己对文章的信息概括，每一段自己总结一个summary,然后再对照答案看自己和答案总结的哪里不一样，时间久了就能感受到雅思的套路了，因为毕竟自己想法和雅思阅读考试是有偏差的，尽管有时候自己想的不错，但考雅思，你要遵循雅思的规则和逻辑，他说哪个对，你就选哪个。我本身的阅读速度不慢，主要问题是正确率不太高。所以我是逐个题型去攻破的，先保证填空题基本不错，然后是“”进阶版填空“：”TFNG和单选，其实这三项保证正确率的话阅读6.5肯定就有了，这三项靠刘洪波老师的阅读真经和538找同替就可以做到，不需要动脑子不需要自己想，找原文答案就行了。

如果还想要更高的话，就需要攻克matching和heading，这两项好像是大多数考生最怕的题型。但我觉得单句matching(人物观点匹配、时间观点匹配)和list of headings可以算是简单题型，主要是阅读速度和方法限制正确率，因为它可以算作是给了定位词和答案句的单句或者几句heading，不管是人名时间观点，还是段落大意，都是可以定位可以明确在答案句里找同替或者段落的相近意思，我觉得最麻烦的是半句匹配和细节匹配，这两个题是乱序的，如果做题量不够，对同替的思维没有熟练到7分以上的话，想拿下来这两个题是很难的。一个是找不到，一个是总结不出来意思不知道选什么。但这两种题可以靠长期练习掌握的”雅思逻辑“和自己总结段落大意来提高，花费的时间比较久，但一旦突破，就是很大的提高了。

有了词汇和练习，在实际做题过程中，如果想要提速度，打包做题是必须的。说到这个我真的太感激ZZ了，如果当年不是ZZ带我入的门，我觉得我不可能找到做阅读的正确道路，更不可能考到9，所以我最大的阅读心得就是按ZZ讲的每一件事去做，怎么审不同题型，怎么打包，怎么做标记。我是比较懒的人，最多完成了ZZ要求的60%，但还是进步很明显。所以ZZ要求做什么，去做就可以了，只要用心完成了，结局不会让你失望的。打包做题我最初是靠ZZ 的“压制”，当年ZZ说不管你多想往回翻卷子，不许翻，靠记忆力记题干。后来没有老师了，我就秉承着ZZ的这种精神，强迫自己记题干，记更多信息，时间久了，练习得多了，速度慢慢就上来了。

然后是关于9分，其实我很久之前阅读速度就提上来了，后来真的是做太多次雅思了，当然没到老师们备课的那种熟练程度，但基本上剑桥的题填空TFNG和单选我都是能一眼找到答案句的程度了，对同替的敏感可能也是在这个过程中练出来的，就不管是matching, heading还是细节题，只要有答案句出现，我基本都能马上反应过来，不会有找不着或者丢题的情况，不需要重读文章，这样的话阅读速度就可以很快，简单的文章我10min左右就做完了，然后正确率好一点是全对，不好的话最多会错4个。难一点的文章，也就是一般来说的第三篇，我会花20min去做，因为难的文章我确实不敢做太快，怕正确率会很糟糕。然后我阅读速度这么快还有一个原因就是和性格有关系，说出来有点好笑，就是我对学习特别没耐心……觉得做题很烦，就想赶紧做完赶紧玩……长此以往，对玩的向往督促着我，指引着我，越做越快…越做越快…

这次考试我是在澳洲考的，考试顺序是写作阅读听力，和国内是相反的。考试用的是需要自己削的铅笔..可以利用每场考试结束之后收卷子的时间来削，或者监考老师人比较好的会削好替换铅笔给考生换。总的来说国外口语考官比我在国内遇到的大部分考官态度和善很多，不管有没有在听你说话都会微笑点头，考之前会和你聊几句，多少能缓解一些紧张情绪。还有一点是，我不是那种能突击一个月就提分很多的奇迹选手，一个是我完全受不了高强度的学习，一天十多个小时坐那儿不动对我这个狗子来说是几乎不可能的事…另外一个是我的积累很缓慢，都是积累到一个点，才能真正突破一下上一个台阶。我从七月开始就断断续续在学雅思了，现在已经是五个月过去了，中间也有放羊的时候，但基本上还是断断续续折腾着在学。虽然看上去1号和8号隔了一个星期阅读就提高了1.5，但实际上我这一周基本没有学习，题都基本没做，只能说是之前的积累加运气考到了9分的，不是一周就能7.5提到9。

最后就是鸡汤时刻了，因为我基础实属一般，听力最开始是5，阅读是6。我都考到听力7阅读9了，其他宝宝肯定都可以的!!!!!希望大家早日考到理想的成绩啦!!!!

还有一个小彩蛋，就是我这两次考试阅读的填空答案词都碰到了lead, 考的是名词形式的意思(领导，榜样)。第一场机考下来我是不太确定的，因为这个词我从来没用过名词形式的意思，但文章中又没有其他能填的词了，考完没想太多也没查(我心是真的很大)。第二场笔试的阅读我又碰到了这个词，文章中依然除了这个词以外没有能填的词，并且极为鸡贼地在原文里给了其他两个“很名词”的干扰答案。两次考的分别是“a lead”和“a form of lead”，雅思还是比较善良，能让考生看出来这是个名词。近期考试的小伙伴们可以注意一下，这可能是雅思答案词新宠，万一碰到lead当答案就可以空手拿分了哈哈哈哈。

ZZ在这里又要插一句了~

雅思阅读真的不是考你能不能100%读懂原文说啥

人家考的是你能不能100%知道雅思阅读考啥

所以..抓好真题，抓好你手上最值钱的材料

按照最科学的方法

雅思阅读材料大集合：最适合春天吃的美食

New research suggests some foods have the power to guard skin from the damage caused by the sun's UV radiation. While a salad is no substitute for sunblock, these healthy foods could add inner protection against sunburn and wrinkles at the cellular level.

新的研究发现表明某些食物可以帮助肌肤免受阳光紫外线的侵害。但是，一盘沙拉并不能代替防晒霜，这些健康食物可以加强身体内在机能，保护皮肤不受侵害并延缓细胞衰老。

Citrus Fruits 柑橘类水果

Citrus fruits have the potent ingredient limonene, associated with a whopping 34 percent lower risk of skin cancer in one University of Arizona study of 470 women and men.

柑橘类水果含有丰富的柠檬烯。亚利桑那大学对470位女性和男性进行的研究表明，柠檬烯可以将患皮肤癌的风险降低34%

Green tea 绿茶

This delicately flavored tea is full of antioxidants called EGCGs. Among their health-promoting capabilities: EGCGs stopped genetic damage in human skin cells exposed to UV light in one University of Wisconsin study.

绿茶所含有的抗氧化剂叫做茶多酚。威斯康星大学的研究表明茶多酚可以使暴露在紫外线下的肌肤免受基因损害。

Carrots 胡萝卜

Carrots—or any other red, yellow, and orange fruits and vegetables—are packed with carotenoids, and studies show they reduce sunburn intensity.

胡萝卜或者任何红色，黄色及橙色水果和蔬菜都富含类胡萝卜素，研究表明这些果蔬可以降低日晒强度。

Red Peppers 红椒

Like carrots, red peppers are also especially helpful in reducing sunburn intensity.

和红萝卜一样，红椒在降低日晒强度方面有显著效果。

Spinach 菠菜

Leafy greens, like dark green lettuce, spinach, kale, and Swiss chard, are top sources of the antioxidants lutein and zeaxanthin, which halted cell growth prompted by UV light in animal studies.绿叶蔬菜，如绿色莴苣，菠菜，甘蓝菜和唐莴苣均含有非常丰富的抗氧化剂叶黄素和玉米黄素，这些抗氧化剂可以阻止紫外线引起的细胞生长。

Salmon 三文鱼

This fish is a great source of oils rich in omega-3 fatty acids. In a small British study, fish oils guarded against sunburn and DNA changes that can lead to cancer.

三文鱼的鱼油富含丰富的脂肪酸。研究表明鱼油可以预防易引发癌症的晒黑晒伤和DNA改变。

Walnuts 核桃

Like salmon, walnuts are high in essential fatty acids that could guard against sunburn.

和三文鱼一样，核桃也富含有丰富的人体必需脂肪酸，而这类脂肪酸可以抵御晒伤晒黑。

雅思阅读材料大集合：寿司热量比汉堡薯条还高

Sushi is no longer the sole preserve of the adventurous diner. These days, grabbing a pack for lunch is almost as common as picking up a cheese and pickle sandwich.

寿司不再是美食冒险家的专利了。如今，买一盒寿司作午餐几乎就像买奶酪泡菜三明治一样稀松平常。

The Japanese dish can be bought from every major supermarket (where sales have risen a staggering 88 percent in the past two years).

在每个大型超市都可以买到这一日本料理(在过去两年内寿司销售量猛增了88%)。

Indeed, the British sushi industry — of which Tesco has a 60 percent market share — is worth more than ?56?million annually.

事实上，英国的寿司产业(其中乐购公司占了60%的市场份额)每年收益超过了5600万英镑。

The main reason for its surge in popularity is its reputation as a healthy meal. Japanese women are among the healthiest in the world, while slender celebrities such as Victoria Beckham, Cheryl Cole and Keira Knightley are all fans of the raw fish dish.

寿司变得如此受欢迎，主要原因是它被誉为健康食品。日本女性是全世界最健康的，而像维多利亚?贝克汉姆、谢丽尔?科尔和凯拉?奈特莉这些拥有苗条身材的名人都是这种生鱼料理的粉丝。

But do sushi’s nutrition credentials — especially the Western version — stack up? Not always, according to dietitian Rachel Beller. In her book Eat To Lose, Eat To Win, she says a ‘light lunch’ of sushi may mean you overdose on calories and carbohydrates.

但是寿司(尤其是西方版寿司)确实有营养学证明吗?营养学家瑞秋?贝勒表示，并非总是如此。她在自己的书《瘦在饮食，赢在饮食》中说，一份“简单的”寿司午餐可能意味着你摄入了过量卡路里和碳水化合物。

‘A typical sushi roll contains 290 to 350 calories and has the carbohydrate equivalent of two-and-a-half to four slices of bread,’ says Ms Beller.

贝勒女士说：“一个典型的寿司卷含有290至350卡路里，其碳水化合物含量相当于两片半到四片面包所含的碳水化合物。”

‘So a California roll (round rolled sushi, containing a small piece of fish and avocado plus fatty mayonnaise) equals two sandwiches filled with crab sticks (processed fish that is flavoured and coloured to look and taste like crab), a sliver of avocado and a tiny bit of veg.’

“因此一个加州卷(圆形的卷状寿司，含有一小片鱼、鳄梨和含油脂的蛋黄酱)相当于两个夹有蟹肉棒的三明治(蟹肉棒是经过调味和上色、使其具有蟹肉的外观和口感的一种鱼类加工产品)、一片鳄梨和一点蔬菜。”

Bear in mind a sushi lunch contains two or three of these rolls, a total of up to 1,050 calories, and it’s easy to see how we’re conning ourselves that we’re enjoying a low-calorie, healthy lunch.

别忘了一顿寿司午餐包含两到三个这种寿司卷，总热量达到1050卡路里，这样很容易可以看出，我们以为吃寿司午餐是在享用低热量健康饮食，其实是在自欺欺人。

Many of us believe eating sushi is a good way to get the Government’s recommended two portions of fish each week, but here’s the problem: most sushi contains very little protein, despite its expense.

许多人认为吃寿司是达到政府建议的每周两份鱼的饮食标准的好方法，但是问题是：尽管寿司价格不菲，但大部分寿司所含的蛋白质很少。

Health experts say a portion of fish should weigh 140g, but on average, the fish in a California roll or piece of nigiri (rice with fish balanced on the top) weighs just 5g.

健康专家称，一份鱼的重量应为140克，但是平均来看，一个加州卷或一个生鱼片寿司(把鱼片均匀地放在米饭上的料理)中的鱼肉重量只达到5克。

You’d need to eat 28 pieces of sushi to reach your 140g portion — or more, if you choose a mixed sushi box containing vegetarian varieties.

你将需要吃28个寿司才能达到140克的鱼肉摄入标准，或需要吃更多——如果你选择的是含有多种蔬菜的混搭寿司盒。

Even ‘fish’ sushi boxes don’t contain much. Marks & Spencer Fish Sushi Selection (191g, ?4.68) has just 36g of fish, meaning you would have to eat four boxes and consume 1,184 calories to get one of your recommended fish portions.

即使“全鱼”寿司盒所含的鱼肉也不多。玛莎百货的精选鱼片寿司(191克，4.68英镑)只含有36克鱼，这意味着你将必须吃掉四盒这样的寿司，摄入1184卡路里才能达到建议的鱼肉摄入量。

篇2：新东方雅思9分写作

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, others think it has other functions. Discuss and say what the other functions are?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment. While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one. We should see this issue with an all-sided view. In the perspective of society, education is for improvement. Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools. This is the way in which our human society develops. And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way, people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.

In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives. Through education, we can explore different cultures and customs. Thus in this way education can open our eyes and broaden our mind. And education can also meet interests of each student.

While of course, all the functions mentioned above have one common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place. For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable. So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living. And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations, it needs skilled workers to support economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.

So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected. (280 words)

雅思写作9分范文：old people

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?

You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Parents have devoted all their lives and energy to their children and when they are old, it is time for their children to repay their care and love. Therefore, it seems that it should be the children’s responsibility to take good care of their parents in their later years. However, I believe that a better way of ensuring that aged parents lead a happy and healthy life is to put them in nursing homes.

Living in nursing homes, they have more opportunities to communicate with their peers. Keeping each other’s company, they don’t feel lonely and can do a great deal of things together, such as morning exercise, playing games, and exchanging memories and stories from their past. On the other hand, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying.

In such retirement homes, aging people can receive intensive medical care from professional doctors. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those old people in poor health. Moreover, they could have regular medical check-ups so that any disease could be diagnosed in its early stage. What is the most beneficial is that if any disease strikes them, medical services are immediately available.

Indeed, there are also benefits for children’s work and study when nursing homes take over the task of caring for the elderly. Children, free from care, can devote themselves to work or study and achieve more success.

Since nursing homes benefits seniors and other family members so much, I believe that old people should be sent to nursing homes. (276 words)

雅思写作9分范文：children with poverty

Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Among the factors that influence a child’s development, family financial background is a critical one. Empirically kids from rich families, after entering adulthood, deal with problems differently from those from less well-off households. Generally the latter is more capable of problem-solving.

Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals. Rich kids have more toys. If a toy truck gets broken, parents would buy their children another fancier, more expensive one. Rich kids go the best school in the neighborhood. On the contrary, children from an ordinary family have to take good care of their toys. Their parents are often busy with work. So children have chances to make many of their own decisions. Many kids babysit younger brothers or sisters or even take small part-time jobs to help the family. Such differences in the upbringing often tough them for adult life.

Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life. For example, they go to a good school only because they have excellent grades, not because daddy donates a building for the school. Hard work and constant trying are the only way to change their life. So they fight to be a winner. But rich kids are so over-protected by their families that they hardly know the harsh world until they leave college and start to work. There are more successful entrepreneurs, actors, doctors, and lawyers from poor families than from rich ones. Poor kids know how to survive in the big wild world better than their rich friends.

But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals. Many of them even start businesses independent from their families. But still most of them know more about having fun than about being a good working professional.

To sum up, less privileged family background generally enables children to be more responsible and independent. Poor kids value hard work more, handle competition better than rich kids, and cope with problems better after becoming adults.

这篇雅思写作范文的写作思路：文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。

态度：同意

论点一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

论据：对待玩具的不同---more responsible，对待学习的不同-----more independent，帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent

论点二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.

论据：普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比

让步段论点：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

结论：总结之前的提到的主要观点

总结：这篇文章需要考生会设身处地考虑出身不同的孩子长大后如何用不同的方式态度对待生活中问题。在考试或者练习写作的时候尽量学会使用生活中普通的例子说明支持自己的观点。

雅思写作9分范文：animal experiment

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings?

You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Every day, thousands of people are saved from painful diseases and death by powerful medical drugs and treatments. This incredible gift of medicine would not be possible without animal testing. Despite these overwhelming benefits, however, some people are calling for animal testing to be banned because of alleged cruelty. This essay will examine arguments for and against animal testing.

Those against the use of animal testing claim that it is inhumane to use animals in experiments. I disagree completely. It would be much more inhumane to test new drugs on children or adults. Even if it were possible, it would also take much longer to see potential effects, because of the length of time we live compared to laboratory animals such as rats or rabbits.

Opponents of animal testing also claim that the results are not applicable to humans. This may be partly true. Some drugs have had to be withdrawn, despite testing. However, we simply do not have alternative methods of testing. Computer models are not advanced enough, and testing on plants is much less applicable to humans than tests on animals such as monkeys. Until we have a better system, we must use animal testing.

A further point often raised against animal testing is that it is cruel. Some of the tests certainly seem painful, but the great majority of people on this planet eat meat or wear leather without any guilt. Where is their sympathy for animals? Furthermore, animals clearly do not feel the same way as humans, and scientists are careful to minimize stress in the animals, since this would damage their research.

I agree that we need to make sure that animals who are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.(311 words)

雅思写作9分范文：affect of advertisement

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe commodities that are popular among consumers reflect the power of advertisement rather than the real needs of people. Do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Whether we like it or not, advertisement has been pouring into our daily life. They are so powerful that some people believe that it is not the needs of people but the power advertisement that makes commodities popular. Personally I don’t agree with this opinion.

First, let’s make clear what the real needs of people are. Real needs can be divided into two categories: the material satisfaction and spiritual satisfaction. People tend to regard material satisfaction as real needs and spiritual satisfaction as waste of money and time. This is not true. Some commodities may not be useful but they can give the owner a kind of satisfaction.

Second, let’s make clear the reason why advertisement is powerful. The key principle of advertisers is to grasp the needs of consumers, then pass the potential consumers the information that their commodities can meet your need. Advertisers can promote the needs of people, exploit the needs or even produce the needs of people. But whatever they do, it will be based on the needs of people.

But there are some advertisements that exaggerate the functions of the commodities to tell the wrong information to consumers. They make the commodities popular by cheating the majority of consumers. And also there are some commodities that do harm to the health of consumers and to the society. For example, smoking is poisonous, but the advertisements try to make a heroic image of the smokers, as the result smoking is popular among young men who are dreaming to become heroes in women’s eyes. But such advertisements are minorities.

In summary, advertisements bring us convenience to choose the commodities that can meet our needs. Most of the commodities are popular due to their usefulness, only some of them are due to the influence of advertisement.(298 words)

篇3：雅思9分攻略经验

雅思9分大神亲述：你可能经历了一个假的雅思备考?!

这段不需要任何专业性的工作并不是Timothy老师想要的生活，于是走上了雅思考试之路，最终拿到了雅思9分的成绩。另外，Timothy老师同时也在考IB(International Baccalaureate，大学预科项目)，所以Timothy老师的整个环境就是天天都在讲英语。

正确的态度是备考路上的指明灯

Timothy老师在讲述他当年考雅思的经历时，突出表明了学习态度是非常重要的一个点：“ 雅思考试到底是什么?简单来说，雅思考试其实不是为了这个考试才学英语的，这不是考试的目的，但是会发现现在大约90%的学生都是这样子的态度，没有考试我就不学英语，有了考试我才会有学习英语这一说法，这是错误的想法。这个考试本身是对你英语能力的一个测试，并不是你学语言的终点，而是你学习语言路上的一个点而已，所以不管是哪一家机构，他只能教你20%的内容，剩下80%的内容需要自己去学习，有这样的觉悟是非常重要的。其次，才是你在学习语言(也包括备考雅思)的路上，应该做哪些努力。”

长期备考学习方法：

当你还有一年或者更长的时间备战雅思的时候，你就可以一个一个板块的练习，当然除了练习之外，Timothy老师觉得关于语言其他方面的努力也是非常重要的，这就需要你对同等level的东西多加学习。

压低分数的正确解释：提升口语能力是王道

就比如你在雅思考试中拿到7766或8866(口语都是6)这样的成绩时，而大部分的同学最后的成绩基本上只会拿到5.5的分数，这样就不能出国。而出现这样的原因，不是因为传闻中雅思考官主观性的压低分数，而是因为在国外有非常多presentation，所以雅思不仅是对语言的考验，也是考虑到了国外大学的适应能力。

就比如在雅思的口语考试中，考官会问你：你喜欢吃巧克力么?你喜欢照镜子吗?没有任何套路而又非常的贴近生活，所以完全可以在考试上自由发挥，而不要把口语考试当作回答问题，其实就是跟他chatting，这样轻松一点效果反而会更好一点。而像这种“Where is your hometown? My hometown is the beautiful city of Shanghai ,it is located near the waterside ,so I always do a lot of sporting activities.”，其实你只要回答Shanghai就好，这样各种添油加醋是不是觉得非常别扭。

其实低分考生的口语练习并不是很难，口语交流不需要太花哨的东西，你只要保障发音准确、表达流畅，前后答案有相关性就好。

而锻炼口语最好的办法就是将练习口语的地方搬到公共场合，而不是将同学限制在教师课堂上，比如电梯演讲。如果可以克服在电梯里演讲的恐怖，你就能在老外面前说任何东西，因为没有任何事情比再在电梯里演讲更恐怖了，因为电梯肯定在商场里，随时都会有人进出，而突然开口又是一个非常需要勇气的事情，如果练习口语时能做到这一点，你就会觉得口语其实是一个非常easy的事情，表达就会非常自由了。

词汇量是永恒的主旋律

除了口语上的练习，Timothy老师也指出，单词也是备考雅思中最重要的一部分。

“单词，真的非常重要，然而，学单词并不是背单词表，你可以这样做，但是这样做不是你的，你有input，很自然就需要output，就好像吃了东西要拉屎一样(你不可能不需要拉屎)。所以一样的道理，学了这些单词，你一定要尝试用不同办法去用，最简单的就是你可以做不同的练习，比如填空练习，选择题等，你可以把这个词汇放到一个句子里面，到一个回答甚至是短语中去，而且这个背单词的时间应该占据你整个温习时间的百分之五十。”(等你按照我这样的方案学单词时，你会发现生活中用到的词语，换到别的语境居然还可以那样用，所以，多阅读也是非常重要的。

写作：你的观点最加分

在后面的采访中，Timothy老师也提到了关于写作上的一些心得：“那些写作模版都是应试模板，而咱们的大部分同学都非常懒，就喜欢直接套模板，设想下，当考官看到你的essay时已经看了五十多个同样的句子了，如果是你，你会想看吗?所以考官估计也就是看一眼如果你的文章里开头、结尾框架不错，还有点模样的话立刻5.5分。”

所以在文章写作中，不要懒，要真的去写，去表达自己的观点、想法，哪怕没有那么华丽的辞藻。你可以套取，套取是有用，但是套取的前提是你懂的怎么去用，所以一定要让考官想看你的东西，有兴趣读下去。

短期冲刺建议：

当然，说了这么多，都是在充裕的复习时间的前提下，才可以这样做。如果你没有那么多时间去系统的复习，或者说再有半个月就要考试了，还没复习怎么办?那这个时候，你能做的就是刷题，不停的刷题，只有题海战术，没有别的办法。因为你要短时间把所有东西都塞进脑子，而短期冲刺的第一点就是你一定要对题目有了解，知道你要面对的是什么，不能空着脑子不知道你要干什么就去考试，熟悉题型，熟悉回答方法，熟悉出题人长期会出的题目有哪些，这样的复习就是非常有效的。

“这只是在你没有足够时间复习的情况下给你的建议，雅思只是一个门槛，也许你考过雅思之后一辈子都不用考雅思，但是因为备考的这个过程，这些技巧会影响你一辈子，这是你的交流技巧，你如果你能和别人交流的话，出国后你怎么跟那些老外去认识?然后你就可以跟中国人待在一起，那最后的结果是什么?”Timothy老师也透露，他自己的普通话就是这样联系的，这也是一种语言环境，想象一下，学习英语也需要这样的语言环境。

看到这里，Timothy老师学习英语的经历是不是觉得自己考了一个假的雅思，试着和Timothy老师对比下自己备考雅思的方法，是不是可以适当的调整下自己的学习方法。如果你打算出国，却还没有开始复习，那就抓紧行动起来吧，借鉴Timothy老师的学习方法(不是照搬)，没准你就是下一个雅思9分的大神。

雅思写作基本思路指导技巧

1.2个量决定上5分：是否过250字，是否切题

2.2个量决定是否上6分：句型复杂程度，错误数量

3.2个量决定是否上7分：词汇的复杂和精细程度，句型的多样程度。

以上后面的要求同时包含前面的要求，也就是说，如果你的字数不到250，即使句型不错，一般很难得到7分，除非写出了9分的句型和词汇，如剑桥5G类第一套写作题目的范文，A类同学不要吝啬字数。

那么我们继续叙述准备的其它思路。

写作问题无非以下问题：

1.不知道写什么

2.不知道怎么写才是好

3.不知道怎么写才能写快

4.没有例子。

其实这些都不是问题。

1.要准备一个考试周期的重点问题，把类似的题目的论点总结起来，知道什么词汇可以解决那些问题。

2.要熟悉不同文章体裁的写法，主要是段落的内容和目的的区别，例如，同意与否题就不可以和讨论题相混淆，优缺点题也不可以和问题解决型相混合。

3.分清考官改卷重点，重要的位置要多花些时间，不重要的位置要花少些时间。具体位置在此就不多说了，课堂上自然会详细阐述。

4.多背例句，背句型而不是句子，还有就是同义词的数量，尽量做到同一段同一个重要的概念不要重复表达。同义词的档次也要上去，不能满足于四级单词，认为大学四级词汇可以搞定雅思是极端错误的，因为四级和雅思属于完全不同的考试体系，背四级考雅思等于缘木求鱼。

5.学习英语本身的修辞手法，如押头韵，暗喻，类比，排比，这些都是考官喜欢的东西。

时间起码2个月，前提是你具有了高中水准，重点不在于写很优美的文章，而在于写合乎考试要求的文章，更具体的说，就是在规定时间里写合乎考试要求的文章。

那么，请各位我的学生或者读者注意，你们的准备最好可以使用最新的雅思材料，如剑桥4，5，6的真题，不管是否写作，一定要以新题来衡量，还有就是近期考题和澳洲考区的题目。有些书已经很久了还在卖，我觉得就不是很负责任，比如有些所谓的权威雅思书籍已经很久不改题库了，那么其实对于雅思考试来说，题型可能会已经跟不上形式的需要了。

教你如何展开雅思作文思路

雅思作文思路如何展开?对于很对备考雅思的同学来说，学习如何遣词造句等打磨文章的办法，还不如学习如何展开雅思作文思路，因为一个好的雅思作文思路用好了，遣词造句方面应该就问题不大了。因为雅思写作中，考官考察的是你具体的写作内容，你的观点是否有理有据，这些都需要你的雅思作文思路来达到。今天小编就整理了两篇大作文，大家一起来看看这些雅思作文思路，可以参考借鉴一下。

一、跳槽的原因及解决办法

1.相关词汇： Fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly, keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society

2.原因： (1)社会压力大，人们的竞争意识增强，不断改变以适应社会的变化 (2)处于个人发展的需要，寻求升职，更新知识 (3)金钱的诱惑，不在乎在哪儿工作，做什么职业，只要挣钱多 (4)家庭原因，spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学

3.解决方法：(1)要理性看待，一般来说，stability equals success (2)chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable (3)政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境，留住人才 (4)公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识

二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么平衡写：

1. 认为应该提供实际知识的：(1)大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能(2)有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家

2. 反对方(1) It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法 (2) 不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian, narrow-minded, lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school

3. 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。

以上就是小编想要给大家介绍雅思作文思路如何展开的内容，内容是刻板的，但是希望通过我们的介绍能够让考生开阔眼界，取得经验总结出属于自己的方式方法，最后，祝大家在考试中取得好成绩。

常用的雅思写作句型推荐

第一组

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...

13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...

16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of... 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through ... 1995年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...

27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and... ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为...

29.the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily. ...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%]. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为...百分点。 35.the figures/situation bottomed out in... 数字(情况)在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。

37.a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by... a增长了...

39.a increased to... a增长到...

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高(低)

41.there is an upward trend in the number of... ...数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to... ...到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down. 从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of... 从这年起，...逐渐下降至...

45.be similar to... 与...相似

46.be the same as... 与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and... ...与...之间有许多相似(不同)之处

48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in... a与b之间的差别在于...

50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in... ...年...急剧上升。

第二组

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2.the date lead us to the conclusion that```

3.the date show```

4.the tree diagram reveals how```

5.the figures show```

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of```

7.the pie graph depicts```

8.the graph provides some interesting date regarding```

9.the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ```

10.as is shown in the table ```

11.from the table ,we can clearly see that ```

12.this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ````

13.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in```

14.as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the fluctuation of ```

15.over the period from ```to ```the```remained level.

16.in the year between ```and ```.

17.in the 3 years spanning from through .

18.the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.

19.the number sharply went up to ```

20.the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```

21.the percentage remained steady at```

22.the percentage of ```is slightly large than that of.

23.there is not a great deal of difference between ```and ```

24.the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ```

25.```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily.

26.there is an upward trend in the number of ```

27.a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```

28.from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down.

29.from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the ```reaching a figure of.

30.be similar to ```be the same as

31.there are a lot similarities between ```and ```

32.the difference between X and Y lies in

篇4：雅思阅读9分炼成

词汇是语言内功的“真气”。考生必须放弃急功近利的思想，首先踏踏实实地苦练“内功”，即语言基本功，主要是词汇、语法基础和各项语言技能。其实，任何一种语言的学习都是离不开词汇的。俗话说:“巧妇难为无米之炊”，所以考生一定要注意词汇的积累。阅读考试通常要求考生至少具备3000词左右的基本词汇，如果想要考高分的话，应该有6000——8000个词汇的储备。建议学生在修炼词汇时，综合运用各种手段。除了利用词根、前缀和后缀进行记忆，同时还可以利用同义词、反义词和分类去记忆。

语法基础是语言内功的 “真气流动”，即运用内功的心法。阅读中经常会出现较长的复合句，考生如果没有一定的语法基础是很难准确理解句子的。具体来说，考生起码要能准确判断一个句子的主谓宾。大多数学生在准备雅思考试时已基本掌握了较完备的语法知识，但有两点明显的“软肋”：一是语法知识的细致程度不够，比如，很多学生分不清楚nomore than和no lessthan的区别。二是语法融会贯通的灵活程度不足。

各项语言技能的修炼是语言内功的“全身经络通气”阶段，也是至关重要的一关。每一道雅思题背后都是考查一种或几种语言能力。雅思考试需要的各项语言技能在听、说、读、写方面也各有不同。阅读要求学生有提取信息、重组信息、归纳总结信息、区分事实信息和主观论点的能力等等。 Paraphrase贯穿雅思听说读写之中，他建议学生课后多翻看英文版牛津字典，强化修炼这一“内功”，比如，要求学生用英文描述“eyes”(你想一想，你能描述出来吗? )。

在雅思的内功修炼基本达到目标后，就要开始进行“招式”的修炼，即熟悉雅思考试的各项题型，训练各种题型的解题方法和技巧。通过“招式”的训练，提升考生的考试能力。

阅读的“招式”分为雅思阅读的题型和文章背景。在进行雅思阅读的“招式”修炼时，我们要求学生结合已经修炼的阅读技能，熟练掌握各种解题技巧。

很多考生惧怕的阅读判断题，有其两大特点：(一)直接型，(二)推论型。所谓直接型就是所出的试题与原文内容基本一致，只是在同义词或词性上作了适当的变动。例如：Healways comes back at9 in the evening.(他常常到晚上9点才回家。 )而试题可能则以：He never turns back before 9in the evening.(他从不在每晚9点前回家。 )这里只是副词 always (经常)和never(从不)对换了一下位置，其次是come back(回家)以另一种形式表达turn back(回家)。显而易见，这是一个直接型的考题。所谓推论型就是在原文的基础上，试题中稍稍作了一些推测。 例 如 ：It's so strange why hedoesn't come yetnow.(今天可怪了，他到现在还没来。)试题可能会以这种形式 ：According to the passage, it islikely to know thathe never comes late. (根据题意，有可能得知他从没迟到过。)另外，要想获得雅思阅读高分，了解雅思阅读常考文章的背景知识也很重要。

篇5：雅思阅读9分炼成

学生通过前面的“内功”和“招式”的修炼，已经基本具备了雅思考试的作战能力，但若想在战场上取得高分，“实战修炼”是必不可少的。

关于练习，考生应该首先知道自己的优势题型和劣势题型，并在备考过程中加强劣势题型的训练力度，保证进考场前在心理上不会惧怕某种题型，尽量做到题型上平行发展。在训练方法上，要避免盲目地做套题，就是说在每次练习前，学生都必须明白我想练习什么，提高什么：速度训练还是理解力的练习还是快速定位的练习等等。

“实战”练习可以选择剑桥雅思丛书(简称剑1-12)。其中，剑1是模拟题，可以用来熟悉一下考官的出题思路。剑2-12都是曾经在雅思考场上出现过的真题，是考生真正的“实战对象”。 由于剑2-4的出版年代较早，历时较长，倪老师主张学生对其中的材料进行单项训练。比如，把剑2-4阅读测试中的判断题全部放在一起去“修炼”，目的是融合前面修炼过的“内功”和“招式”，进一步强化学生的实战能力。把剑2-4里面的题目都进行过单项训练后，就可以开始使用剑5-12作为整体训练。经过几次这样的“实战修炼”，学生的身体素质、心理素质和实战状态都会得到极好的训练，从而为进行真正的战斗做好充分的准备。

其实雅思阅读满分的炼成归根结底是要耗费许多心血的，小编将这篇文章整理出来，希望为在屠鸭过程中，想要拿高分却迷茫无措的学子们提供一些建议与帮助!

雅思小作文类型有哪几种

那么雅思小作文一般会出什么题呢?雅思小作文类型有哪些呢?一般来说，雅思小作文都是图表作文，当然，图表的类型主要有五大类，这五大类是：表格图，曲线图，柱状图，饼状图和综合图五大类。

这五大雅思小作文图表类型的出题频次如下：

一般来说，柱图和曲线图是每月常考的题型，有时候会有连考或者交替考的趋势。

饼图和表格题也是相对频率较高的题型。偶尔也会考综合题。

综合图图表主要分为流程图和地图题，一般每季度轮换题库的时候会出现。不管考到哪种题型，其要求都是一致的，先要挑选重要数值并且在相关处作比较。

五大雅思小作文类型的写作要点：

一、表格图图表作文的写作要点

1 横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势。

2 不需要将每一个数据分别说明，突出强调数据最大值和最小值。

3 最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的。

二、曲线图图表作文的写作要点

1 极点说明。即，对图表当中最高的，最低的点要单独进行说明。

2 趋势说明。即，对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升，下降，波动，持平。

3 交点说明。即，对图表当中多根曲线的交.点进行对比说明。

三、饼状图图表和柱状图作文的写作要点

1 介绍各扇面及总体的关系。

2 各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间，不同地点的比较。

3 重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的，最小的，互相成倍的。

四、综合图图表作文的写作要点

1 不求甚解，不拘泥于细节。

2 分门别类，分段落详细介绍各个图表。

3 不画蛇添足，主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系。

雅思小作文类型有哪几种?雅思小作文一般都会出图表作文，因此考生们在平时要多练习图表写作，并掌握这五大类型的图表的写作要点，这样有利于拿到高分。

你的雅思作文句子有效吗?

句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素，但这并不意味着要求考生具备写长难句的能力。在追求输出像雅思阅读一样精到的语言之前，我们首先要确保的应当是写出来的句子是正确的。有效的句子甚而段落通常应当同时满足以下五个要素：一致、连贯、简洁、强调、多样。

1. 一致：如句内的逻辑关系，注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。

Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.

2. 连贯：这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。

We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.

→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.

He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.

→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.

Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.

Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.

Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

3. 简洁：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

It was small in size and blue in colour.

→ It was small and blue.

He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.

→ He prefers French wines.

4. 强调：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea)，每个段落都要有主题句(topic sentence)一般，每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。

He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.

→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.

There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.

→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.

At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.

→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen.

5. 多样：中文重重复，英文重替代，中英差异使然。

雅思写作模板之开头段写法

临近雅思考试，很多同学们在到处找雅思写作模板。不可否认，雅思写作模板的确能在我们临时抱佛脚的时候发挥适当的作用。但是如果把写作完全寄希望于雅思写作模板，那么你需要有逃过阅卷老师火眼金睛的运气。为了照顾一部分复习不是很踏实的同学，小编在这里整理了一个雅思写作模板的开头部分，希望那些感觉自己还没复习好的同学来认真的学习参考。

雅思写作模板：开头段

1. Nowadays there is a growing concern over...... Many people like......, while others are inclined to......

2. There is a debate/controversy today as to /over/concerning the issue/problem of ......

3. Those who criticize/oppose/argue that...... They believe that...... But people who advocate/favor/are for......, on the other hand, ........

4. Some people say that......, other people suggest that...... But I can hardly share this point of view for several reasons.

5. As far as I am concerned/Personally, I am in favor of the opinion that......

篇6：雅思面试英文自我介绍

雅思面试英文自我介绍

Good morning, my name is Jack. It is really a great honor to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today and consequently be enrolled in your prestigious university. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 21 years old，born in Hei Longjiang province, northeast of China, and I am a senior student at Beijing XX University.

My major is packaging engineering. And I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in June. In the past four years, I spent most of my time on study. I passed CET4/6 with a ease and acquired basic theoretical and practical knowledge of packaging and publishing. Besides, I have attended several packaging exhibitions held in Beijing, which really showed our professional advantages.

I have taken a tour to some big factories and companies, through which I got a deep understanding of domestic packaging industry. Compared to developed countries, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978, our packaging industry is still underdeveloped, messy and unstable, and the situation of employees in the field is awkward. But I have full confidence in its bright future if only our economy can be kept at the growth pace still.

I guess you may be interested in why I choose law as my future major and what is my plan of graduate life. I would like to tell you that to pursue law is one of my lifelong goals. I like my major packaging and won't give it up. If I can pursue master's degree here, I will combine law with my former education. I will work hard in such fields as patent, trademark and copyright on the basis of my years study in packaging and publishing.

As to my character, I cannot describe it well, but I know I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading and listening to the music, but I am not lonely, for I like to chat with my classmates about almost everything. My favorite pastime is to play volleyball, to play cards or to surf online. From life at university, I learn how to balance study and entertainment. By the way, I was an actor in our amazing drama club. I have a few glorious memories on stage.

篇7：雅思面试英文自我介绍

Good morning, my name is Jack. It is really a great honor to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today and consequently be enrolled in your prestigious university. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 21 years old，born in Hei Longjiang province, northeast of China, and I am a senior student at Beijing __ University. My major is packaging engineering. And I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in June. In the past four years, I spent most of my time on study. I passed CET4/6 with a ease and acquired basic theoretical and practical knowledge of packaging and publishing. Besides, I have attended several packaging e_hibitions held in Beijing, which really showed our professional advantages. I have taken a tour to some big factories and companies, through which I got a deep understanding of domestic packaging industry.

Compared to developed countries, unfortunately, although we have made e_traordinary progress since 1978, our packaging industry is still underdeveloped, messy and unstable, and the situation of employees in the field is awkward. But I have full confidence in its bright future if only our economy can be kept at the growth pace still. I guess you may be interested in why I choose law as my future major and what is my plan of graduate life. I would like to tell you that to pursue law is one of my lifelong goals. I like my major packaging and won't give it up.

If I can pursue master's degree here, I will combine law with my former education. I will work hard in such fields as patent, trademark and copyright on the basis of my years study in packaging and publishing. As to my character, I cannot describe it well, but I know I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading and listening to the music, but I am not lonely, for I like to chat with my classmates about almost everything. My favorite pastime is to play volleyball, to play cards or to surf online. From life at university, I learn how to balance study and entertainment. By the way, I was an actor in our amazing drama club. I have a few glorious memories on stage. That is my pride...

篇8：a类雅思小作文9分

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

该表格展示6国在二十年跨度里的年产生垃圾量。请作答。

雅思图表小作文图表题型9分范文：

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and .

In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.

Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.

The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.(165)

(154 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

最新a类雅思小作文9分范文 表格题之骑行上班

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between and .

该表格展示2001到英国不同地区居民骑车上班的人数。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题9分范文：

The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011.

Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years.

In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table.

Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.

(172 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

最新a类雅思小作文9分范文 表格题之年垃圾产量

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in .

该表格展示5国在不同品类商品上的消费金额(饮食，服饰，休闲教育)。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题型9分范文：

The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.(155)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

最新a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之水循环

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

该流程图展示地球上的水循环，包括水在地上，地表和地下的整个运动循环。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.

Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.

Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled ‘precipitation’ on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.

At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes or return to the oceans via ‘surface runoff’. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.(156 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

篇9：a类雅思小作文9分

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in .

该表格澳大利亚不同类型的家庭的贫困率。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题型9分范文：

The table gives information about poverty rates among six types of household in Australia in the year 1999.

It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples, and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.

Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000 people, were living in poverty in 1999. Aged people were the least likely to be poor, with poverty levels of 6% and 4% for single aged people and aged couples respectively.

Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty, whereas only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for people with no children: while 19% of single people in this group were living below the poverty line, the figure for couples was much lower, at only 7%.(150 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类小作文9分范文 表格题之6城地下铁

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

该表格展示6个城市的地铁系统的基础数据对比。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题型9分范文：

The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities.

The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year. It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.

The London underground is the oldest system, having opened in 1863. It is also the largest system, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per year.

Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.(185 words)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 表格题之手机用途

The table shows the percentages of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features.

该表格展示，和三年里手机的各种功能的使用率。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题型9分范文：

The table compares the percentages of people using different functions of their mobile phones between and .

Throughout the period shown, the main reason why people used their mobile phones was to make calls. However, there was a marked increase in the popularity of other mobile phone features, particularly the Internet search feature.

In 2006, 100% of mobile phone owners used their phones to make calls, while the next most popular functions were text messaging (73%) and taking photos (66%). By contrast, less than 20% of owners played games or music on their phones, and there were no figures for users doing Internet searches or recording video.

Over the following 4 years, there was relatively little change in the figures for the top three mobile phone features. However, the percentage of people using their phones to access the Internet jumped to 41% in and then to 73% in 2010. There was also a significant rise in the use of mobiles to play games and to record video, with figures reaching 41% and 35% respectively in 2010.(178)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 表格题之咖啡与香蕉销售

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and in five European countries.

Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

该表格展示Fairtrade咖啡和香蕉在1994年和在5国里的销售额。请作答。

雅思图表小作文表格题型9分范文：

The tables show the amount of money spent on Fairtrade coffee and bananas in two separate years in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.

It is clear that sales of Fairtrade coffee rose in all five European countries from 1999 to 2004, but sales of Fairtrade bananas only went up in three out of the five countries. Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.

In 1999, Switzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at ?3 million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at ?15 million. By 2004, however, sales of Fairtrade coffee in the UK had risen to ?20 million, and this was over three times higher than Switzerland’s sales figure for Fairtrade coffee in that year. The year 2004 also saw dramatic increases in the money spent on Fairtrade bananas in the UK and Switzerland, with revenues rising by ?32 million and ?4.5 million respectively.

Sales of the two Fairtrade products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Small increases in sales of Fairtrade coffee can be seen, but revenue remained at ?2 million or below in all three countries in both years. Finally, it is noticeable that the money spent on Fairtrade bananas actually fell in Belgium and Sweden.(216)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

篇10：a类雅思小作文9分

The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

该流程图展示废纸回收利用的整个循环流程。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.

At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.

Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.(160 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之蜜蜂的一生

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are:

该流程图展示蜜蜂短暂的生命周期。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.

The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.

During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full maturity.

(169 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之房屋设计原理

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

该流程图展示不同气候下房屋的不同设计。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate.

The most noticeable difference between houses designed for cool and warm climates is in the shape of the roof. The designs also differ with regard to the windows and the use of insulation.

We can see that the cool climate house has a high-angled roof, which allows sunlight to enter through the window. By contrast, the roof of the warm climate house has a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to shade the windows. Insulation and thermal building materials are used in cool climates to reduce heat loss, whereas insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates.

Finally, the cool climate house has one window which faces the direction of the sun, while the warm climate house has windows on two sides which are shaded from the sun. By opening the two windows at night, the house designed for warm climates can be ventilated.

(162 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之天气预报

The diagram shows the process of weather forecast by Australian Bureau of Meteorology

该流程图展示澳大利亚气象局的天气预报流程。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather.

There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.

Looking at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Secondly, incoming information may be collected directly by radar and analysed on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart.

At the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio, or as a recorded telephone announcement.(170)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

a类雅思小作文9分范文 流程图之三文鱼一生

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

该流程图展示野生三文鱼的生命周期，从受精卵到成年。请作答。

雅思图表小作文流程图题型9分范文：

The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of the salmon, from birth to maturity.

It is clear that there are sixmain stages as the salmon develops from egg to mature adult. We can also see that salmon spend time in three distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then back upstream.

Salmon begin their lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate their eggs. After emerging from eggs, the young salmon spend the next stage of their lives being reared in freshwater areas. Then, at some point in their development, the fish swim downstream to river estuaries where rearing continues.

Following the estuary rearing period, the maturing salmon migrate to the ocean, where they eventually become fully grown adults. Finally, the adult fish travel back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here they reproduce and lay their eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.

(154 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一：话题重述

段二：概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三：详述特征规律一

段四：详述特征规律二

注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，无定论。

篇11：9分雅思作文有哪些写作技巧

9分雅思作文有哪些写作技巧

详细说就是：

1. 观点

“观点”就是在审题的过程中搞清楚这是一道什么样的题型。读完题之后你要做的第一件事情就是形成自己的观点。

有的题目是agree/disagree，有的题目设置为双边讨论，给出两格对立观点，让你去discuss一下，然后给出自己的观点。你要知道观点。

这一步骤所对应的评分标准要求是：首先你需要有一个a clear position，一个清楚明确的立场。根据你的立场你还要有一个fully developed position，一个展开充分的观点。

所以想观点的时候评分标准中的这两项记清楚。

2. 分段

第二件事—分段。将文章在你的观点的前提下分成几个段落，确定每个段落的核心内容和主体。

分段的要求在评分细则里是怎样体现的呢?7分以上文章对于分段有这样一句评论“skillfully manages paragraphing”，指能熟练掌握分段的写作手法。

这个熟练指的是分段方式不那么机械死板。

拿到一篇文章，在同样的观点下你是否能想出多种合理的分段方法，而此基础上你是否能选取一个让人感觉耳目一新，十分巧妙的分段方式。

大家都要关注的另外一个对于分段的要求是“分段充分求合理”，也就是说一定要在写作过程中杜绝分段不充分的现象。

分段不充分就是把过多的观点和内容挤压在一个段落中进行表达。在四或五个段落中来表达你的思想是足够的，要保证一个段落只有一个核心思想。

3. 逻辑

第三件我们要做的事情是“逻辑”。英语是一个逻辑非常严密的语言，所以句与句之间，段与段之间的衔接就非常重要。

段落之间的逻辑建立在合理分段的基础上，你要思考你的分段逻辑，随后想办法让段与段之间的衔接与过度变得更加自然。

随后你要考虑的是句与句之间的衔接，评分标准关于这一项的要求是使用 “a wide rang of cohesive devices”，cohesive devices包括两句话之间的代词指代关系、定语从句或者连词等等。

你要做到段与段，句与句之间都能做到逻辑畅通，衔接严丝合缝。

4. 语言

完成前三件事之后，你会发现你的脑海中已经构思出了一个完整结构的中文版本的文章，或者一个基础用词的英文构架已经搭建起来。

接来下的事情就是组织和润色语言。这里要注意在使用语言的时候有两个值得关注的地方。

评分标准关于词汇语法层面的要求是 “a wide rang of vocabulary and structures”，要有大量的不同的词汇用法和各种各样的结构。

同时要运用一些less common items， 不常见的词汇、表达或者是搭配。

另外一个要关注的是要把词汇和语法做到accurately和flexibly，就是你能够比较准确地同时又比较灵活地去使用词汇和语法。

表达不要过于生硬或者机械，要让考官看到你对于语言的驾驭能力。

当然这里面也可以出现一些小的错误，即使是在8，9分的范文里面也会有minor errors，一些微小的错误。它们被作为slips出现，就是不经意间的小的笔误。

只要这些错误比较少见，在词汇语法这一项你同样能拿到高分。

雅思真题写作范文：购买奢侈品的影响

雅思写作高分范文：

Surveys show that more and more people have a tendency to buy goods of famous brands. In this essay， I will analyze some possible reasons behind this phenomenon and the effect of this trend.

调查显示，越来越多的人倾向于购买名牌商品。在这篇文章中，我将分析这一现象背后的一些可能的原因以及这一趋势的影响。

To begin with， many branded products are manufactured by large companies， who usually have a larger budget to hire stars and celebrities to endorse their products. Many consumers choose famous brands just because they admire these celebrities. It is believed that people feel closer to their idols when they use these products.

首先，许多品牌产品都是由大公司生产的，他们通常有更大的预算来雇佣明星和名人来代言他们的产品。许多消费者选择知名品牌仅仅是因为他们欣赏这些名人。人们相信，当人们使用这些产品时，他们会感觉更接近他们的偶像。

Another factor is perhaps the consumers' sense of vanity， which is considered as human nature. Using famous brands is a symbol of taste and social status. This is why people are generous in buying branded clothes， shoes， cosmetics， etc. and even those who cannot really afford these also follow the fashion.

另一个因素可能是消费者的虚荣心，这被认为是人的本性。使用知名品牌是品味和社会地位的象征。这就是为什么人们会慷慨地购买名牌服装、鞋子、化妆品等等，甚至那些买不起这些衣服的人也会紧跟时尚潮流。

Buying famous brands， usually with better quality and longer service life， can give consumers better experience and decent life. However， this consumption pattern has negative impacts. As most branded products are expensive or over-priced， consumers have to spend more money in order to cover their living cost， which causes an economic burden on ordinary families. What is worse is that this trend may encourage people to compete over material things， leading to waste of goods and pleasure-seeking lifestyles. People， especially youngsters， tend to pursue better material life and take everything for granted.

购买知名品牌，通常质量更好，服务寿命更长，能给消费者带来更好的体验和体面的生活。然而，这种消费模式具有负面影响。由于大多数品牌产品价格昂贵或定价过高，消费者不得不花更多的钱来支付他们的生活成本，这将给普通家庭带来经济负担。更糟糕的是，这种趋势可能会鼓励人们在物质上竞争，导致商品的浪费和追求享乐的生活方式。人们，尤其是年轻人，倾向于追求更好的物质生活，把一切都视为理所当然。

Overall， in this materialistic society， using famous brands is a personal choice and consumers have the right to decide what to buy. However， considering its possible negative influences， I think this trend should not be encouraged.

总的来说，在这个崇尚物质的社会里，使用名牌是一种个人选择，消费者有权决定买什么。然而，考虑到它可能带来的负面影响，我认为不应该鼓励这种趋势。

雅思考试写作范文：电视对社会文化的影响

Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies.

To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

Model Answer:

It has been around forty years since television was first introduced into Australian households and people today still have mixed views on whether it has a positive or a negative influence on the society.

Many people believe that television damages culture. It promotes the stronger cultures of countries such as Britain and North America and weakens the cultures of less wealthy countries. This is because the stronger, wealthier countries are able to assert their own culture by producing more programs that are shown widely around the world. These programs then influence people, particularly young people, in the countries where they are shown.

Also, because television networks need to attract large audiences to secure their financial survival, they must produce programs which are interesting to a broad range of people. In Australia this range is very broad because we are a multicultural society and people of all ages like to watch television. To interest all these different people, most television programs are short in length, full of action and excitement, do not require much intelligence or knowledge to understand, and follow universal themes common to all cultures, such as love and crime. Television programs which concentrate on or develop themes pertinent to one particular culture are not so successful because they interest a smaller audience.

Nevertheless we much acknowledge that television does have some positive effects on the cultures within a society as well. People who do not live within their own culture can, in a limited way, access it through the multicultural station on the television. For example, Aboriginal children who have grown up in white families, or migrants and international students living in Australia, can watch programs from their own culture on the television.

In conclusion, I hold the view that television promotes and strengthens those cultures that are wealthy and influential while it weakens the cultures that are already in a weakened position.

篇12：雅思写作如何才能拿9分

雅思写作如何拿9分

写好雅思作文，词汇的积累是必不可少的。没有充足的词汇，就无法写出好文章。要写好雅思写作练习，就必须善于从众多的词语中选择和运用最恰当的词语。所以扩大和丰富自己的词汇量来增强写作能力的。雅思写作辅导对于大家提高成绩还是很有帮助的，同学们最好能够多总结一下雅思写作词汇，这是很重要的内容。

要有效地提高英语水乎，必须作大量的阅读。广泛的阅读可使学生开拓视野，增加语感，为雅思写作提供必要的语言材料。作文和阅读是相辅相成、互相促进的。有些词语和句型，学生只是似曾相识，通过作文能促使学生把这些东西运用得更熟练，表达得更准确。反之，这也会有效地提高学生的闻读理解能力。在广泛阅读的基础上，特别要注意精读一些内容接近现实生活，接近学生生活实际的例文。由于目前中学课本内容安排的限制，很多学生想在生活中表达的东西在课本中却无法找到。

看了好文章，不单是理解就够了，还应该在理解的基础上多多背诵，才能达到融会贯通、据为已有的效果。英语宜多诵多背，把一些句型、短语，一些文章的片段或全篇，让这些材料在你的脑袋里扎根，当你要用的时根，它们使会自然而然地冒出来。背诵可以培养正确使用语言的习倔，这样就可以避免生搬硬套地写一些中国式的英文。加强背诵能变难为易，变费力为省力，能有效地帮助学生提高写作能力。现在背诵和熟记一些语言材料，对学生来说将会受用无穷。

在大量阅读中，要注意收集写作中经常要用到的各种材料。发现有可以汲取的内容，有可以丰富自己表达手段的词语、句子和语段等，都应该随手记录，并整理分类。手头有了较多的材料后，可以经常翻翻读读，并随时作新的补充。练习写作时，可作必要的改动。经过反复的模仿、实践，肯定会提高写作能力。

写作能力必须通过反复实践才能获得。作文可先从仿写开始，模仿的例文应选择那些语言朴实，结构简单的短文。学生练习写作时，应尽量使用学过的单词、短语和句型。这既能巩固课堂里学到的内容，又能提高写作能力。所用的语言要力求正确清楚，为此在写的时候要十分细心，勤查勤问。对想用的词或句稍有怀疑，就应该停下来查一查。只要做到多读范文，写作水平就一定会逐步提高。

雅思写作要求考生在一个小时的时间里面完成150个单词的说明文或者是信件(20分钟)和一篇至少250个单词的议论文(40分钟)所以考生一定要将时间安排好，否则时间到了你还没有写完。

字数是有下线的但是没有上线，根据以往的统计来看雅思小作文都在180个字数左右，大作文280字，而且高分的范文几乎都是这些字数左右。

雅思大小作文都不需要题目，它有两种写作形式：开头顶格写，另外就是空格不空行。

雅思考试是专业的语言水平测试，有着很大的题库，经常会有重复的题目出现，这时候雅思写作机经就可以适当的利用一下，为考试做好充足的准备。

大小作文在雅思写作中所占的比例大约是6:4，TASK2在最后写作得分中所占的比重比较大，但也不能忽视了Task 1。

图表作文通常会给出特定的时间，考生要根据此时间决定文章的时态。通常情况下有以下三种情况：过去时间用一般过去式，现在时间或没给出时间用一般现在式，预测用一般将来式。议论文根据内容确定时态。

9分雅思大作文范文之传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地

参考范文：

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.

On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.

On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.

In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.

9分考官级雅思大作文范文之罪犯用经历教育青少年

题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?已走回正途的前牢友是教育孩子预防犯罪的好方法，同意与否。精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

范文：

It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.

In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.

The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.

In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.

(287 words, band 9)

9分考官级雅思大作文范文之企业社会责任

题目是As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?除了赚钱，企业还有相应的社会责任，同意与否。

范文：

Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.

On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.

On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.

In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.

(285 words, band 9)

雅思写作如何拿9分

篇13：雅思听力:9分满分技巧

雅思听力:9分满分技巧分享

考了很多次雅思了，听力阅读一直是强项，写作口语一直弱，万年6+，就是上不去7。(编者注：在10月，本人顺利屠鸭，分数为8.5, 9, 7.5, 7.5)

这次考到两个9，是在听力和阅读已经“弃疗”的情况下考的。作为一个上班族，基本上没有时间备考，所以只能把全部时间扑到口语和写作上。

这个专栏将陆续分享一些备考经验，不仅仅是听力和阅读，还有写作和口语的有效备考方式，顺便推荐一些用过的免费的备考网站，或者付费的网站。作为一个老烤鸭，基本上把市面上，能见到的备考渠道，都试了个遍。

这篇文章先说听力，我的方法针对的是6分+的考生，即词汇量已经有一定基础的人。我个人的感觉是，以下的方法你学会了，听力应该是十拿九稳的事儿，不用太担心。

(如果有人实在是因为词汇量卡在5.5分以下，建议花点时间背背词伙和词汇。关于词伙怎么背，稍后也会分享一些心得。)

你读完这篇文章，再去练听力，应该可以事半功倍。我使用的听力材料是以雅思真题为主，辅以TED、BBC、PODCASTS。因为没有用过9分达人，所以不具备发言权。但是个人感觉基本上雅思达到一定分数以后，你刷雅思题的意义不大，不如按照雅思官方的建议，去广泛听听你不熟悉的材料。

听力技巧之【审题】：

你自己练习听力的时候，请确保在听到【Now turn to section One】再翻开书页，完全模拟考试的感觉，切不要给自己多安排几秒审题时间。

审题方法：

Section 1: 先看题干【write X word and/or a number for each answer. 】,这种情况，就快速写下X+1, 这样可以提醒自己这道题最多可以写几个单词;如果题干是【write X word(s)】，这个时候就只写X。(这一步Section4同理)

接下来，快速圈出填空所在的位置。以免漏听。

Section1，读的时候快一点，知道大概要填的是什么内容即可。

注：在整个Section1开始正式播放前，你应该完成了Section1 和Section 2的审题。接下来基本上都是在每个section结束后快速审下一个section。不要在自己未听到的题上做太多停留。

Section2 & Section3：时间不够的话，重点先看题干，判断出题点。(这一步，是为了让你判断语音已经播到哪里了。即便你没有听到某道题的选项，也务必跟着语音先往下听。回头再蒙。)

时间够的话，看各个选项。很多人不知道选项应该看什么。4选1的题重点是区分选项间的差异点。5选2的题和多选多的题，先试着归类，能归类的就归类，没有什么规律，就简单记一下。注意：不要追求逐字逐句理解，用眼睛简单扫一扫，能记住多少就是多少。

Section 4：看题干圈X+1，及选项位置。

这个Section4的填空题和Section1的区别在于，在审题的时候要有大局观，及要分清文章整体是分成几个板块的，空前后的句子要连在一起读进行理解。

听力技巧：

(1)技巧一：同义替换。

听力的核心技巧就是同义替换，不容任何争辩。(其实IELTS四大板块，都有用到同义替换的技巧。只是这个技巧在听力和阅读版块尤其明显，基本上正确选项就是同义替换;反之亦然，如果某个选项，你一点同义替换都没有听到/看到，基本上就不是正确选项。)

平时练习时，在听真题的时候，要利用同义替换来找正确选项。

听完每套真题的时候，注意总结S3和S4中的同义替换，时间允许的话，S2中的同义替换也总结一下。S1中因为太简单了，所以就不用特意反复听。

如何总结同义替换：左侧写出材料题干中的词，右侧写听力中听到的同义替换的词。最好能找到一一匹配的关系。这个步骤一个Section的耗时应该半个小时到一个小时左右，比你完全练逐字逐词的精听要节省很多时间，意义也大很多。

(2)技巧二：针对弱点，集中练习。

每次听力练习结束之后，不仅要核对选项，还要再将自己的错误归个类。

(a) 拼写错误

(b) 单复数错误

(c) 没听懂

(d) 没听到

(e) 若干个选项都听到了，但是最后选错了

这几类问题最好解决的a，把听力语料库听个几次，错词集中整理一下，考前看两眼。

b单复数错误：解决方式是听力做完一套题以后，用一个小时左右，把Section3放3遍，Section4放3遍，把所有听到的名词写下来，然后再和听力原文核对，没有听出来的复数多听几遍，总结一下自己没有听到这个复数的原因。

c没听懂：如果句子里面用的句型或者某些词你没有听懂，还有几个子原因。

c-1 生词：如果是专业名词，不用过分注意。但是常规名词，请找个小本本好好记一下。

c-2 句子语法听不懂：语法不过关的同学，请找老顾小白书或者其他语法课程，巩固一下语法。

c-3 有些连读没有听出来：连读听不出来的，可以专门找一些连读的课程听听。基本上连读规律很简单的，一两个小时内就可以把这事解决了。

d没听到：需要提高判断出题点的能力，同义改写还是要多练练。

e选项都听到，最后选错：注意总结一些常见的否定表达。

(3)技巧三：分大类练习

在做过一定量的真题以后，可以结合自己常见的错题集中练习。我自己有一个阶段地图题做得很不好。后来发现集中整理了地图题的常见表达以后，就解决了这个问题。

如果你多选题和Section4不擅长，也可以批量练习。在小站雅思PC端的页面上，可以批量练习。

(4)技巧四：加速练习。

我自己平时无论听什么材料都是1.5X速，这样在考场的时候，基本上都是在等选项的感觉，淡定异常。但具体加速多少不强求，如果你在1.25X速时比较舒服，也是OK的。Anyway，不建议平时练习的时候仍然保持1倍速。

(5)技巧五：适合8分+选手

基本上过了8分的选手，一味地刷真题意义不大了。根据雅思官方的考试建议，也是建议你多去听听自己不熟悉的话题。比如我自己对于Section4的动物种类不是很熟悉，平时就会听听英语类的动物介绍。有一个Youtube上的动画片叫Wild Kratts，可以拓展这类知识。

(6)技巧六：最重要的事情是心态

即便你想考8分，你也是有4道错题的机会。换句话说，如果在练习过程中，出现没有听到的题，没有把握的题，不要过分沉浸，尽快跟上下一道题。

另外，把题全部提前审完和做对题没有绝对的联系。即使你没有读懂某道题，不要紧，你还是有很大概率把它做对的。最重要的是节奏!!在section1真正开始前，尽量把section2扫过一遍。在每个section结束后，快速审下一个section。即便下一个section没有审完，也要及时回到正在播放的section。切记不要在一道小题中过分沉浸。

雅思听力需要练习多长时间

有同学们在问雅思听力练习时间多久为宜?每个人的英语水平不一，那么每个人的雅思听力情况就不一样。但是，雅思听力要提高，必须要听大量的听力材料，付出大量的雅思听力练习时间。今天小编就雅思听力练习时间这个话题搜集了一些资料，在此分享给大家，供大家学习参考。

雅思听力练习时间其实在就是在积累同学们的听力量。量的具体体现就是体现在每次听力时间，听力练习次数和听力的篇数上。

每次听力训练，坚持在30分钟以上。这主要是提供一次给耳朵和大脑接收有声语言输入的刺激过程，时间长度不够，刺激不充分，效果就不好。这其中的原理，有点像有氧运动。如果你不能每次坚持30分左右、心率在一定范围(因人而异)内的运动量训练，则效果一定大打折扣。所以，这个30分钟的量一定要坚持。可以是30分钟重复不停地听同一个内容，也可以听不同内容，长度相当于30分钟的材料，或者交错进行。总之，每次要进行至少30分钟以上的听力语言的熏陶。

那么一个星期进行多长时间的训练为好呢?起码要进行6次以上的训练，每次30分钟。这个量的训练频率，加上最好以90篇素材内容为一个量的级别的高强度训练，可以逐步使自己在一个可控的范围内做到有目标和方向，又能循序渐进，即有序，加上可数的量的配合，最终达到一定程度的提高。并可以通过这种方法，逐步地、适时地进入到更高一级的层次。

雅思听力要练多久的时间?以上就是小编搜集整理的答案。如果同学们有更好的可以提升雅思听力的方法，小编鼓励大家积极的使用。另外，雅思听力虽然重要，但是也不要把所有的时间都花在雅思听力上，雅思考试的其他部分也需要大家的复习.

雅思听力题实在听不懂怎么猜

在雅思听力中，我们难免会遇到一些不会的雅思听力题，这个时候就需要发挥大家猜题的能力了，其实猜题也不需要什么能力，需要的只是一些技巧，那不会的雅思听力题怎么猜呢?小编搜集一些雅思听力题的一些分布原则，准确度是相当高啊。

不会的雅思听力题怎么猜?请同学们睁大眼睛看。

18题到20题是一种难度较大的题型，考生首先要判断题干信息是否正确，如果正确，打勾;如果不正确，应把正确答案填在空白处。根据正态分布的规律，正确答案中必然会有打对勾的题目，所以如果考生只能够做出一道题目，不妨将剩下两个空全部填上对号;如果考生一道题目也做不出来，不妨将三个空全填对号，而答案中18题，20题答案为对号。这样考生至少就可以答对2/3的题目。

21题到24题，考生通过仔细观察题目会发现，Type of coffee这一横行应填I，R，或E.而这一横行中I和E两个选项都已经出现过了，所以如果考生没有做出21题和24题，可以猜答R，而正确答案21题和24题全部选R. 25题到32题，要求考生填1分，2分或3分，根据正态分布原则，考生对于没有听出来的题目，可以猜答2分，而正确答案中有5个是填2分。

同学们感觉怎么样，是不是有种相见恨晚的感觉。以上就是关于不会的雅思听力题怎么猜的全部内容，希望同学们能掌握好以上的猜题技巧，在山穷水复疑无路的时候，这些猜题技巧能让你突然感受到柳暗花明又一村的惊喜感。

雅思听力考试审题中的坏习惯盘点

在雅思考试中，审题是非常关键的一步，准确、高效的审题能让考生做好充分的听题准备，快速锁定正确答案。然而不少考生虽然知道审题的重要性，也知道审题需要注意哪些内容，但在实际做题过程中还是存在不少问题。为了能够帮助大家更全面的掌握这类问题，小编有针对性的给大家做了解析。

雅思听力审题坏习惯一：不拘小节，在审题时只关注文字内容，不注意题目要求。

不论是填空还是选择，题目中都存在一定的要求。单选题和配对题问题不大，只要记得一定是一对一选择就可以，遇到多选题时要关注是选对一个选项算 一题还是全部选对算一题。如：Question 25 Choose two letters和Question 25-26 choose two letters这两个要求意义是不相同的，前者比后者要求高，必须全选对才能得分。这对考生最后答题卷的填写也会产生影响，一定要注意。

遇到填空题一定要看清字数要求。由于No more than three words and/or a number是比较常见的字数要求，可能考生会因此习惯性认为填空就是这个字数要求而忽略了其他形式的要求。在这个要求中，即使只少了“/and”意义也 是完全不一样的。如果要求是No more than three words or a number, 那就意味着不能写单词和阿拉伯数字共存的答案，如果出现阿拉伯数字就得写成单词形式。如果出现One word only这样的答案就更需要注意了，哪怕多了一个冠词也是错误的。有些考生特别容易把textbook这样的合成词分开写，one word only这个要求反而是提醒考生注意单词书写而不是限制了。

雅思听力审题坏习惯二：审题不客观，主观意识太强。

既然是审题，当然要以问题的客观意思理解，不能强加自己的想法。

建议考生在看选择题的问题和选项时尤其需要注意这一点，问什么答什么都要客观理解，不能因为某个选项意义比较符合常理就认为其对，也不能因为选项符合某些判断规则就认为其一定是错的。即便有预先的判断，也需要最终去文章中找到证据来支持或反驳。

如果遇到的是填空题，当然首先还是客观理解整个句子的意思，再做找关键词、预测等工作。比如在预测时发现需要填的空格出现在名词前，修饰名词， 一般考生第一反应需要找一个形容词，但仔细想想，能修饰名词的不仅仅是普通的形容词，名词也可以，动词的现在分词形式和过去分词形式也可做形容词来修饰名词，甚至量词也可以修饰名词，所以在听的时候不能因为想到了形容词就只关注普通的形容词。

雅思听力审题坏习惯三：片面理解，选择性审题。

听力考试重在听，卷面上出现的每一字每一句都是提示信息，审题自然不能漏过一丝一毫。但考生往往会因为看到自己熟悉的内容而忽略了剩余的，造成 理解错误。最具代表意义的是剑桥7 Test 3 Section 3 Question 23: Float dropped into ocean and________ by satellite. 在教学过程中发现考生经常对该空的预测是填名词，因为看到了ocean and就认为两者并列。事实上从整句看和空格并列的信息应该是dropped, 所以要找的是动词的过去分词表示被动。预测出错后听题中就容易忽略正确答案了。

雅思听力审题坏习惯四：视而不见，只看不用。

审题之所以要思考很多问题，是为了在听题的时候能对找答案有所帮助，看到想到的就得在听题时充分利用。但很多考生辛苦审题却不知道运用，例如剑 桥5 Test 4 Section 1 Question 3: intended length of stay______________ , 通过审题可知需要填的是时间长度，限制信息intended意味着这段时间是想要、打算住的时间，既然有打算，那么还有可能会出现实际的情况。原 文：I’m planning on staying a year but at the moment I’m definitely here for 4 month only. 显然planning和intended是对应的同义转换点，因此答案是a year。很多考生其实意识到要找的是想要住的时间长度，但在听的时候却没有注意到对应点。又如剑桥5 Test 2 Section 4 Question 37: average daily requirement for an adult in Antarctica is approximately ________ kilocalories. 此题中应填数字是非常容易预测的，在审题时需要意识到这个数字要符合average、daily、adult、in Antarctica这些条件才能成为正确答案，事实上原文的干扰点就在地点Antarctica上，而考生经常看到却在听的时候忽略了这个信息。

良好的开端是成功的一半，在准备雅思听力考试的时候认真听固然是重要的，但多思考审题、做题的过程，揣测考官意图能让考生更深入地了解考试，为争取高分打下基础。从上述文章介绍的内容来看，大家很有必要针对这方面信息进行进一步了解。

篇14：9分雅思口语part2竹子

参考范文：竹子(9分级范文)

I'd like to talk about the plant-bamboo.

So first of all, as for how I know about bamboo, well I can’t really remember exactly how I first got to know about it, you know, it could have been in a biology class at school, or when I was out somewhere with my parents, but my guess would be that I probably first knew about it at primary school, because that was about the time when we first started learning about things like that.

Anyway, moving on to why bamboo is important, well I’d say it’s pretty important for a number of reasons, the main one of which would be that it can be used to make so many different things, you know, such as chopsticks, chopping boards, flooring, what else, um……oh yeah, and musical instruments, like the bamboo flute for example.

And another thing to mention is that bamboo is also used a lot for carrying stuff. For example, what I’ve seen people do is rest it on their shoulders, and then hang things on each end, because as well as being strong, it’s also very flexible, so it won’t break, even with very heavy loads.

So it’s extremely useful, and what’s good about it is that it grows incredibly fast, you know, not like most other trees, and so although a lot of it’s cut down to make stuff, there will still always be an abundant supply of it here.

But anyway, finally then, as for how much I like bamboo, well I’d say it’s actually probably one of my favourite plants! Because I mean, it kind of just gives me a nice, pleasant feeling whenever I see it. And it’s also a plant which is often associated with China, because we grow so much of it here, so it’s something that kind of reminds me of my own culture, if you know what I mean.

So yeah I guess that’s pretty much it then. Thanks for listening.

雅思口语Part2话题分析：植物Plant

Describe an important plant in your country

You should say:

What it is

How you know it

What uses does it have

Why do you like it

对于这个话题来说，不同于很多口语Part II中的其他话题，我们很难用话题套用的方式来将其他话题的内容进行简单的变化来作为此题目的回答，因为在雅思口语中关于Plant的问题并不是很多，而且回答并不太容易通用。

那么首先看一下这个问题的细节。题目主要是要求描述在你国家里的一个重要的植物。很多考生在看到“重要植物”这个关键字的时候可能就会感到无从下手了。其是只要考生能够说出自己认为的重要植物为什么重要的原因就可以，不一定必须是在社会上绝对重要的植物。接下来就先说一下我有点了解的植物吧。我所想到的重要的植物就是竹子(bamboo)和麦子(wheat)。当然，还有其他我觉得比较重要的，比如银杏(Ginkgo)。那我们在回答是开头就可以以分总的形式来开始：Well, there are few plants just come to my mind right now, such as bamboo, wheat, and ginkgo. And I’m sure there are more important plants than what I know. Anyway, I would like to talk about the bamboo, which is one of the major food sources for panda bears in China. 那么这里说的植物就是竹子，重要的原因就是因为竹子是熊猫的主要食物。

至此，问题的第一个小问题基本上就概括了。如果还要多说几句的话，就可以介绍一下我国的国宝熊猫(panda bear)了：China is the only original habitat of panda bears which relies on only bamboos in their natural environment，就是说中国是熊猫的故乡，而在野生环境下熊猫是靠竹子生存。接下来我们用简短的连接短语来过渡到第二个小问题。如何回答How you know it呢?我们就可以说我们在很小的时候，可以说幼儿园，就听到了关于熊猫的很多故事。而故事里总会有关于熊猫吃竹子的内容。于是我们就知道了有竹子这个植物，是可爱的熊猫的主要食物。基本上我们就可以说As far as how I learned about bamboo, I would say it needs to be traced back to my childhood when I was a little kid. 接下来就可以说是妈妈讲故事或者是幼儿园里的故事中知道的。再此用上3、4句话来“编”一下关于当时的回忆。比如，妈妈给我讲过一些关于those cute panda bears的故事，我总能记得those cute creatures are always hugs a whole bunch of bamboo sticks and munching on them (那些可爱东东总是抱着一大堆竹子并且啃个没完)。说完后还可以玩笑似的的感慨一下对当年的怀念：Oh well, good times! 接下来就谈论竹子的用途或者importance：Anyway, being a food source for panda bears is only one of the many importance. 接下来可以说在中国的某些地方可以用来做船(building little boats)，很多地方用竹子来做房屋(materials for constructions)或者手工(hand crafts)。同时，在中国艺术方面也是很有影响的(Bamboos are also pretty influential in Chinese culture, specifically Chinese paintings)，因为在国画(Chinese painting)中很多大师都以竹子为题材。当谈到why you like it的时候，就可以说一下竹子代表的意义或者竹子带给你的回忆，这样，这个问题就完成了。

雅思口语part2新题之重要植物important plant

解题思路

Important Plant

Describe an important plant in your country

You should say:

Where you see it

What it look like

Why it is important

描述一种在你们国家的重要植物

你应该说:

你在哪里看到的

它是什么样子的

为什么它很重要

Part3

What is the main plant in your country?

How do schools teach students to grow plants?

Do old people grow plants?

Do people in your country like to grow plants at home?

你们国家的主要植物是什么?

学校如何教学生种植植物?

老人种植植物吗?

你们国家的人喜欢在家里种植植物吗?

口语范文

Ok then. well after a bit of thought. I've decided to talk to you about bamboo. However, I honestly don't know if I'm gonna be able to talk for two minutes about it, but I'll give it a try!

好好想想。我决定和你谈谈竹子。不过，说实话，我不知道我是否能谈上两分钟，但我会试试看!

So first of all, as for how I know about bamboo, well I can't really remember exactly how I first got to know about it, you know, it could have been in a biology class at school, or when I was out somewhere with my parents, but my guess would be that I probably first knew about it at primary school, because that was about the time when we first started learning about things like that.

首先,至于我怎么知道竹子,我不能清楚地记得我第一次知道它,你知道,可能是在学校的生物课,或者当我和我的父母,但我猜想我可能首先知道它在小学,因为这是我们刚开始的时候学习。

Anyway, moving on to why bamboo is important, well I'd say it's pretty important for a number of reasons, the main one of which would be that it can be used to make so many different things, you know, such as chopsticks, chopping boards, flooring, what else.um......oh yeah, and musical instruments, like the bamboo flute for example.

不管怎样，我们来谈谈为什么竹子很重要，我想说它很重要有很多原因，其中最主要的一个原因是它可以用来做很多不同的东西，比如筷子，砧板，地板等等哦，对了，还有乐器，比如竹笛。

And another thing to mention is that bamboo is also used a lot for carrying stuff. For example, what I've seen people do is rest it on their shoulders, and then hang things on each end, because as well as being strong, it's also very flexible, so it won't break, even with very heavy loads.

另外值得一提的是竹子也经常被用来搬运东西。例如，我看到人们把它放在肩膀上，然后把东西挂在两头，因为它不仅很结实，而且很灵活，所以即使负重也不会断裂。

雅思口语高分不能依赖模板

雅思口语拿高分不能只背模板。很多学生都习惯性将自己看得好文章模板背下来，但是这样也就难免陷入了一种俗套，很多雅思的考生都很纠结，怎么才能让自己口语提高?如何把内容准备得更加新颖?雅思的教师介绍，备战雅思，最好还是要准备属于自己的东西，要不然备考官看出来自己是背的，对成绩会有所影响。

口语的评分标准有四项，发音pronunciation，流畅度fluency和连贯度coherence，语法grammar，词汇lexical resource，考官都会考虑。四项评分标准中发音对很多学生困扰很大。

根据自己个人经验，有个学生发音很一般但是口语还是考了7.5，这就说明这位同学其他三项评分标准分值很高。“我觉得最基本的一个发音问题就是元音。在教学中经常会看到很多学生出现额，额，额，的现象，就是会停顿，紧张的话，听到的回答就基本全是额了。这个现象有的话学生的口语分数基本是在5.5，上6的话很难，除非内容不错。我尝试了很多种方法来解决这个问题：方法一，让学生把自己说的内容录下来，把停顿的地方自己坐下标记，进行不断的录音来改善这个问题;方法二，通过放慢语速把每个单词的元音尽可能地发正确和饱满，这样很自然就没有额的现象了，这个有音频的话，具体要找授课老师示范下，学生多模仿感悟就可以了。不过这两个方法需要学生进行每天的坚持和训练才可以达到目标”。

考题分析

例子：Dou you like animals?

答案一：Yes, I love animals, they are great,they are our friends, we should protect them.

答案二：Yes, I am into animals greatly. I prefer dogs. There is a Teddy in my home named Lili, .She looks gorgeous, like a beauty. Her fur is like chocolate. Every morning she jumps to my bed, licking my face to wake me up. Animals have souls like us, like friends.

答案一，确实把答案简洁明了地回答清楚了，但是基本上是个考生八九个都会按照这个思路来，就算考官再客观，听多了，会对考生的能力有质疑。答案二，很自然，真情流露，信息给的也足既回答了问题又分享了故事而且考官还可以感受到考生很有爱心，回答完之后一幅画面就在考官脑子里了，如果考官刚好也养只狗，就更好了。要把考官当成朋友一样去分享自己的生活，而不仅仅是为了考试生硬地回答问题。

篇15：雅思写作真题9分

开头段

Opinions differ on the extent to which incarceration deals effectively with crime as opposed to improving the quality of education. My view is that there will always be a role for prisons in confining evil people, but better education is more likely to reduce crime levels.

主体段1：讨论 prison 的作用

Confining criminals to prison is likely to always be necessary at least to some extent. There are currently a large number of people in jail for serious offences like murder and, for them, preventive education would come too late. It is more important that society continue to be protected from them than to release them in the hope that they might reform by virtue of educational programmes. Another reality is the fact that some people choose to commit serious wrongdoings no matter how much education they have received. This is the case for many white-collar crimes such as fraud which often involve the elaborate schemes that only very intelligent people could devise.

1) 犯了谋杀罪等重罪的大量囚犯，靠防止犯罪的教育来改变他们，已经太迟了。保护人们不受他们的伤害，比释放他们并指望通过教育来改造他们，更重要。

2) 有些人无论接受了多少教育，都会选择犯罪。很多白领犯罪，比如诈骗，就是需要高智商的人才能设计出来的。

主体段2：讨论 better education 的作用

Nevertheless, improvements to education would, in my view, be a better means of reducing the number of people who want to commit crime in the long-term. Acquiring more useful knowledge especially when young would provide greater opportunities for entry into satisfying careers. Further education opens up new possibilities in terms of developing healthy interests and participating in worthwhile activities such as sports and hobbies. Better education would achieve improved outcomes such as a proficiency in a sport rather than just a passing interest. The more people achieve personal goals in terms of their careers or hobbies, the more people will find meaning in life and thus not be tempted to use their talents in illegal ways.

1) 获取更多有用的知识，尤其在年轻的时候，会给人带去更大的机会，进入体面的职业。

2) 中学后的深造，为人们培养健康的兴趣和参加有意义的活动，提供了新的可能性。

3) 更好的教育能带来更好的结果，比如对某项运动转瞬即逝的兴趣变成了熟练。

越多的人在职业和爱好方面达到了目标，就有越多的人找到生命的意义，因此不会被诱惑将自己的才华运用到违法的事情上。

结尾段

In conclusion, I acknowledge the place that imprisonment will have in protecting society from serious offenders who have already committed crimes. However crime levels are more likely to fall more drastically over the longer term by reason of improvement to education.

5月12日雅思小作文真题范文解析

雅思写作小作文解析

这是一道典型的动态双饼图，难度中等。第一种方法是按照变化趋势划分，将数值的上升和下降分开两段来写。第二种方法是按照时间划分，把和的各行业用水的比值依次描述。范文全文共计7句话。

篇16：雅思写作真题9分

The pie charts make a clear comparison in terms of how water was distributed in a range of industries in Sydney of Australia between 1997 and 2007.

According to the data, it is evident that in 1997, almost one half amount of water (48%) was allocated in food industry while a collective 47% could be found in the remaining sectors including service, manufacturing and household where water was more equally shared, ranging from 13% to 19%. It is building part that consumed the least proportion of water at merely 5%.

A decade later, significant changes had occurred with food industry dropping considerably by 7%, although it still ranked the top. In addition, the water use in building industry and manufacturing industry also declined, but only by 3% to 2% and 11% respectively. On the contrary, there was an upward trend in water consumption of household and that of service industry which finally approached 21% and exactly one quarter.

Overall, although food industry always played a dominant role in water use, the other parts such as manufacturing and household also had a rising demand.范文原创自小站老师Alice.Hua

老外带你解读雅思写作真题 进口食物利弊

题目来自2018年5月13日真题In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. People can enjoy a wide range of food imported from other countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

老外解读雅思写作话题

Advantages

1. new commercial opportunities 新的商业机会(为产品找到更多销售渠道)

2. sell excess food 卖掉过剩的食物

3. alleviate food shortages 缓解食物短缺(部分地区)

4. give employment and improve living standards of farmers and agricultural workers 向农场主和农业工作人员提供工作机会，并改善生活质量

5. improve quality of life with wider variety of tastes and eating experiences 通过更丰富口味的食物和多样的饮食体验来提升生活质量

6. increase cultural awareness and promote positive links with other cultures 提升文化意识，促进我们和其他文化的积极联系

7. ensure availability of food all year round irrespective of seasonal fluctuations or temporary shortages in some regions 即使季节变化，部分地区短期食物短缺，同样确保全年都有食物

Disadvantages

1. profits made mainly by multinationals rather than individual growers 利润主要给了跨国公司，而不是种植者

2. a large amount of unnecessary activity which generates pollution – transport, distribution, etc. 运输、分配等大量不必要的活动，造成污染

3. could make the production of traditional foods and crops in some countries uneconomic 让一些国家传统的食物生产和庄稼种植没有利润(现代化的大规模生产方式，成本低)

4. significant global economic changes can have disproportionate effect on prices, loss of skills and perhaps increases in unemployment in some areas 巨大的全球经济变化会对价格产生影响，导致生产技能的丢失以及一些地区的人口失业

5. lose touch with nature – times and seasons which traditionally we respected 不再尊重我们传统上尊重的自然，即时间和季节(这个季节不该有的，就不该吃到)

分论点的好坏

关于想分论点，我从来都鼓励学生打开脑洞去做。但是，这并不意味着打开脑洞后想到的点都是好的。

好的分论点，具有“合理性”。这种合理，建立在对世界正确的认知之上;换句话说，建立在对世界错误的认知(即背景知识)上的分论点，都是“不合理”的。

当然，其实多数考鸭的问题并不是想出了非常离谱的分论点，而是想到了和题目“相关”的分论点，然而这种相关性太弱。

考鸭在写作中使用的点，不仅受思维的限制，还受语言的限制。比如，想到了合理的点，但是因为语言能力不足而放弃，写了不那么合理的点;又如，想到了合理的点，而且也写了，但是自己并不知道写下的句子没有表达自己想表达的意思。

下文是老外雅思老师在看过很多中国学生的作文后写下的肺腑之言

Communicating meaning is always the number one priority in language. When you have something you really want to say to someone, this helps you choose your words carefully.

传达意思，是语言使用最优先要考虑的事儿。当你有一件很想告诉别人的事的时候，试图去传达意思能够帮助你小心地选择用词(就更有可能选到合适的)。

When you just want to sound sophisticated and don’t care about the content of your words, then you end up saying incoherent nonsense.

当你只想让英语母语者听起来高大上并且不在乎你语言表达的内容时，你就会说一些不连贯的废话(因为英语母语者不明白这些话语的含义)。

老外带你解读雅思写作真题 减少影视里的暴力情节

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

老外雅思写作话题解读For controls

1. Every society has vulnerable people – such as children, people with learning difficulties – who are not able to make good decisions about the content of visual media that they watch; they need protection from disturbing content and parents or carers are not always willing or able to protect them;每个社会都有脆弱的人，比如孩子，有学习障碍的人。他们在看过媒体提供的内容后哦，无法做出正确的决定。他们需要保护，免受这些内容的影响，而父母和其他照顾他们的人不总是乐意或者有能力去保护他们。The tolerance of violent visual media is inconsistent with the values of a society which wishes to promote altruism and kindness among citizens忍受媒体的暴力内容，和社会的价值观不符。社会希望市民发扬利他主义和善意。There is considerable anecdotal evidence that serial killers and terrorists consumed a lot of violent images before committing their crimes.有相当多的传闻表明，连环杀手在犯罪前看了大量的暴力画面。

让步反驳

Though it may be impossible to scientifically prove that watching violence leads to more acts of violence being committed, our common sense tells us that what we consume has an effect on our personalities and our actions over the longer term.虽然不大可能科学地论证看暴力画面会引发更多暴力行为，但是我们的常识告诉我们，我们消费(接收)的东西，经过比较长的时间后，对我们的人格和行为有影响。

老外雅思写作话题解读Against controls

1. Individual liberty – watching films per se does not directly damage other people and so everyone should be free to make their own moral judgments about what kind of media content they watch个人自由。看电影本质上不会直接让我们损害别人，所以人人都应该有自由 就他们所观看的媒体内容 做自己的道德判断。2. It is simply impracticable for governments to control the access to media content of millions or even billions of users; doing so could also require a dangerous level of state intrusion into the private lives of citizens让政府控制数以百万甚至数十亿的用户在媒体上观看什么内容，就是不可行的。这样做还会打扰市民的私人生活，这种打扰甚至会达到一个危险的程度。

老外雅思写作话题解读总结

支持：1. 暴力内容对没有判断能力的人的影响 2. 暴力的宣扬和社会价值观不符(大部分考鸭不会想到的点) 3. 暴力内容和恐怖主义相关(这种相关性不强的点，可以写，但是不能作为主要的分论点来使用，也就不能放在前面写)4. (让步反驳)虽然暴力画面和暴力行为的发生无法科学地论证，但是我们的常识判断它们是有联系的(这一点的思考展示了批判性思维，很多人会混淆“科学”和“常识”，把人人都认同的东西当做是科学，就不会做这样的区分)

反对：1. 人们有自由做自己的道德判断 2. 政府控制用户不可行(对可行性的考虑，政府相关话题可以套用)3. 政府控制用户会侵犯市民的隐私(上一点的延伸)

写好这个题目，并不是要求考鸭想到或者用到以上全部的点，但是以上大部分的点和题目的相关性都是非常高的，事宜建议采用以上的观点，虽然不必全部使用。

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