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篇1：关于高中英语写作的加分句子
笨鸟先飞早入林
Clumsy birds have to start flying early。
冰冻三尺，非一日之寒
It takes more than one cold day for the river to freeze threefeet deep。
OR：
The ground is frozen three feet deep --a rather longprocess。
长江后浪推前浪
In the Changjiang River the waves behind drive on thosebefore。
滴水穿石
Constant dripping wears away a stone。
光阴似箭，日月如梭
Light travels like an arrow, and time like a shuttle。
老马识途
An old horse knows the way。
麻雀虽小，五脏俱全
The sparrow may be small but it has all the vital organs。
青出于蓝而胜于蓝
Indigo blue is estracted from the indigo plant, but is bluer thanthe plant it comes from。
山外有山，天外有天
There are mountains beyond mountains, and heavens beyondheavens。
山重水覆疑无路，柳暗花明又一村
A sudden glimpse of hope in the dark mist of bewilderment,it`s along lane that has no turning。
万事开头难
The first step is always difficult。
万丈高楼平地起
High buildings rise from the ground。
有利必有弊
Everything has its advantages as well as disadvantages。
机不可失，时不再来
Don`t lose a golden opportunity, it is never foud again。
谋事在人，成事在天
Man proposes, God disposes。
人逢喜事精神爽
People are in high spirits when involved in happy events。
人生如梦
Life is but like a passing dream。
仁者见仁，智者见智
A true man loves the mountains, a wise man loves the sea。
人非圣贤，孰能无过
All men but saints are apt to make mistakes。
失败是成功之母
Failure is the mother of success。
一失足成千古恨
A single slip can cause a lasting sorrow。
有所不为，而后有所为
You must be able to refrain yourself in some matters in order toaccomplish others。
饮水不忘挖井人
Don`t forget the well – diggers when you drink from thiswell
己所不欲，勿施于人
Don`t do to others what you don`t want others to do to you 。
篇2：10个雅思写作常用加分句子
10个雅思写作常用加分句子
1. A question begging an answer centers on whether violence is more directly related to the innate characteristic of human being , or whether it is simply a manifestation of the ills of society . Determining the answer will be far from an easy proposition , but is nonetheless one that deserves careful and deliberate consideration .
需要回答的一个问题是：暴力与人类的天性联系更直接还是仅仅是社会恶习的体现?做出回答远非易事，而是值得仔细而审慎地考虑的事情。
2. From the standpoint of success , a good work ethic is no less important than an education . Success does , in fact ,depend on the total integration of both aspects .
从成功的角度来说，良好的职业道德与教育同等重要。事实上，成功的确建立在两方面完全融合的基础上。
3. The growing trend for wives to work outside the home even when their husbands are present and employed is in part a sharing of the financial burden with the husband , and in part a reflection of the need these women feel to have a measurable sense of personal worth .
越来越多的妻子到外面工作，甚至和她们的丈夫再一起工作，一方面是为了和丈夫共同承担经济重担，一方面反映了女性感到需要有可衡量的个人价值。
4. Just as honor is a prerequisite for respectability , so is unblemished character a barometer of integrity .
正如声誉是可敬的前提条件，无暇疵的品格是正直的晴雨表。
5. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and the same is true for both the appreciation of art and music .
美在观察者的眼中，美术和音乐的欣赏也是如此。
6. The direct correlation between self-esteem and success also applies to one's ability to achieve .
自尊和成功的直接联系也适用于一个人取得成就的能力。
7. Improving the plight of teachers is indeed a priority item . However , improving the overall education system is likewise no less important .
改善教师的困难处境的确是优先处理的一件事情。但是，改进整个教育系统同等重要。
8. China and United States share many things in common . Firstly , both are major world powers . Secondly , the two nations offer mutually beneficial factors for development—China with its vast potential market and labor force , and the U.S. with its advanced technology and management expertise .
中国和美国有许多共同之处。首先，两个都是世界主要强国。第二，两个国家相互提供发展的有利因素——中国拥有巨大的潜在市场和劳动力，美国拥有先进的技术和专业的管理知识。
9. The shaky truce in the Middle East bears little resemblance to the realization of ultimate peace .
中东不可靠的休战与最终实现和平的相似性很小。
10. Idleness spawns discontent , whereas overwork leads to mental and physical exhaustion .
懒惰滋生不满，而过度工作导致精神和身体的疲劳。
雅思写作：用英语写数字的六个规则
在汉英笔译和英语写作中，经常会遇到数字;哪些 场合用单词表示，哪些场合用阿拉伯数字表示，往往使人难以确定，现行语法书中也极少涉及此类问 题。
实际上，以英语为母语的国家，在书写数字时已形 成几条约定俗成的规则，现总结如下供读者参考。
一. 英美等国的出版社在排版时遵循一条原则， 即1至10用单词表示，10以上的数目用阿拉伯数字 (也有的以100为界限)，这条原则值得我们行文 时借鉴。
Eg. That table measures ten feet by five.
那个工作台长10英尺，宽5英尺。Eg. The traditional pattern of classroom experience at the college level brings the professor and a group of 20 to 30 students together for a 45-to-50-minute class session two or three times a week.
由一个教授和十名学生每周会晤两三次，每次授课时间45到50分钟，是大学程度课堂教学的传统方式。
二. 人数用阿技伯数字表示显得更简洁明了，但不定数量、近似值用单词表示较恰当。
Eg. There are 203817 voters on the electoral rolls.
选举名单上有203817个投票人。
Eg. Nearly thirty thousand voters took part in this election.
近3万个投票人参加了这次选举。
三. 遇到日期、百分比、带单位的特殊数字，通常用阿拉伯数字。
Eg. Maximum swivel of table is l20.
工作台的最大回转角度是120度。
Eg. 3rd March l991或3 March l991;
a discount of 5 percent(5%的折扣);
Eg. purchased 7 yards of carpet(买7码地毯);
Eg. ordered 2 pounds of minced steak
(订购2磅剁碎的肉)。
如果涉及的数目和单位是不定数，可用单词表示。
Eg. about five miles per hour(每小时大约5英里)
Eg. at least ten yards away(至少有10码远)
Eg. hesitated for a moment or two(犹豫了片刻)
Eg. I have warned you a hundred times(我已经警告你多少遍了)。
四. 在科技文章中，数字频繁出现，用阿拉伯数字比用单词陈述更有利。
Eg. The new engine has a capacity of 4.3 litres and a power out-put of 153 kilowatts at 4400 revolutions per minute.
这台新发动机的容积为4.3升，转速为每分钟4400转时输出功率是153千瓦。
Eg. We know that the weight of a cubic foot of air at 0oC and 76cm，pressure is 0.08l pound, or 12 cubic feet of air weigh a pound.
我们知道，1立方英尺的空气在0摄氏度和760毫米汞柱压力下，重量是0.81磅，也就是说12立方英尺空气的重量是1磅。
五. 句首不用阿拉伯数字，句末要尽量避免用阿拉伯数字。
Eg. 4th July is an important date in American history.
应该写成The fourth of July...
Eg. 19 couples took part in the ballroom dancing competition.
19对选手参加了交际舞比赛。
应改写成：Nineteen couples took...
Eg. 60%profit was a reported.
据报道有60%的利润。
应改写成：Sixty per cent profit…
Eg. 1345 kilograms force was applied at the center point of the bar.
试验时在杆的中点加1345公斤力。
可改成When tested, a force of l345 kg was applied...
六. 遇到分数，可用带连字符号的单词表示。
Eg. At 1east two-thirds of the class have had colds.
这个班至少有三分之二的学生患重感冒。
Eg. Nitrogen forms about four-fifths of the atmosphere.
氮约占大气的五分之四。
雅思写作范文：国际旅游不能促进异国文化的理解
这是个很古老的题目的翻版。有过这样一个题目： Contrary to people's belief, international tourism does not promote understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree?
范文： Every year, hundreds of millions of people move around to see a different part of the world. It is natural to assume that tourists who have seen other countries have a better knowledge of the people. That assumption also leads to the conclusion that international tourism promotes understanding between nations. How true is this? Let us examine what tourists do in a different country.
First, before going abroad, tourists are often told by their travel agents of the possible hazards which sometimes include local people. They are given example of extreme cases where victims are always the travelers. Then, when they arrive, they are immediately taken to their hotels in big coaches. They flood places where local people don't go. Their shopping, meals, entertainment all take place in secluded areas. They wear a bubble all the way. Apart from speaking to the guide and a few shop assistants, tourists rarely talk to the local people. To make it even worse, they meet pickpockets, they are ripped off by dishonest traders. Furthermore, very few local people bother to talk to them out of a genuine interest in the guests' country, people and culture. Therefore, when asked how much they know about the local people, their answer is “very little”.
If someone really wants to understand a different culture, he has to learn its language, stay there for at least a few month without wearing a bubble, learn how to curse and swear, bargain with a vegetable vendor and then he can say that he understands the people.(258 words)
简评：
这是一个已在西方得到广泛讨论的题目，普遍被接受的答案是旅游起不到促进民族、文化之间的交流与理解。
不同文化所推崇的东西也不同，这里有一个political correctness的问题。
要注意西方的时尚，如裘皮大衣、红木家具就不为青年人所推崇，参加旅游团也是退休的老头、老太太们的事。我们所追求的内容，如私人轿车、(旅行团式的)出国旅游在一些西方人看来有点“傻”。一些雅思考官就是这样的人。他们理应只评判我们的语言，但内容上能与他们的思想合拍岂不更好?
注意第二段中 first, then, to make it even worse, furthermore 的用法。
雅思写作范文：关于女子参军的问题
Although it has more or less gained the support by some people that it is good for more women to join the army, I am still prone to go along with the opposite side, convinced that women are not suitable for military service, in respect that well goes the old sayings “Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother.” Meanwhile everybody has his own hobbyhorse. It's to say individual's attitude towards certain kind of issue may vary a great deal due to the dependence of diversified attitudes on experiences of diversities. Hence, my perspectives won't be fully demonstrated otherwise than by following facts of reality.
To embark on them, it comes as the first problem that women joining military section, like barracks or other units will result in the increasing possibility of __al violence. As well known to all, women have been kept away from the war, as a consequence men were the only __group in troops. Without women insight, __al violence will be avoided because where there is no soil, there are no fruits. Should women are allowed to enter the domain where used to be dominated by men, __desire will surely aroused some men who are in demand of that to commit __al violence regardless of breaking the restricted military constrains. Remember that all cats are fond of fish
Besides __al violence, women's joining to army will certainly cause the difficulty to arrange certain kind of facilities, in particular the washroom. It could be easily to imagine what will turn up if men and women are showing together without covering to each other. Therefore, to have their own washrooms will be necessary and reasonable. It'll cost more to build two kinds of facilities than single ones within the same number of population. Government would rather invest more in weapon development than build more houses for women troopers.
Should it remains unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as reinforcement that women's physical weakness make them unable to compete with men. Battlefield is the place where the predators survive. Both experiment and statistics indicated that dislike men, women can't fulfill missions with high risk and tense due to their physical weakness. That's why it could be rarely to deploy women in the frontier along with men. The difference in body structure determines men were born to be matadors.
A single flower doesn't make a spring. Though it is possible for me to name the key facts but a few in great efforts, I can hardly release the flood of my mind within a short essay on account of the limit of both length and time. I wish I could be the forerunner putting forward some thinking while looking forward to more creative ideas as long as they make sense.
篇3：高中英语写作常用句子
一.表示缘故原由常用的英语写作句子
一)There are three reasons for this.
二)The reasons for this are as follows.
三)The reason for this is obvious.
四)The reason for this is not far to seek.
五)The reason for this is that...
六)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有驾驭,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.如许写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
二.表示利益
一)It has the following advantages.
二)It does us a lot of good.
三)It benefits us quite a lot.
四)It is beneficial to us.
五)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
三.表示坏处
一)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
二)It does us much harm.
三)It is harmful to us.
例如:
However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
四.表示紧张、必要、困难、方便、大概常用的英语写作句子
一)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth.
二)We think it necessary to do sth.
三)It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
五.表示步伐
一)We should take some effective measures.
二)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
三)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有驾驭,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.如许写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
四)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
篇4：英语写作加分替换词
有时候在英语写作中，加分往往就是那一两个词之间，来看看那些加分替换词吧!
1) 如果 if→provided that
2) 各行各业的人 all kinds of people→people from all walks of life
3) 引起，导致 lead to→contribute to
4) 人 people→individuals
5) 好的 good→desirable, benefitial
6) 坏的 bad→undesirable
7) 强调/重视 emphasize→ attach great importance to
8) 培养 develop→cultivate
9) 破坏 destroy→undermine
10) 解决 deal with →tackle /figure out
11) 普遍的 everywhere→universal
12) 明显的obvious→apparent
13) 在当今社会in the modern society→in the current society
14) 使 make→enable
15) 很多many→ numerous
16) 越来越more and more→ a increasing/mounting number of
17) 很very→extremely
18) 方面side→aspects
19) 表明 show→demonstrate, indicate
20) 大多数人 most people→ the majority of the population
21) 经常 often→frequently
22) 我相信 I believe→ from my standpoint, from my perspective
23) 必须 must→ it is a must for us to…
24) 知道 know→ be aware of
25) 因为 because→in that
26) 最后 at last→eventually
27) 然而 but→however
28) 利用 use→utilize
29) 因此/结果so→therefore
30) 部分 part→proportion
31) 提高 improve→enhance
32) 改变 change→transform
篇5：托福写作如何增加分数
托福写作如何增加分数
托福考试作文结尾段的四大天王重申立场
重申立场+总结理由
让步+重申立场
重申立场+引申扩展
引申扩展包括：
强调反对派立场会带来的后果
展望未来问题的前景
强调重要性
重申立场
“It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”
In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today’s professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.
重申立场+总结理由
“Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.”
In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.
让步+重申立场
“Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity.”
In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness.
重申立场+引申扩展
How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not, what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?
In conclusion, supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates, and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful, and probably more effective overall, to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear, honest and supportive feedback.
托福写作的高分要点整理
个人感觉得到TWE高分的关键是：语言+结构
语言：
除了总结性的话比较适合用简单句，其他的句子应该都尽量用复杂句，包括各类从句。一般来讲，无论你的句子多么复杂，考官都能毫不费力的理解你要表达的意思。(只要句子没什么大的错误)
TWE用的是学术性语言，需要展示你的英文写作能力，而复杂句正好能体现你的英语写作能力。所谓Plain English不是plain在你的句子结构，而是体现在用词的精练简洁上，即不要堆积词藻。(我发现在练习的作文里，这是一些同学的坏习惯)
如何提高语言水平：要注意平时积累精彩的词汇短语，和漂亮的句型，并学会推而广之。比如说，有一个很好的句子：
Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.
这个句子其实在不少题目中都可以使用，另外其他的一些有关科技的事物也可以替代television, 而 has a profound impact on…也可以在许多文章里使用，这就要看大家能否举一反三了。
比较重要的一点，要注意句式的多样性：、副词开头，介词短语开头，同谓语从句，分词的运用，独立主格等等。
我在另一篇帖子里曾较细致的谈到如何提高语言水平，置顶里有，就不再细讲了。可以看下面：
结构：
文章的整体结构要均衡，开头段和结尾段字数都不要太多，避免冲淡主题的内容。
我自己写五段的字数分配大致是：50, 80,80,80,40
如何开头：我开头一般三到四句话，1.背景描述 2.同义转述题目的话 3.表明观点 4.过渡引出下文。
中间的理由段的篇幅应尽量均衡，结尾时能够做到首尾呼应。
我个人还是认为无论是A or B, 还是agree or disagree的题型，都推荐五段论。并且如果不要求compare the advantages and disadvantages, 我建议中间三个理由都坚持一方面的观点，这样你的逻辑比较清晰，但用词切不可强烈，而且最后一定要让步，这一点很关键。
如何举例：
正文中的每个分论点都应该有例证支持，不一定要是for instance或者是take…as an example, 但要让人一眼就知道你是在举例。
十二个万能理由：方便convenience，情感emotion，经验experience，成就achievement，效率efficiency，经济economical，健康health，安全safety，性格personality，乐趣happiness，耐久durability，环保environmental protection
例子本身并不关键，有时因为时间紧迫，找不到恰当的例子，因而显得比较牵强。关键在于能说明你举的例子与论点有直接联系，说明你的例子如何证明论点。
再谈一下一些应该注意的问题：
模板问题：我不赞成使用模板(原创除外)，尤其是网上一些现成的模板。这对TWE获得高分没有任何好处。如果大家都用同样一个精彩的句子，在我们这样的大环境下，句子也会失色。
但是我推荐大家看一些范文，尤其是185范文。你要做的有两点，一是看一下范文是如何举例的，它论证自己观点时内在逻辑是怎样的;二是有一些平时你想表达的内容但是感觉不顺畅，你可以看一下范文是如何表达的。对于范文中的精彩句型，应该合理的digest, 稍做修改，变成你自己的语言。渐渐当你熟练掌握的时候，就会发现写作决不是简单的词汇与句子的堆积，而是你感情自然的流露。
字数问题：似乎大家写文章有种错觉，以为字数越多，越体现写作水平。其实一篇洋洋几百字，内容却空洞的文章远不如一篇短小精干，言之有物的文章。TWE考试时间只有30分钟，要在这30分钟构思并完成一篇论证充分的文章已经很不容易了。言多必失，非大牛的同学在TWE考试中写过多的字数反而大大增加了犯语法错误的机会。
我认为只要不少于250字，字数问题就不是关键因素。最佳的字数应该在250-350之间，具体多少我觉得因人而异。TWE高分的关键不是字数，而是每一句话的质量。
时间问题：一般考试的时候都写的比平时要快，所以平时30分钟能完成作文的同学考试一定会提前写完。这时候要做的是修改，修改语法错误和不地道的句子表达。(你写的时候可能因为时间紧用的句式不好)
段落格式：我还是建议用现代方式的段落格式，每一段顶头写，段与段之间空一行，这样写看起来比较清晰。
如果时间充裕，大家可以把所有题目都看一遍，列出提纲。如果没时间，也没太大关系，找一些有代表性的题目练练。考前认真的写上十几篇文章是必要的，并且要仔细修改，最好能总结出自己的模板。我不希望看到有人考前两三天再来求爹爹，告奶奶，说我作文还没怎么写，怎么办啊。那时已经晚了，大家现在就应该开始有目的的针对TWE做一些练习。
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在整体写作方面，我接触过的考生都存在以下几点难题，在某种程度上，这几点可以被认为是影响他们写作发挥的极大重要因素：一、英语基本功这是一个逐步积累的过程，包括词汇和语法，有时候是欲速而不达的，机械地记忆往往适得其反。词汇运用不当，句中动词使用混乱，句与句之间散乱不堪，逻辑性不好。
我的建议：有计划地、合理地增加词汇量。多读范文，如果考试时间临近，可以选用背诵范文的方法，虽然辛苦一点，但是还是有效的。我曾经听过一位哲学家讲过这样一个故事，说人的一生都会面对以下五个名词：爱人、家庭、工作、健康、朋友 (lover, family, career, health, friend )。打个比方，如果把这五个方面比喻成为五个球的话，只有健康是玻璃球，其他四个全都是橡皮球，即使不小心弄掉了，还是会反弹回来，而健康却是一旦落地，满盘皆输，没有任何办法补救。听过这样的故事，你不但很容易弄懂其中的道理，这几个英文单词也不会离你远去了。
二、中文式的翻译有的句子恐怕只有中国人才能理解是什么意思，究其原因就是生硬地翻译了汉语表达方式。受汉语文化影响，我们博大精深的语言在我们的头脑中已经根深蒂固，人的逻辑思维很奇怪，一旦我们每天的思维习惯已经养成，你很难在短时间内进行改变。外国人开始崇拜汉文化，开始学习我们的语言，孔子学院也应因而生，这对推广我们的文化是好的，但是托福考试是对英语的测试，只有26个字母。我见过很多有趣的中文式的翻译，比如把“黑社会”翻译成“black society”，还有把“八卦”说成“eight hang”的，等等。
我的建议：多听。当然是听英文，这里做个广告，重点推荐friends系列。学语言的顺序一定是听说读写，听就是对语境和语感的最好提高，考生可以尽可能地找一些英文的短片来欣赏，学到英语的同时也娱乐了自己，一举两得。
三、套路化痕迹明显这里的套路，就是templates.很多老师授课过程中刻意突出写作套路，学生也千方百计背诵写作套路，导致展现在阅卷官面前的作文框架甚至很多语句千篇 一律、如出一辙，从而极大地损害了得分。模板固然有用，但是针对first draft的观念，文章的亮点就看不到了。
我的建议：考生可以暂时抛开托福考试，从blog或者日记开始，每天用英文进行写作练习，尽情地把你对社会的情绪和对学校的不满写出来，发泄出来。这个练习会让你的文章逐渐符合first draft的要求。
四、通篇框架散乱这个需要在练习中逐步提高。我们在写作之前，尤其是针对task2，最重要的工作就是构思。一般来说，在3-4分钟时间之内，我们需要一个相对合理的构思和一个绝对稳定的结构，如果两者都做到了，整个文章的框架就自然很清晰了。
一般考生出现文章框架混乱有以下原因：有的是没有进行完整的审题和构思练习，文章写的内容和结构都凌乱不堪;还有的是文章结构很好，但是构思的时候过于匆忙或者紧张，论证不够完整，举例也不合理。这些也是一般中国考生在考试中最常出现的问题。
随着社会的发展，TOEFL也随着时代改革，完善了对一项语言听说读写四项基本能力的测试。更重要的，ETS重新建立了自己在英语培训和测试方面的权威性。
议论文增加了写作题目的范围和深度，但是因为题库的存在，我觉得有利于考生在有限的时间发掘自己写作上更多的潜力。新增加的综合integrated作文，需要我们针对文章作者的各个观点进行分析，应用阅读方面的技巧来找出文章的脉络，掌握一定技巧后，甚至猜测出之后的听力文章可能针对的观点，在这里，认真做好笔记是很重要的。三分钟的时间既要阅读，还要记录文章重点，根据我的经验，iBT后期改革之后，如果我们可以在笔记技巧上多下点功夫，在三分钟之内完成以上任务不是一件难事。
同学们，写作的乐趣原本是无穷无尽的，否则这个世界上就不会有那么多作家，每天闲云野鹤一样地快乐了。我们每一个人都有成为作家的潜力，写作需要瞬间的灵感，合理的构思，当然最重要的就是坚持下去的决心。遗憾的是考试的时候这些是不适用的，在短短的30分钟时间内，恐怕只有几分钟的时间来思考。这一点ETS也承认自己的愚蠢。或许，这也是开始改变TOEFL写作概念的初衷。
托福写作例子：建一个社区商业中心
To Build a Community Shopping Center – YES
Topic: It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Since industrialization makes it possible to manufacture large quantities of goods, going shopping has become fairly recreational. Furthermore, transportation keeps everything going easily. (Furthermore, transportation keeps everything running smoothly.) (1) (“running smoothly”) (A) Shopping centers have entered the language and life of every citizen. When it comes to whether it is good to build a shopping mall near your apartment, different people have different views. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of setting a shopping center near where we live outweigh the disadvantages.
Many people argue that setting a shopping center nearby ushers in more noise, more traffic congestion and more security problems. They would rather go farther to do shopping than let all these bad effects go around in their own community. (They would rather go out of their way to shop than allow these bad elements enter their community.) (“go out of their way”) (B)
Although their concern is quite reasonable, it can be avoidable if we handle the center well. Building a shopping center near where we live may have lots of existent and potential advantages. They go as follows. (Building a shopping center where we live has a lot of potential advantages, such as the following.) (2) (“potential advantages”) (C)
First, it provides more convenience and less time wasted in traffic. (First, it provides more convenience and reduces time wasted in traffic.) We can buy whatever we need on the way home leisurely, instead of having to write the task down on a schedule and drive through the heavy traffic to get there. (We can buy whatever we need leisurely on the way home, instead of having to jot the task down on a schedule and drive through the heavy traffic to get there.)
Second, it helps improve the economy of the local community as well as that of the whole city. Just imagine, another shopping center means another competitor. If they want to survive out of such demanding business, they must provide better service and goods of higher quality. (If they want to survive in such a demanding market, they must provide higher quality goods and services.) As a result, the community and even the city can develop economically.
What's more, it offers job opportunities for both adults and students. For adults, especially those who are unemployed, they can earn money to support themselves. For students, they can apply for part-time jobs, and thus get experience and earn some extra money. (For students, they can apply for part-time jobs, gain work experience, and earn extra money.)
If it is up to me to decide whether a shopping center should be built near my apartment, I prefer to build it. (If it were up to me to decide whether or not to build a shopping center near my apartment, I would decide to build it.) (3) (“If it were up to me”) (D) This is because I am the sort of person who enjoy conveniecnce and happincess of contacting with people. (This is because I am the type of person who enjoys convenience and contact with people.) If the shopping center is successfully run, I believe that everyone who lives around will get great benefits from it. (If the shopping center is successfully run, I believe the community will benefit greatly from it.)
II. Editorial Comments
1. Original: Furthermore, transportation keeps everything going easily. Reviswed: Furthermore, transportation keeps everything running smoothly.
英语中没有 “going easily” 这种说法。这里，作者要表达的意思是“事情进展的比较顺利”，我们可以用 “running smoothly”。看以下两个例子：
..Although the car crashed just last week, the mechanic was able to fix it quickly and now it is running smoothly.
..Although we made some measurement mistakes in our first science experiment, our second one is running smoothly.
2. Original: Building a shopping center near where we live may have lots of existent and potential advantages. They go as follows. Revised: Building a shopping center where we live has a lot of potential advantages, such as the following.
为了逻辑通顺和语言联贯，由such as 或者 as follows引导的所要列举的一系列事情，应该和提示部分(some advantages… such as…)放在同一个句子里。以下是几种常用的表列举的结构：
..After we moved into our new apartment, I had to buy many new household goods, such as the following: toilet paper, cooking utensils, cleaning supplies, etc.
..I am in full support of the new legislation for the following reasons.
..My reasons for studying abroad are as follows.
..My objections to your decision are listed below.
3. Original: If it is up to me to decide whether a shopping center should be built near my apartment, I prefer to build it. Revised: If it were up to me to decide whether or not to build a shopping center near my apartment, I would decide to build it.
注意，if引导的条件从句一定要用虚拟语态。例如：
If I were a magician, I would not need to study to get a perfect score on the TOEFL.
虚拟语态表示与事实相反的动作或状态。通常在“if”、“if that”、 “though”、 “lest”、“unless”、 “except”、“until”等等引导的从句中，也要用虚拟语态。
例如： “If there were no honey, the flowers and the bees would have never met.”
III. Alternative
A. Other ways to express the meaning of “running smoothly”:
(i) “without a glitch” – Example: The computer program ran all night long without a glitch.
(ii) “going as planned” – Example: The bank robbers thought that everything was going as planned, until all of a sudden the police stormed in and arrested them.
(iii) “keep [ object ] on track” – Example: Although the young students acted wild in class, the teacher knew how to keep them on the tracks. (“tracks” – in reference to train tracks keeping the train moving in the expected or appropriate direction, as opposed to derailing off course)
B. Definition of “out of one’s way” – to inconvenience oneself to do something that is not necessary or required. Example: The teacher was so dedicated to his students that he went out of his way to tutor them in the weekends. Other ways to express “out of one’s way”:
(i) “go above and beyond” – Example: Although the project was not part of his work responsibility, he went above and beyond his duty to make sure it was a success.
(ii) “bend over backwards” – Example: She was so committed in her work as a customer service professional that she would bend over backwards to make sure her clients were satisfied.
C. The expression “potential advantages” refers to a favorable outcome. Other ways to express the meaning of “potential advantages”:
(i) “the good thing is” – Example: The good thing is, there is now less crime in the city.
(ii) “upside” – Example: The upside to the construction is the increase in jobs in the local community.
D. The expression “if it were up to me” indicates the speaker has an opposing view or opinion to the view that is being referred to. Other ways to express the meaning of “if it were up to me”:
(i) “if I had my way” – Example: If I had my way, we would all be on vacation right now, instead of working into the weekend.
(ii) “if I had my choice” – Example: I need to work to support my family, but if I had my choice, I would be a full time student.
篇6：中考作文指导：写作加分技巧
中考作文指导：写作加分技巧
写人，免不了要描写人的动作，因为一个人的思想、品质、性格和作风，往往能通过行为动作来表现。如同学们学过的《金色的鱼钩》一课中，有这样一段描写老红军的话：“他坐在那里捧着搪瓷碗，嚼着几根草根和我们吃剩的鱼骨头，嚼了一会儿，就皱着眉头硬咽下去。”
这段话描写了红军老班长连续五个动作。用“坐、捧、嚼、皱、咽”五个准确的动词，写出了老班长在二万五千里长征途中，为照料小战友、日夜操劳、精神疲乏的神态。“捧”字，突出了老班长对那几根草根和“我们”吃剩的鱼骨头的珍惜：“嚼”、“皱”、“咽”三个动词，写出了草根和鱼骨头难以咽下以及老班长饥饿的程度。通过这些动作的描写，表现了红军老班长在艰苦的条件下，顽强抗争的坚毅性格和舍己为人的崇高品质。
怎样描写人物的动作?
(一)描写人物动作，最重要的是注意观察。在日常生活中要格外留心，观察周围各种人形形色色的行为动作，特别要注意不同的人的动作特征，抓住特征仔细地反复地进行观察。
如下面例段：
1、小丽抿着嘴，弓着腰，蹑手蹑脚地，一步一步慢慢地靠近它。靠近了，靠近了，又见她悄悄地将右手伸向蝴蝶，张开的两个手指一合，夹住了粉蝶的翅膀。小丽高兴得又蹦又跳。
2、他弯着腰，篮球在他的手下前后左右不停地拍着，两眼溜溜地转动，寻找“突围”的'机会。突然他加快了步伐，一会左拐，一会右拐，冲过了两层防线，来到篮下，一个虎跳，转身投篮，篮球在空中划了一条漂亮的弧线后，不偏不倚地落在筐内。
捉蝴蝶、打篮球，都是我们常见的活动，有的甚至是同学们亲自参加过的。但写起来却不具体。上述两段描写，由于作者观察仔细，把捉蝴蝶，打篮球的动作、神态写得栩栩如生。
(二)是要抓住最能突出人物性格、身份特点的动作描写。
请看下列例段：
1、他50多岁了。戴着一副高度近视眼镜。他战战兢兢取下眼镜，用衣服的下摆随手擦了擦镜片。“嗯嗯……”他刚要讲话，忽然想起了什么，手忙脚乱地在盘子里找了找，又匆匆往口袋里掏了掏，掏出了一盒火柴，这才放心地又“嗯嗯”两声，站直身子，用特别响亮的声音说：“现在开始看老师做实验!”
2、教室里打得乌烟瘴气。毛老师气咻咻地站在门口，他头上冒着热气，鼻子尖上缀着几颗亮晶晶的汗珠，眉毛怒气冲冲地向上挑着，嘴却向下咧着。看见我们，惊愕地眨了眨眼睛，脸上的肌肉一下子僵住了，纹丝不动，就像电影中的“定格”。我们几个也都像木头一样，钉在那里了。
3、老人的双手很灵巧。一个泥人在他手里诞生，只要几分钟。看他又拿起一团泥，先捏成圆形，再用手轻轻揉搓，使它变得柔软起来，光滑起来。接着，又在上面揉搓，渐渐分出了人的头、身和腿。他左手托住这个泥人，右手在头上面摆弄着，不一会儿，泥人戴上了一顶偏偏的帽子。
上述三段都抓住了最能突出人物特点的动作。
例一写的是一位高度近视的老教师。通过“用衣服的下摆擦镜片”、“手忙脚乱地在盘子里找”、“匆匆地往口袋里掏”等动作的描写，写出了一个高度近视、动作不利索且有点“糊涂”的老教师的特点;例二，主要抓住性格暴躁的人生气时，面部表情动作的特点来描写的。如：“气咻咻地站在门口”、“头上冒着热气”、“眉毛怒气冲冲向上挑”、“嘴向下咧着”、“肌肉纹丝不动”等，把生气时的面部表情写得生动而逼真。例三则是抓住捏泥人的动作特点，写出了一位心灵手巧的老艺人形象。
(三)是要准确而恰当地运用动词且不重复。
读读下列例段，看看各段中带点的词的作用。
他左脚尖顶住起跑线，膝盖一弯，稳稳地蹲着。两手就像两根木柱插在地上，整个身体微微前倾，那架势，就像一只起飞的雄鹰。
这短短的几句话中，用了“顶、弯、蹲、插、倾、飞等”6个动词，把赛场上运动员起跑的预备姿式描写得准确而逼真。
她挤进大门，把担子撂下地;走上前去，将地上的草揽好，用膝头压着，俯下身，双手使劲勒紧草腰子，提起来，扔到院墙角落。
段中带点的这些动词用得非常贴切。写出了一个能干、利索、有力气，干活熟练的农村姑娘的形象。
她看见奶奶站起来，双手抓着锅盖向上揭。吃力地揭了几次，才稍稍揭开一条缝。一股浓烟从灶口冲出来，差点熏着奶奶的脸。奶奶随便用袖子拂了拂布满皱纹的脸，又摇摇头，自言自语地说：“老了，不中用啰!”
这段话描写的是一位老奶奶干家务活的动作。用“揭、冲、熏、拂、摇”等动词，准确而恰当地写出了老人干活动作的特点。上述各例说明，描写人物的动作必须选用准确、恰当的动词，才能具体形象地写出人物的动态形象。
篇7：英语写作加分和扣分点介绍
英语写作加分和扣分点介绍
英语作文一般都是15-20分，你想指导你的分数被扣在哪些地方了吗?
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。
一：先看一下扣分点：
1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。
2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的`作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;
4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.
二：加分点
除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分
很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。
★ 初中作文评分标准
★ 初一作文评分标准
★ 初中英语作文评分
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